Title: Chapter 3

SAYY NOOOOO!!! NOOOOOO TO THE HOEEEE!!! if he says no then it'll stay the same!! but if he says YES, and he is in love with tamryn... oh my goodness shit will be horrible. She'll be beyondddd crushed!! i mean i almost cried in this chapter lmao their forbidden love hurts my heart so much . it's so sad and tormenting the fact that they have to do all this shit to make sure they stay alive. I really want Carter to beg TAM ... i really want to see him all upset over her and hurting. wanting something so badly. I mean seven longgg months of waiting, only to be stopped once again by the stupid hoe SHAUNA . goodness me. PLEASEEEEE DONT LET THEM BE INVOLVEDDDDD!!!

it'll crushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tam :'(

Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 04:11 pm

Title: Chapter 3

No, to Carter getting married to that crazy ho Shauna, he deserves a real woman. I would be interesrted in knowing Larry's secret on Shauna. I would also like everyone Tamyrn to whoop Shauna's tail. Although that ho over is psychotic so Tam may have to kill her, which wouldn't be a bad thing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Oh. I thought he and Shauna really had something going at first. She just has a crush on him. 

Reviewer: JFJD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 01:46 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Pleeeeeeeease say no. 

Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 12:18 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update as usual. I don't feel like there's anything that's missing or not cohesive. My picks for next:

-Larrry's secret concerning Carter

-Shauna's secret concerning Tamryn

-Carter says HELL NO to dating Shauna lol. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 11:36 am

Title: Chapter 2

1) unrepentant

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and vote, Esmeralda.  The winning version of chapter 3 has already been written based on previous votes and will be posted as soon as I get a chance to edit it.  I'd planned to post a note at the end of chapter 2 days ago warning that voting was closed, but it completely slipped my mind until I read your review.  I apologize for this oversight. 

Reviewer: Esmeralda17 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

this is so much fun...!! woot! woot! :D :D i'm really loving this - keep it up, JJ! :D

my choices are:

1)  this was hard...i think i choose both. why? because it'd be interesting to see how you work both emotions in Carter's storyline (if that makes sense,lol!) 

2)  unforgiving

3)  discuss something personal (maybe Larry will tell us why he has a key to Carter's apartment - dun dun dunn...!

thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 01:49 pm

Title: Chapter 2

remorseful, unforgiving, personal 

Reviewer: bintjihaad Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

I love the direction this story is going! I love Tam's character so innocent but tough as nails. Carter's character however, his actions and the way he deals with it seems so weak when he's supposed to be a cold blooded killer! I think she should tell Carter it's been real or at least give him a serious case of blue balls! I look forward to your next chapter I love your writing :) can you please have Carter take more action? His scheming (though I know it's for Tams protection) puts me off and I find him less desirable. Again I love your work :)))

Author's Response:

Thanks Annloveslit!  I don't know if the next few chapters will give you the action on Carter's part that you're hoping for, but it should clarify some of his decisions (for better or worse) and his role in the underworld.  Thanks for reading and commenting.  I appreciate your input.   

Reviewer: Annloveslit Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Ew. Definitely not what I expected. Nottoo much of a fan of family drama like this. Two sisters fighting over one man. 

Author's Response:

Then I would encourage you not to waste your time reading any further, because while readers will determine the direction the story takes, I don't think it's very likely they'll eliminate that source of conflict.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 02:40 pm

Title: Chapter 2

1  both

2  unforgiving

3. Both

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

I choose 2 because I"m curious to know what has her so terrified.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

Remorseful, unforgiving, and most definitely personal. Love the idea of this story btw! Very original!

Reviewer: keluboo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 2

Excellent chapter!   As for the next chapter, I vote for: unrepentant; unforgiving; strictly business.

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 2

I think they're both going to have residual feelings of hurt & anger behind this confrontation but I don't think Tamryn will run to Daddy. If anything, Shaunte will though. I'm not sure he would call a meeting because he trusts Carter. My votes are unrepentant, unforgiving, and business with a brief admonition to stay away from Tamryn. I am loving this story and I can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm... Does Carter know she watches him? What is their relationship?

Great concept Ms. Jax!

Author's Response:

Answers to both your questions coming up in the next chapter.  Thanks Flgurleygrl!

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 08:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Door #2, girl.

Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 04:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: justmeplz Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 03:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, tough choice. She should go with Carter.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 08:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

A female behind door # 2

Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

door number 2, and a woman.

This will be awesome JJ. Love this idea!!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 09:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

JJ...! i was just thinking about you and your stories the other day - no joke! yet again you have created a masterpiece - the idea is intriguing as hell and loads of fun! :D :D

but dammit i dont know what to choose, lol!?! your leading males are always exquisite so naturalluy i want more Carter, loooL! but damn i'm so curious about door number 2 - soo i will go with door  2 and say it's a woman :D

looking very very very much forward to this! thanks for the update and welcome back!!

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks Cassius!!!  As always, your review put a big smile on my face.  : D

It looks like a female behind door # 2 is the winner for this round.  Chapter 2 is on its way, and with it, a whole new set of decisions.  Stay tuned.  And thanks for reading and reviewing and the warm welcome back.

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 04:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Door number 1

Reviewer: BeautySpot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 03:46 pm

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