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Title: Chapter 1

Im hooked. Cant wait for the next chapter!



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Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 05:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! Can't wait to see how this story develops.

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Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 05:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

This is really good! I look forward to reading more soon! :)



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Reviewer: AJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 09:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Very good start. I am definitely looking forward to more of this story. I like the names Breezy and Phoenix. I usually will track but not read stories with only one chapter because I'm get disappointed when an author never updates them. But I had to read since it was set in Louisiana, so please continue this story. Thank you for sharing :-)



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Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like this story so please continue.   So Breezy was dated a man who had a wife and ran away from everyone else her life when she left Baton Rouge. Why did she feel the need to run? It had to be more than her finding out that she was the side piece. 



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 08:39 pm


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