Please give us a woman behind door #2!Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 04:28 am
Door 2. Female.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 11:38 pm
Okay, you have me on this one. Very similar to what I was puposing to do with my rewrite of my story. Make a choice...not so easly.
So easy would be for the person coming up the stairs or in the room to be either a wife, girlfriend, mistress or fiance. Or she could be a female assasin. LOL! Someone like Mr. and Mrs. Smith. Also we need to know who Tam is to Carter, someone that he works with, a neighbor that has a crush on him, does he know that she has a crush on him, is he a older man that is denying his attraction to a younger woman or is she the daughter of his friend. So how about she is someone thathe's been helping out and the person coming up the stairs is a fiance, since you did say that the voice was intimate. Let's get his point of view...does he know or suspect the attraction and I would like her to choose the door that lead away from him.
Love the concept and so happy to have you BACK! :) Yeah baby!
You will get some insight into Tam, Carter, and the unidentified person approaching them, and what brought Tam to that moment in the next chapter. Thanks Caribbean Fire.Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 09:03 pm
Cool concept!Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 08:33 pm
I want her to choose Carter and not run? I want to know why she wants to run in first place? Is Carter abusive? Or is Tamryn just afraid to love Carter? I am liking this concept Joelle Jax!
The next chapter will contain answers to all your questions. Thanks Pam!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 07:59 pm