Title: Chapter 2

very nice!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

Continue writing your story. Please do not allow other opinions by non-writers to sway your decision on rather or not to continue. I would like to see your vision play out. I am reading this story and so are many others.

Best

Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 5

I not a fan of all the affairs  and weak morals going on in this story. Regardless of the time this story takes place, it's never okay to be the side chick. 

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please RATE YOU GUYS! Just wanna know how I'm doing!

Reviewer: TheHistorian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nona and Gaius have known each other a year past....so Cornelia has a good idea about it, since he won't give her children

Reviewer: TheHistorian Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 2

I liked the way that we found out her name. I hope Cornelia doesn't find out about Gaius and Nona too soon. How long has Gaius known Kora?

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I loved Spartacus when it was on. I'm definitely enjoying your story so far, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Do we ever learn the "slave girl's" name?

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 11:14 pm



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