Areena's father is definitely suspect. Why would he want his daughter to marry such a vile person. And the focus on the Duke's money? Hmm. She better run like the wind. You're off to a great start.
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Thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 06:10 pm
Fantastic start. Her plan wasn't very clever, why would she want go back to her house when she was a prisoner there and be forced to marry the devil?
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Haha, yea, I guess it wasn't, but she really doesn't have much choice in the matter - and she can't just abandon her responsibilities. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 04:17 pm
Seems interesting with a lot of little details that need to be paid attention to
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Yup, there are! :P It gets tricky trying to make sure that I get everything right. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: May 24 2014 10:20 pm
Oooooooh! This looks good!
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Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 02:58 pm
Interesting start!
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Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 06:12 am
It's good!
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Thanky you!
Reviewer: linalin Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 12:56 am
Her father is an asshole!! Run, girl RUN!
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Thank you so much for reading! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 10:45 pm