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Title: The Introduction

At first I thought Ian was into James, but now I think Ian is just not into Tiffany and Tiff needs to take a step back and regroup, bc she is starting to come off as childish and desperate.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 3

oh my gosh you have the best college years. sounds like it

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 06:34 pm

Title: The Introduction

Let me start off by saying that I appreciate you sharing a little piece of your life with us. 

That being said, I can't finish this story. 

I just really don't like the whole "I don't like black girls/boys" thing. I really don't. 

I always side eye people that make such brazen statements like that because to me, you generalize an entire people. 

For example, *James and his whole "I'm not attracted to black girls". Umm, ok. He's willing to not even explore the possibility with you because he thinks he's not attracted. He's already written you off and tons of other girls over a skin color. It's ridiculous and I wouldn't be friends with someone like that because they don't respect all that I am with is a friend, female, and above all a black person. 

I also can't support people who say that they don't date people of their own race. For reasons stated above, you're writing off an entire population. You have it set that you won't date anyone that looks like you but what if that one person that really gets you and treats you well is black and not white, asian, non-black hispanic, etc.

My thing is that I can't, in good conscience, support people who say "I' mnot attracted to..." or "I don't usually go for..." because that tells me you're too into separating people based on color. I'm all about dating whomever you want but not at the expense of excluding people on their melanin content.

In any case, I wish you luck on your developing relationship with *Ian. Happy writing.  

Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 05:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm already likeing this story so much :) Update soon .

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 06:01 pm

Title: The Introduction

this seems sweet...please continue

Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 2

This is so sweet!!! And this is really your story? Gotta love a guy who doesn't give in to temptation when 'the girls' (as I affectionately call mine) are on full display. A guy did the same thing to me once and I was hooked!!! Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 04:29 am

Title: Chapter 2

So, this story is like your way of rehashing/analyzing/reliving encounters with a guy who you are not now actually with? And then getting Chamber sisters to tell you what they think, like a big juicy sleepover? Interesting.

Here's my two cents: nothing I have read makes me see that Ian is interested in your heroine. 

The thing about the stories on here, although fictional, is that they are true to human nature. There are principles deep in each story, which can be applied to real life.

One case in point, is that if a guy is interested in a girl, he will let her know, very clearly before she can get away, or get scooped up by someone else. A man will act, putting plans into action to obtain what he desires. 

So you might think your real life "Ian" is hot, but I don't see anything more than basic politeness on his part towards you. Unless, this is just the first of various encounters you intend to post.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 05:10 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Ian is a asshole!!  If Tiffany would allow it Ian would use her for sex. The man ignores Tiffany and yet she is still trying to win his attention. Why? I feel bad for Tiffany learning that jer fsther didn't want her snd her brother's were only half siblings. But she needs to quit being stupid, before she gets herself raped. What is Ian's deal? I don't like him!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 12:12 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Is anything happening because I just don't see it progressing.  I hope he wasn't asking for her roommates number and does James like Ian or secretly likes Tiffany.  Curious that James doesn't have a girlfriend.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 05:03 am

Title: The Introduction

OK start.

Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 05:20 pm

Title: The Introduction

Interesting start.

Author's Response:

interesting indeed.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 04:33 am

Title: The Introduction

I really like it. I like the development, Ian and Tiffany not hooking up straight away etc. Looking forward to more :-)

Author's Response:

thank you! :)

Reviewer: Loop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 01:03 am

Title: The Introduction

I am intrigued do please continue.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 02:49 pm

Title: The Introduction

I would definitely continue reading this. Keep going and long chapters would be great. 

Reviewer: Kym98 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 11:06 am

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