Title: News and Mysterious Callers

Richard is such a asshole,  what was the point of lying to Kirk?    Richard is a morally bankrupt, narcissistic asshole! !  I am disgusted by him, Harley and Hannah!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 12:23 pm

Title: Family Outing part 1

I don't understand why Hannah was allowed to come over?  That heifer made a move on her own cousin, which screams untrustworthy shank!!  I have missed this story so thanks for updating,  you're a rock star!

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Date: July 30 2015 12:15 pm

Title: News and Mysterious Callers

PLEASE tell me there is going to be more.  I NEED to see how this story ends.



Author's Response:

There's more to come! Thanks for enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 08:12 am

Title: Characters

I not really feeling them doc is kind of a dick for basically using ken and Kirk is basically taking sloppy seconds of whatever he can get from Kenny who can't make up her mind about what she wants. Want to see where this will end up because if I were Kirk I wouldnt wanna fuck someone I love in the same bunk they had sex with their ex not even days ago.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2015 12:23 am

Title: News and Mysterious Callers

Richard is an a hole supreme and should loose all that he holds dear, his money!  I want the humiliation to continue for the slut puppy Harley. 

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Date: February 19 2015 01:23 am

Title: Stop running

This story is moving too fast to make it believable. Kirk seems really weak and unsure of himself. Keny and Doc are together so how will a break up affect the band? It 's hard to garner sympathy for Kirk or root for him and Keny as a couple since the reader has not been able to experience any real connection between them or any of the characters , honestly.

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Date: February 18 2015 09:04 pm

Title: Characters

Kirk here is cute though I really like Doc more and Kenny is beautiful.

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Date: February 18 2015 08:43 pm

Title: Prologue

Kirk is not cute. I hope he gets better looking because Kenny is so cute and could do better.

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Date: February 18 2015 08:38 pm

Title: In LA

Karma has introduced herself to Harley and knocked her the fuck out!!! That was just beautiful and ho was crying because now she's ass out. Thank you for that stupendous update especially after such a long wait. Cool beans!!

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Date: November 15 2014 03:15 am

Title: That Bitch

Harley is a straight up bitch ho!! Why is she tripping she never loved Kirk and besides she was boning his sperm donor!!  I want her father to disown and disinherit Harley. I want her homeless and friendless. 

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Date: September 28 2014 03:47 am

Title: Weed and times of need

Ok then....lol!

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Date: September 02 2014 04:59 am

Title: Weed and times of need

Kirk is putting it on Keny and she's loving it.    I love Kirk and Kollin they are sweethearts.  Nonni has such a pottie mouth, who knew?! Why hasn't Lynn's attorney advised her to get a restraining order?  This s story is good and I thank you for sharing your talent! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy the story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 03:26 pm

Title: First Date

That was hot and sexy! Kirk is such a sweetheart and he loves him some Keny.  Why was Keny expectimg for Harley and Hillary to show up? Those two ho's have been humiliated and Harley's indecretion was video taped.  Kirk's mom should use that video in her divorce because that he proof that Richard is a lecherous, scum sucking pig! I want Harley's father to disown her!  I love this story! 



Author's Response:

Keny was expecting them because they always seem to pop up unexpectingly. That video tape will be brought up soon. Thanks for enjoying!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 03:42 pm

Title: Hospital visits

Oh i dislike him so much! Scumbag!

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 03:40 am

Title: Hospital visits

Richard is an asshole and I wanted him to die of heart attack. Lynn is to good for him!! They could usr the recording in the divorce proceedings. Kollin is smart cookie!! Keny told Harley the truth.

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Date: August 12 2014 08:24 pm

Title: Hospital visits

Smh. Can't believe he had the nerve to act like it was perfectly normal for him to be having sex with his sons ex-fiancé. But as usual I loved this one!!

Reviewer: Color_me_shaaeee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 06:38 am

Title: Pettiness

Oh Hell no!!! SO TRIFLING!!!

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Date: August 06 2014 05:43 pm

Title: Pettiness

wow so kirks father is banging his ex, what a weirdo. i hope they get caught. i cant believe his father wiould to his family, i hope he loses everything.

Reviewer: lucky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 05:46 am

Title: Pettiness

That waa just nasty!! Harley is a ho with a capital H!!  I so want Richard to get caught dipping his wick that nasty, evil ho over Harley! !  Why did Kollin let her in their house? Harley is like roach that you repeatedly spray with Raid and it still won't die!! There are two people in this story who could die and they wouldn't be missed, Richard abd Harley!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 05:22 am

Title: Pettiness

Really, Really.  Ooooh, I hope his wife isn't sleep and she catches his behind having sex with Harley and then leaves him and takes his money with him along with Harley's father cutting her off and leaving this partnership with Richard.  I hope his son left and told his mom that Harley is at her house.  Please let them get caught and shit hit the fan.  I hope he is left with nothing.  Kirk sister and spouse takes over the business leaving him virtually begging for scraps.  Not only are you cheating on your wife but you are trying to pass your hoe off on your son to keep sexing her up.  Aww Hell Nawl.  That is an incident that his wife needs to come up out of her purse on. 

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Date: August 06 2014 03:08 am

Title: Pettiness

Trifling isn't the word!!! This is messy! 

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Date: August 06 2014 12:11 am

Title: Trouble in paradise

Hannah is a nasty ho who should be sterilized then institutionalized.  Kirk please tell your momma aand I want Lynn to beat her like she stole her last dollar. KIRK WAKE UP!!!

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 05:54 am

Title: Dinner with the Petersons

Why did his momma say yes to that ho allowing her to come over to dinner in the first place? I she didn't like her?  Keny, that sifuation wasn't Kirk's fault so give him a break!  Harley most definitely showws her true color and her psychosis! Awesome!!!

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Date: August 02 2014 02:44 pm

Title: Bitch please

Is it me or does Hannah sound like she shouldn't be Kirk's cousin.  Why would you be mad at the fact that Keny captured his attention without trying.  You're his cousin, who the hell cares?  Anyway, is this chick for real.  He broke up with you on your WEDDING DAY in front of everyone.  If that is not saying, I DON'T WANT YOU!!, I have no clue what is.  C'mon Harley don't play yourself.  Is you dad saying stuff to you because I can't believe you really think this way.  As for all of these other heffa's, really, you will encourage her in these illusions.  Wouldn't you say to a FRIEND, forget that jerk,  he embarrassed you on your most important day, find someone else, you don't need him and his assholish ways.  I mean, really.  Can't wait to see how her seeing someone else does not affect him at all b/c he don't want you.  Can somebody send her the self help book,  "How to Get a Clue:  when the boy doesn't want you."



Author's Response:

Your review had me rolling on the floor laughing! Hannah's behavior is odd and will be explained. As for Harley, we all know why she really wanted Kirk, and she put it in her head that she won't stop until she's sunk her claws into Kirk.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 08:10 am

Title: Bitch please

Why is Harley acting like she was in love Kirk? Didn't Richard know that the ho has psychological issues, like her ass is pyschotic with delusions thrown in? In her bed, Kirk never had sex with you you crazy ho!  Ladies can we say restraining order?



Author's Response:

I think when Richard saw Harley he saw dollar signs instead of someone appropriote for Kirk marry.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2014 04:07 pm



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