Reese sleeping with gwen is gonna bite him in the ass when Charlie finds out after he nearly slept with her. By the way when are you updating your other story?
Reviewer: traccie Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 02:46 am
Rut-roh! Not going to be good for Mr. Resse and Ms. Charlie. Good story, please continue.
Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 02:40 am
Great update!!! Reese tore it up!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 08:51 pm
That was sexy! That Gwen chick is a dumbass.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 08:45 pm
Well he tried to keep his cool and not hurt her feelings but she wouldn't shut up and now her feelings are all hurt. If a dude tells you from the jump that you are only a f*cktoy don't get your hopes up that your pu$$y is somehow different and will get him on lockdown. Obviously Gwen he has been putting it to you for awhile and he still wasn't committed to you. Now the question is what is this dumb girl about to do to Charlie or Reese. Have to admit I drooled and was in rapture when he said "Charlie is mine!" Loved it!! (In falsetto)
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 03:47 pm
Nice update. Am really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 11:52 am
You go girl!!! No easy cookie for you sir no matter how freaking mouth watering fine you are!
(I would've already give in, lawl)
So he's a mechanician? She'll have to go get her car when he's not on working(I see awkward silence moment).
Can't wait for an update I can already see the girls in town will hate her because she has Reese full attention, hahaha.
Unless she loves playing at mouse and cat XD
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2014 03:39 pm
How old is she? I need to re-read in case I missed it. Reese is very clear about his feelings. He does not beat around the bush. I like that.
I'm hoping she doesn't run hot and cold with him. We'll see. But then again, he is a stranger. They've known each for a minute, and I use "known" loosely.
Waiting to see how this plays out.It'll be interesting to see the town's reaction when or if they become a couple.
I'll try not to be a nuisance, but this is so good, I want updates, all day, every day. hee
Good job, Chica.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review! I know it's frustrating when one minute she's all into it and the next she's crying and telling him to leave. But Charlie is hard to understand. She's never had a man in her life before so she doesn't know how to act or what to do. She's scared of falling in love.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 09:19 pm
Wow that was hot but its like they took two steps forward & 5 back can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 10:24 am
Damn...that was so steamy, I want to kill Charlie for stoping him. I mean I'm not that kinda girl either but damn if I would of stop him from putting it on me. That man is sexy as hell, lard I got chills. I can't wait for more of this update soon.
Author's Response:
Lol I'm glad you enjoyed their scene together!
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 06:17 am
Reese need to get it together.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 05:18 am
Please update soon love to know what happen next for the two of them
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 04:16 am
What is wrong with her!?
Author's Response:
Charlie has never had a man pay as much attention to her as Reese does and it scares her, so she runs from him.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 03:39 am
Charlie you are really stupid, Reese is no longer a stranger you broke ke bread with him. Hell he fixed yoir car. Charlie is running scared from her intense attraction to that fine Reese. Love Reese even be ause he only had eyes foor Charlie when that harlot of a waitress was oogling him. So awesome! !
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy Reese as much as I do haha! And Charlie isn't necessarily stupid, she's just not as easy as all the other girls I'm sure Reese is used to. Charlie's been an orphan and had to work extra hard to be where she is so she never really had time for a personal life, and so she's not trying to jump in bed with the first gorgeous guy she meets.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 01:20 am
i like it so far keep it up
Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2014 06:23 pm
Love the story. Can't wait for more updates.
Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2014 09:36 am
I love this already, I like Charlie and I'm glad she's giving him a hard time. Make him work for it, because it shouldn't be that easy to get the goods especially, in that racist ass town. I can't wait to read more, update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I agree with you completely that Charlie should have her guard up, especially in the beginning. And I'm glad you caught on to what I'm trying to do as far as making Reese work for her "goods." :)
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 02:39 am
NO! Charlie do not need to 'stop assuming things' mainly because she is living in a very racist town where she knows no one. it is very practical to protect one self in situations like this. The fact that Reese is getting offended because she is not giving him the time of day is very insensitive and insulting. he needs to be a little more understanding and work hard to prove himself to be a good protector for Charlie in this racist back ass ward town!
Reviewer: high self esteem Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 08:45 pm
Good chapter! Charlie needs to stop assuming things and give him a chance
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I agree with you that Charlie should stop assuming things but considering all of the factors that make her uncomfortable, (attractive male, racist town) she thinks it's easier to protect herself by assuming the worst of things.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 06:02 pm
Love the story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you like it!!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 05:31 pm
Charlie is working my last nerve! She is jumping to conclusion like a frog jumps leap pads! He was visiting his grandmother. Lord, someone slap that child, she is irking me! I am officially team Reese!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I understand your frustrations but since she is bee uncomfortable and vulnerable in her new surroundings, she has her guard up completely and it's extremely difficult for her to trust a white male that's interested in her when she's surrounded by racist people that despise her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 02:54 pm
She really likes to jump to conclusions. She should try waiting for more information before making assumptions. Charlie is an interesting character. I can't wait to see what comes out of her mouth next.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! In the beginning Charlie will be very gaurded and untrusting (for obvious reasons) but eventually she will let her guard down and stop thinking so negatively. (Spoiler alert!)
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 02:05 pm
Just discovered this story and really like it.
Please update again soon.
Reviewer: valis202 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 08:59 am
I really like this story. Great job!!! These two make quite a nice pair. I really like the guy character as well. He seems so gentlemenly:DDD
Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 07:52 am
Love myself a southern man. And I definitely love this story. Love the description,love the characters. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 04:16 am