Reviews For Fire and Desire
Title: Unexpected visitor

I love Dewayne Johnson!!  Is Morphine going to gloss over the fact fhat she killed Rob?  She is still on my list!! Great update!!



Author's Response:

Well, in Morphine's defense, Rob was about to rape her. But I don't condone killing, I do believe in self defense. Morphine did take it a little too far. Hehe, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2014 03:23 am

Title: Opposites Attract

I think she's a dark elf-human hybrid.  Like, her dad was the king of the dark elves or some crap and she was orphaned and that's why she has crazy powers she can't control.  Who knows?  I'm sure I'll enjoy it as long as she and Loki finally have a real ove scene. 

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 10:16 pm

Title: Talk about it

Eh, I'm not too pissed about Rob's death.  Morphine didn't really mean to do it; she just lost control. If she confessed her crime - manslaughter - then they'd lock her up, run a bunch of tests, and Loki would have to come rescue her and that would be kind of boring.  Hasn't anyone ever heard of an antihero? Geez. 



Author's Response:

Yes! That's the point I was making! I wanted to make it very unexpecting and intetesting.

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 10:07 pm

Title: You're not a human

Sure, she could pe part Fire Demon or part Dark Elf or a mix? Her blue hair and fierceness point to Other Realm...

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 08:35 am

Title: You're not a human

She's not human but she is humanoid. So good! Although Loki was wrong from putting the snakes in her bed!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 05:01 am

Title: Talk about it

Not pissed. Surprised that he is so willing to be changed. But love will do that to ya!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 09:40 am

Title: Talk about it

That was an interesting development, but Morphine is still fetting the side eye and the stink face because she's a killer.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 05:36 am

Title: Apologize

Morphine is stupid and much to trusting!

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Date: June 10 2014 03:37 pm

Title: Vulnerable

I really just want to choke Morphine,  has she forgotten that she's a hero? Has she forgotten that she killed someone who was suppose to be a friend?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2014 03:28 pm

Title: Betrayal

I have lost all respect for Morphine, Loki is not worth the world being destroyed ans on top of that she killed her friend.  Morphine does not deserve to be an Avenger!



Author's Response:

I totally understand how you feel, but we'll have to see if things get bettet or worse.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2014 03:25 pm

Title: Opposites Attract

Is she really what he needs to iron out the kinks in his "soul"? Or is this a trick?

 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2014 08:48 am

Title: Betrayal

Three chapters in one day?  Why are you so good to me?  Why!?!!?!?!?



Author's Response:

XD XD

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2014 03:55 am

Title: Left Alone

I can't believe Morphine told him to stay put, so he did! ROFLMAO! More please!



Author's Response: LOL she has that kind of power!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 06:34 pm

Title: Opposites Attract

Liked it! Continue it please. I love the name Morphine for your character. Loki is effing hot! 

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 05:26 pm

Title: Opposites Attract

I love the humor in your story. Looking forward to more updates!

Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 05:15 pm

Title: Left Alone

This is too great.  I want seven more chapters, like, right now. 

Reviewer: tens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 05:09 pm

Title: Left Alone

Please don't kill Rob Loki!  Morphine is doing something by harboring Loki.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 02:10 pm

Title: Opposites Attract

Loki, likes what he's sees!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 02:03 pm

Title: Opposites Attract

Good job



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 11:26 am



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