Ok. This was transitional of a sort. Breezy now knows his marital status. This is also Jace's chance to start over and make his case and state his intentions going forward into the future with Breezy. However, all this can happen after the explanations. I need to know!!!
And what did Paul mean Jace has done something else?
Wating for more......
Good stuff!
Author's Response:
I love love love a reader that pays attention to details. Yeah, this is sort of a transitional period for Jace. He knows that he wants Breezy but he's gotta figure out a way to get her to trust him again.
As for Breezy, well, she still isn't ready to let Jace in on her life. She just wants to get this wedding overwith and get back to the safety of her home in Texas. Away from any drama and to keep her past hidden. But as we all know, things have a way of coming to the light.
So stay tuned. And thanks for reading. I really appreciate it.
Yevette
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 04:27 am
So now Breezy knows that Jace isn't married to Sara the crazy ho any more, yay!! So when will hetell that the baby wasn't his and that the bitch lied so that he would marrry her? I love Akiro, Phoenix's strange tail is lucky!! Jace had his work cut out for him. So cut!!
Author's Response:
Lady, you have me cracking up over here. LOL!! Yeah, some things have finally come to the light. He still has to let her know about the baby and the deal with Sara. But right now, he's just trying to gain her trust. Breezy on the other hand is still playing her cards close to the vest. But oh, when it all comes to the light its going to be crazy and what Jace does....
Ha! You thought I was going to tell. LOL!! NOPE. You're just gonna have to stick with me to see how it all turns out.
Thanks for reading. I love your reviews. Another chapter next week. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 03:52 am
Good update. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. New chapter coming next week. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 02:24 am
Another awesome chapter!!! Super glad to see Breezy allowing herself to actually hear Jace out this time. That was definitely a huge step and I'm extremely proud of her!
But, Jace is still mine! So, Breezy, girl, I'll allow you to have him for those next couple of hours, but I expect him to be returned untouched! ;)
Oh, man, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for these two. I love them both. Promise me you'll keep pumping out more of your awesomeness? :)
p.s. I love Phoenix and Akio. They're so freaking cute!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I always look forward to your reviews. Yeah, Breezy had to put her big girl panties on and start listening to whats going on.
Now you know that you and Breezy have to share. LOL!! There's enough of the sexy to go around . But if you think you love him now, then you're gonna wanna marry him when you see what he wants to show her.
And whats not to love about Akio and Phoenix. They are just adorable together.
Thanks for all of your positive energy. You Rock!!!
Yevette
Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 02:16 am
I hate when I read stuff like what just happened at the end, he goes in and just gives up. Its so typical and disappointing can't anyone take a chance?
Author's Response:
It's all part of a bigger Plan that he has. So much has time has passed. I think he wants to get her to trust him again. At least that's what he's telling me right now. LOL!! But who knows what will be going through his head tomorrow.
Thanks for reading. I hope the next chapter is better for you. Keep me informed on your thoughts. I really appreciate them. They are helping me become a better writer.
Yevette
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 02:10 am
@Angelbaby - Yevette has kindly (and FREELY) shared her story with us as readers and all you can do is point of the errors in your comments. If you are so concerned why didn't you PM Yevette so you can proof read her chapters. Yevette, has already mentioned that she is a new writer. Just have some patience and be understanding with her work.
Thank you for this chapter. I love this update looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm working hard on perfecting my craft. Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it.
I will be updating the next chapter in the next few days. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 02:16 am
OMG!!!!!!! I am sooo hooked. Give it to me(in my Rick James voice)! I'm tying off the tourniquet, SHOOT. ME. UP. moremoremoremoremore.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Too damn funny!!!! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks. More coming so that you can get your fix.
Yevette
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 12 2014 11:12 pm
Ok, that whole scene with Sara...yeah. She and Jace are NOT married, she comes in demanding explanations from him about his behavior, and she's clearly pregnant with someone else's baby? The background on her in this story is gonna be something else! I can't wait to hear it.
Author's Response: Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 05:14 am
Breezy, why are you such a punk? You will never know true happiness if you punk ass continues run from life. I love this story! Will write a flashback of that day so that we know what happened? She is going to feel mighty stupid when she realizes that he divorced crazy ho after learning that he wasn't the father. Had she talked about the situation with either her sister or Paul she would have known about Jace. Dumb, dumb, ditty!! I had to read the update again!
Author's Response: Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 04:01 pm
Love it! Can't wait till the next update! Anxious to find out their story. Seems like a lot of lies and deceit went on.
Author's Response: Reviewer: shadow Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 11:09 am
By the way, what is she hiding? What did he do so wrong to make her leave everything behind? I've got so many questions.
Author's Response: Reviewer: LuckyMe Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 08:37 am
GTFOH! Did he just do that? I'm over here screaming. Jace is so sexy. I love alpha males and how they stalk their prey. He wants her badddd. Great chapter.
I need to go to bed but I want to know what happens next. Great story.
Author's Response: Reviewer: LuckyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 08:29 am
OMG!!! The shit just hit the fan. Wow. How are they going to react once they meet up.
I wonder whats going to happen next. This is getting good.
I love Phoenix. She's funny as hell. Keep it coming I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Reviewer: LuckyMe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 07:57 am
Wow! I'm digging this story. I wonder what's going to happen. Paul sounds really cute. I love the names of the sisters. Breezy and Phoenix are cool names. I like.
Author's Response: Reviewer: LuckyMe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 07:44 am
Only 6 mistakes mostly commas misplaced. Great middle and end of chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Angelbaby for reading. As I have stated in my table of content that this is a un-betaed work of fiction. It has not been professionally edited. But it's something that I'll work on to make your reading experience more enjoyable. Right now I'm working on character development, plot, pace and content.
But please stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: angelbaby Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 04:33 am
Nice updates. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it. Stay tuned. Will update again next week.
Yevette
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 04:32 am
I counted 9 mistakes but overall I really enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: angelbaby Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 04:18 am
This is good. I want to know what happened, why didn't show drop kick ole girl and what was the real deal w Paul?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. Paul, is just a friend. Infact he was her best friend until she left town. But she didn't want him to have to chose sides between her and Jace. Paul is just very protective of her.
Sara is just a bitch of the highest caliber. She wants Jace and she'd determined to make it hard for him move on with his life. Even if she did deceive him.
Sara is Jace's problem to handle for now unless she crosses the line with Breezy. LOL!!
Stick with me. Things are about to get fun. Don't forget we've got a week in town and a wedding to help plan. It should be lots of fun. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 02:13 am
Jace get ready for a fight because she won't let you close again. Did you expect Breezy to stick stound after you'd married crazy town? Why would Jace marry Crazy ho without first verifying that the baby was yours in the first place? Jace, restraining order are the two words thst I have for you!
Author's Response:
Yep, Jace has a lot of explaining to to do. But Sara is quite the manipulator. She just wants something that she can't have. She wants his heart and it belongs to another.
Thanks for reading. Your reviews always make my day!! So stay tuned. Another chapter is coming next week. That's if I can't manage to get it done before the end of the week.
Stay tuned
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 01:52 am
Im sticking with you. Loving the beginning of the story...cant wait to learn more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm posting every week. It's been fun pushing myself and learning about these two as I go along. But there is so much more to come. But it's time for some fun. We've got a wedding to plan!!!
Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 01:43 am
Wow! Aside from the obvious with Sara, is the base of this problemnot being sorted and resolved was that they didn't communicate with each other when the needed to?
Without knowing the specifics yet, I will say that they both made it way too easy for Sara to get as far as she did. And that's by not talking.
Breezy I see is a runner. That's hard to handle from a partner. She doesn't stand still long enough to listen to anything so this is what happens.
Jace lets her run. Even with Breezy not being there, what just happened with Sara, shouldn't have. He should have had this cleaned up with her long ago. She walked in like she owned the place and him, insulted his character concerning Breezy, insulted Breezy, then walked the hell out like the Queen of everthing while basically laughing at them all. Really?
They both need to wake up and make some decisions here. However, we'll see what happens next.
Nice!!
Author's Response:
They have a big communication problem. Breezy is going to have to stand her ground. She has let too many things in her life go unresolved with no closure. Jace, although a fighter, has got to learn to fight a little harder for what he wants. He's kind of use to getting what he wants and not having to work at it where women are concerned. But Breezy poses a challenge and she always has. He wants to be more for her. But he just doesn't know how.
And Sara has gotten away with her behavior for far too long. She needs to accept the fact that they are no longer together and let Jace move on with his life.
I'm pretty certain that it's Breezy that she has a problem with. That's because Breezy has managed to do what none of the others have. She captured his heart. But as long as Sara thinks he's miserable, then she's happy. She doen't really care about the other women. Because she knows that he does not love them.
But things are about to get fun!! We've got a wedding to help plan and it should be very interesting especially with Phoenix.
So stay tuned. I love your reviews. They make me really think. And as always thanks for reading.
Yevette
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 01:21 am
This is getting real good. I am looking forward to reading what is next.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Stay tuned as we get a little deeper into what makes these two tick. I really appreciate the review.
Yevette
Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:40 pm
I want more... I think you should really get it published so far. Keep up the good work and GOD BLESS.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. And many more thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it. Stay with me on this journey.
Yevette
Reviewer: Anitra Edwards Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 10:28 am
This chapter was so short! It has me on my toes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Will update the rest of the chapter on tomorrow. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: vulgarviper Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 03:18 am
Oh that Bish!! See it is time for some putting down roots and whipping a bish ass with my limbs until she crying. Now I want Breezy to fight for her man. Don't let this heffa get away with this manipulative crap. So I am guessing from this conversation that he married Sara because he thought she was pregnant with his child when she was actually pregnant with someone else's child and now that decision to marry her and most likely have slept with her while with Breezy has Breezy running for the hills. At this point I feel sorry for Jace. He has 2 stubborn women in his life. One he wants to get rid of and One he wants. Hmmm, wonder how he will resolve this because no matter what he says, she will only think he is saying it to get into her pants. His best friend is going to have to help him. Paul and her sister will need to help him so he will have to appeal to them I think, otherwise I don't see her staying in the same room as him for 5 seconds. Can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. Yeah, Sara is a piece of work. Jace has got his work cut out for him. Right now everybody is upset with him.
Breezy has a lot to think about. Its hard for her to trust people. Her circle of friends is very small and very protective of her. Right now, she does not want a thing to do with Jace. She just wants to get through this week with as little drama as possible but now she has to deal with Phoenix and now Jace.
Stay tuned. Tomorrow we'll get her take on this situation.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 02:02 am