Reviews For Lovers' Dance
Title: Chapter 1

I was wondering why I haven't seems any updates lately. I look forward to your return.  Love this story!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ihave been looking for updates of this story for aver a week now. I decided to go back and read the last chapters again and found your messages in regards to your story. This story is so good it is the only one that I am reading on the chambers. I will be checking daily fr your return. I would like to thank you for a great read it is hard to find at times.

Reviewer: black girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 03:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

If you r planning to publish this story, please make it available on amazon.com.au (Australia) As well as a printed version if possible simply because one cannot buy directly thru amazon .com w/o a US mailing address due to copyright regulation.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 03:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Please return to the chamber soon.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed reading  your story and thank you for allowing me the opportunity to be entertained by Matt and Madi.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

K. Carr, I hope the wait will not be too long...I Love Love Love this story...

Reviewer: Adriana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I hope we get to see part 2 soon in whatever form you decide to publish.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Man this truly sucks because I was in the middle of re-reading this, because it was that good!  I just wished there was some sort of notice that you were planning to pull it down I would have read it more quickly and it's  shame that others that have discovered this sweet tale they won't get the opportunity to finish reading it.



Author's Response:

Once again, apologies for the suddenness of the removal of my story. I seem to have problems posting on the shout box so I was unable to notify those who were following Lovers' Dance. I will work as quickly as possible to finish Part 2 and return to posting. Thanks for your patience. 

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

the more i read this story the more i love it now dat dey are both sacrificing der families  it time to test der faith in each other and der relationship

Reviewer: glamour Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 10:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

now dats a good way of keeping someone hangin love it 

Reviewer: glamour Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 10:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

I hate Matt's parents. Omg!

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!!!! This is an AMAZING story...BRAVO!!! I Truly hope you continue to add new chapters...You are a gifted writter... Thanks for sharing your gift with us.


Adriana

Reviewer: Adriana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 1

Had to read these updates a 2nd time and your description of Madi and Matt's feeling were so incredible.  I was shaking with hurt right along with Madi during her family confrontation and crushed for Matt during his ride back to the hotel.  You actually scared me with his line about wanting to hurt Madi because people can do stupid things when hurt.  

This is truly one of the best fiction I've read.

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 02:37 am

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I really enjoyed the update.  It was really worth the short wait.  I  have to say you are an amzing writer.  I never have any idea where your story is going to go, but  I appreciate where you take each time. I love the way you pull me into these characters to the point that I feel each emotion.  I was balling when Matt  was hurt by her.  It was something that he had not exerienced and it crushed him.  I was angry at her family for  being so jealous that they would talk about her  like she had done something wrong by dating a rich white man.   I burst out laughing when Jenny told Madi to stop trying to sell wolf tickets because she couldn't she fight. I felt the hurt when Jenny was so jealous that she didn't have Madi's back, after accepting a check from Madi to pat for education. You had me on a rollercoaster ride.  I felt every emotion that these characters experienced.. K Carr be very proud of your talent.  It is AMAZING writing.

 

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

I have to say this:  You can pick your nose, you can pick your friends, but you cannot pick your family.  Your family is your family.  

Now Madi doesn't have the perfect family, but neither does Matt.  If you will recall, his parents are ignoring her existance and think that Madi is just a passing fad for Matt so they don't have to acknowledge her.  Grumps told the poor woman that she's nothing but a whore after Matt's money and if she gets pregnant the Bradley's will take the baby from her.  Even though the brother has come around, he wasn't too thrilled about the relationship either and they have had a whole lot more time to accept what's going on than Madi's family. They only have a week.

Now Matt has stood up to his family and let them know in no uncertain terms that Madi and He are together.

Don't discount Madi and the interaction with her family just yet.  She did ask him to come and meet them which is a big thing in itself.  She promised to protect him and she's keeping her promise.

She stood up to Jamal when he told her that Matt would never marry her.  Why get upset about that since Matt's family basically said the same thing.

As for Aunt Cleo, she can't wrap her mind around no rich white man wanting her neice for any GOOD reason.  She's still eying him suspiciously, but she hasn't really had time to truly find out yet what a good guy Matt is.  

Once he talks to the Uncle and asks for her hand, I think the family will view Matt in a different light.

Yes they are moochers, but we all have those in the family.  I know I do.  I just tell them to back off and Madi is getting there with her family.  Yeah she helped the cousin with college, but she did stress to her to get a job.  

Madi isn't stupid.  She's not blind.  She knows what's going on, but she's willing to put up with it because...hey they're her family...the good, the bad and the ugly.

Some want this story to rush back across the pond because of Madi's family, back to the Bradleys as if they're standing there with open arms to greet and accept their relationship.   Yeah, right.  LOL

What I like about this story is that the characters aren't all good or bad just like real relatives.  Yes Jenny is a pain and Aunt Cleo has her issues, but I do believe that they love Madi and if those other relatives come and try to start some crap about Madi and Matt, I can see them banding together.

You know the story.  I can talk about my family but you better keep your mouth shut.  

This is a great story and Ms. Carr is doing it her way and that's the only way it's going to be authentic.  You go, Ms. Carr.  We're enjoying the ride!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow madi in her element!  Love her taking charge for once and her quick thinking to save the day.  Matt flustered is so cute!  And Jamal can just shut up.  His so called concern is his own inherent racism surfacing.   The whole family is more concerned with finding ways to drain madi of her last dollar then her wellbeing.  And they think Matt is using her!  Maybe they should have a closer look at themselves at what a bunch of users they are.   Hopefully now that madi has developed a backbone and a take charge attitude she would put her family straight and about time she did it.  Can't wait for madi and Matt to return to England.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 04:05 am

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ok now that i have picked myself up off the floor from laughing so hard, this story is absolutely my favorite on the board. I can't wait to read more - publish and I will definitely purchase several copies - you are an excellent writer.

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 02:28 am

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Love this story I'm addicted to Matty and Madi, lol. Love the alpha male in him and the innocence in her. Can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2014 12:05 am

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Hi guys.  Since there were no cast pics provided, the girl in this video is what I envision Madi would look like:  link

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

Did Matt have something to do with Dante not going home for Thanksgiving?  Hmmm.  Also I think he'll be in for a rude awakening thinking that he can just go to her Aunts, flash his smile and win them over.  Not going to happen.  Also I got the feeling that he thinks that she'll come back a changed woman once he works his magic on her family.  He's assuming a lot.  Matt had better be careful with his control issues or she will rebel.  He doesn't want her interacting with any other male besides himself and that's just not realistic.  Can't wait for the visit to America.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great update as always! 

First I think that Dougie is up to no good.  He wants to move in on Matt's territory for sure.  I think he showed up like he did to catch Madi off guard and because she's a nice girl and he's offering her friendship, she didn't see him for the cad that he is.  Matt will have to deal with him for sure.

Now even though I understand him trying to push Madi into therapy, I don't think having the doctor basically lying in wait for a surprise attack was the best move.  Even with him forcing her to face the doctor, Madi will not change her behavior until she is ready to change.  No matter how much he loves her, not matter what he does, until she make it up in her mind and accepts the help she's offered, then no good will come of it.  It's no different than forcing someone into rehab.  If they aren't ready for change, then the behavior won't change or at least not for long.  You see that she talked to the doctor not about her problems, but about the Nutcracker.  LOL

I can't wait for the Thanksgiving visit.  Madi accused Matt of being like her Aunt Cleo.  Did her aunt also try to force her to face her issues?  Did Madi stop going to therapy as soon as she was of age and no longer needed parental consent?  We know how that works; as long as she's not a danger to herself or someone else, no one can make her do anything.

I also wonder if one of the other reasons she fled the US for England was to get away from Aunt Cleo and her demands that she get help.  Hmmmm.  Now she has Matt making demands. LOL  She may have used the ballet as an excuse to run.

I also wonder what is going on with those papers she was signing.  I wonder why she didn't have someone to look them over.  Is she that trusting?

As always K Carr, we are all waiting anxiously for the next installment.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 1

She doesn't realize lunch  is a bad idea.  Matt took the guys card from her.  McGregor is up to no good.  World III will begin the moment Matt finds out Madi had lunch with McGregor. 

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 07:00 pm

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Chapter 54 : wow what a turn around.  Boy does Matt have a rival to tackle.   Madi is starting to take things in stride which is good and the way she handled the situation with Matt was truly remarkable.  I love the way she asserts her independence by not allowing Matt to pay for her therapy.  Glad though she is having therapy and from the sounds of it she is in good hands.  Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Sicily Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 11:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

I can't get enough of this story, I love how they met, and how their relationship has so many different layers. Most interracial stories I have read are filled with just sex  and I love how this author has given us an unique story filled with humour and alot of serious issues such as rascism, class, cultural differences between the main characters etc. I love Matt's character in particular he is an alpha male who knows what he wants and right now he wants to take care of Madi and get her the professional help she needs. Last update I was scared that he.might have given up on her scraziness but I'm glad he is sticking around for the long haul.  The  love he has for her is endearing and genuine. I think we all need a Matt in our lives wouldn't you agree haha..

P.s Has everyone else also noticed that they didn't use a condom?  There could be a possible pregnancy looming me thinks lol.

Reviewer: muakib Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 10:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

I can't get enough of this story, I love how they met, and how their relationship has so many different layers. Most interracial stories I have read are filled with just sex  and I love how this author has given us an unique story filled with humour and alot of serious issues such as rascism, class, cultural differences between the main characters etc.

I love Matt's character in particular he is an alpha male who knows what he wants and right now he wants to take care of Madi and get her the professional help she needs. Last update I was scared that he might have given up on her scraziness but I'm glad he is sticking around for the long haul.  The love he has for her is endearing and genuine. I think we all need a Matt in our lives wouldn't you agree haha.

P.s Has everyone else also noticed that they didn't use a condom?  There could be a possible pregnancy looming me thinks lol.

Reviewer: muakib Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 10:07 am



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