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Title: Chapter 2

That was hot. You seem to have no apprehensions about writing a love scene. I still get so embarrassed writing them. Lol



Author's Response:

Girl, as long as my mama ain't reading it , I'm good. I think my sex scenes are raw but yours are more like poetry that comparison to be dangerous/dying was freaking HOT! and narrated by Alessadro. Damn. I'm fanning myself right now thinking about it. LOL!

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 2

Some relationships starts off fast and feral as crazy as it may seem. It may have started as a fling which turned into the most primal passion.Jazz truly has herhand in the cookie jar and this time it might just stay there. Neither are shy about their wants and needs and do.what ever it takes to get them. The things they do and say to one another can turn anyone into an animal. That's fine with me , the wilder the better. Keep at it.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it! I love me an alpha male but also love when a woman isn't shy about what she wants and can dish it out too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 2

That was hot!!  Don't like her father!  Where is her mom, is she dead?  Damn Victor is fine!!



Author's Response:

pmgayles!! That was a lot of action piled into one chapter. Jazz's mother and father's story will come out in the upcoming chapters. Hells yeah Victor is Fine!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Damnnnn!! Back with a vengence on this chapter. This was well worth the wait so great job. Please post soon, I can't wait for more.

 

Ps. I love the hot flashback, very unique to give the past and present so detailed and well placed. Also, love the dress :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :-) for your comlpiments. I felt like we needed to understand their steamy past to know why Jazz gets so hot and bothered around Victor. I really enjoy writing this and appreciate you reading and reviewing it. Thank you.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 11:07 am



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