That was a beautiful chapter.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
[Report This]Date: January 23 2015 11:51 am
yaaay! i've missed this story - so glad that you updated! i really really like this story and look forward to hear why the humans are hunting them. thanks for theupdate!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: January 21 2015 08:40 am
awe thats sweet one of the captives Selena is Falcons mate. But I want to find out why they were captured in the first place & the reason they were holding them there.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2015 11:20 pm
NOOOOO PLEASEEEE DONT KILL HIM OFF WAHHHHHHH
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 09:02 am
I like the story. I just think the phase in and out gets confusing. I found myswlf consfused on when they were in human form and when they weren't
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 05:18 am
great update cant wait for more
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2015 06:50 pm
Interesting plan they came up with. Hope they can pull it off without too many problems. Great update!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2014 04:48 am
This is very interesting Ilyana has only her father who is getting close to joining her mom who she lost 15yrs ago b/c no matter how much he loves her he misses & longs for his mate. Then fate step in the form of her mate her father tries to run away with her then realizes he reacted to hastily which intailed issued a challenge he had to answer which caused him his life which kinda of devastated her although she knew it was inevitable.now they are faced with giving in to each other her over coming her grief & him fight his wolf & base nature to give her time & not hurt her. They start communicating more & strengthing their bond when another pack is approaching their land turns out to be revealing in more ways than one . She learns she's preggers with triplets & one of them is the mate of one of the other packs. This is very interesting keep up the great work
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 03:58 am
This is very interesting Ilyana has only her father who is getting close to joining her mom who she lost 15yrs ago b/c no matter how much he loves her he misses & longs for his mate. Then fate step in the form of her mate her father tries to run away with her then realizes he reacted to hastily which intailed issued a challenge he had to answer which caused him his life which kinda of devastated her although she knew it was inevitable.now they are faced with giving in to each other her over coming her grief & him fight his wolf & base nature to give her time & not hurt her. They start communicating more & strengthing their bond when another pack is approaching their land turns out to be revealing in more ways than one . She learns she's preggers with triplets & one of them is the mate of one of the other packs. This is very interesting keep up the great work
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 03:57 am
Kane for the love of his son allowed himself and his pack mates to disrespect Baden and his mate. Just shameful! How does Ilyana out rank Baden? I am going to have fo reread the story.
Author's Response:
These werewolves are more wolf than human and in real wolf packs the alpha female is the dominant one in terms of pack relations and decisions. Male Alphas are the brawn and Female Alphas the brain... does that help?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 26 2014 04:32 pm
*whistles* now that quickie was hot, hot, hot! hahahaha - i can only imagine the guys faces when they walked intothe den however Yana and Baden better watch out for Kane - he didnt seem discourage at all.
i'm really liking this story - look forward to more!!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2014 10:46 am
i understand now why Baden took Yana the way he did the first time - he couldnt control his wolf and this time around he was honest, telling her that his wolf was fighting to him to be with her. by being submissive to Yana, Baden showed another side of himself and he's a carrying mate - i like this story! keep it up!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed
[Report This]Date: July 25 2014 10:41 am
a very very good start! thanks for posting your story!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2014 10:34 am
Oh oh, can't wait to see what happens next.... Is this new pack peaceful or are they going to challenge them?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 07:18 am
love it
Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 04:03 am
Great update, I can't wait to see who is invading their territory.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 03:08 am
awww man you cant stop there!!!!!! more please..............
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2014 04:25 am
im really enjoying this! i hope she comes around soon and gives him a chance.
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2014 04:20 am
whoa!!! that was intense!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2014 04:04 am
He's letting her be dominant? Oooooooooooooooooo!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2014 03:48 am
I feel so bad for Yana, whike I feel no sympathy for Baden. Make him work your heart Yana,
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2014 03:51 pm
So different, wow. I like this story it's bittersweet. I hope Yana can accept him, I know it would take me two lifetimes, hell never to get over losing my dad.
Please post soon, this story is one of a kind. Love it :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2014 09:39 am
I love your story, please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2014 06:40 am
i love it keep going
Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2014 07:26 am