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Title: Chapter 9

Loved it.  I always get excited every time i see an update, and only to get sa after i am finish reading that said update.  You are a good writer.  I absolutely love this story.  Pretty please update very very soon.  Cannot wait.



Author's Response:

Wow that mant so much to me! ThANK YOU So MUCH

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Update soon please can't wait

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 11:39 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Great update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 10:42 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I really like where this story is going. I'm especially interested in the development of Kiara & Raad's relationship. I'm really looking forward to an update.

 Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying the story. Update soon!

 Reviewer: TheDaezy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 03:33 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Awesome 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 03:58 am
Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story so far.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 6

Love it

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I am loving this so far...it is unusual for a woman to be a skilled warrior, so I am liking that aspect.  I'm sure Kira and Raad are in for some great clashes ahead.  Looking forward to the next update!

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Love it please keep writing

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 04:58 pm
Title: Chapter 4

This story sounds like it's going to be amazing. I can't wait for more!!!

 Reviewer: tea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 10:54 am
Title: Nubians~ Egyptians

Never mind. Just saw what you wrote. 

 Reviewer: RomanceLover93 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 05:42 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like the start. But are you going to post a picture of Kira



Author's Response:

 I like to do it this way to let the reader have some kind of imagination, you know? Kira is whoever you want her to look and that goes for any character...they were just my inspiration. lol

 Reviewer: RomanceLover93 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 05:41 am
Title: Nubians~ Egyptians

Love the cast

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 04:05 am


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