Those ho's are cray cray! Harley Kirk doesn't love you he was only with you because of his dumb ass father.I want those four crushed especially Hannah and Harley!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 31 2014 04:00 pm
Richard and Tony are assholes. Tony cheated on STACI so needs he just needs to be quiet on relationships period. Lynn and Savanah were sweethearts. Me likey!
Author's Response: Thanks! Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 31 2014 03:52 pm
I love that some drama is about to enter the story!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Reviewer: Color_me_shaaeee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2014 01:50 pm
Doc is a good guy! i'm glad that he did the right thing and ended things when he realized that Ken & Kirk arent over each other - finally Ken & Kirk can start their relationship even though their fathers are total idiots! thanks for the updates!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed
[Report This]Date: July 29 2014 06:20 pm
That was cute! Doc I loved the that spoke to Kirk as well even you used Keny dumb butt for sex but that was all on her. Finally they admit to each other how they feel and start to make out! Already then, now they can make beautiful music together. Well as beautiful as head-banging music can be. Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2014 01:58 pm
Thank you for updating again!!!! I'm also sorry to hear that you were sick, I hope your feeling better! :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you, that makes me feel better despite being bed ridden. I'll update as quickly as possible. And thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Color_me_shaaeee Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 08:43 am
I love that you made Doc human...Great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 06:16 am
great job
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate your reviews.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 06:16 am
Wonderful insight into the characters
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 06:16 am
love it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 06:15 am
Keny is so dumb, Doc is being a man by allowing her to give herself to him. She has convinced herself that she's in love with Doc. Keny you are so wrong , you can't be in love with two people at the same. I wish that I had read this chapter first!!
Author's Response:
Hi! I love how detailed your reviews are. I know it's frustrating waiting on Keny and Kirk to get it together. Also, Keny thinks it's better for her to stay with Doc because she's scared of being hurt again. Doc knows he can't love her the way Kirk does, or give her the love she really needs. He hates that they're both being stupid, with Kirk not growing a pair and Keny not owning up to her feelings.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 05:35 am
No I didn't but damn that just made me love Doc!! Keny and Kirk are dumb as hell and are perfect for each other. But why did Doc let Keny give herself to him knowing that she was running from her feelings for Kirk? Doc just used for sex but I guess his conscious finally got to him. Keny what do you need to think about? She is working my last nerve!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2014 05:27 am
Keny, are you going to continue to fight your feelings for Kirk? Being on tour together will definitely bring everything out in the open. I know that Doc realizes that Keny is still in love with Kirk. Stop running from your feelings Keny!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2014 04:21 pm
Man, give it up--awkward enough ken and doc are bunking together, surprised you haven;t heard them going at it. Kirk needs to grow up and move on, again.
Ken is still hurting and while I feel her pain, I wish she would stop playing that same old song.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2014 09:01 am
I don't know how I missed this chapter but damn it was good! What did expect? He really hurt Keny! Harley is coo coo for Coca Puffs!!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for both reviews! Harley is indeed a crazy bitch, now that she's out of the way, maybe it'll be easier for Ken and Kirk to be together.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2014 08:00 pm
iam so happy that he heard that ho talking how sehe was using him for hia money. So glad that he knows how stupid is and that he told Keny how he feels. Keny is not in love with Doc especially when she is still in love with Kirk. Keny don't settle, go for broke when it comes to love! Excellent story telling!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2014 07:50 pm
I'm glad you answered me !! Don't worry, I'll stick around in hope the updates will help me understand. Thanx !!
Author's Response: No problem. Feel free to ask anything you want and I'll answer the best I can. Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 01:06 am
ooooh sooo glad that keny hooked up with doc even though clearly her feelings for kirk are still there and unresolved. kirk is dating a snake - curious that harley has moved up that wedding date? what's up with that?
i'm glad that kirk came clean and told keny about his feelings. she should do the same even though i dont want doc to get hurt, it's better if she's honest.
thanks for the updates! let's see if this wedding will take place...!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2014 10:54 pm
I loved the begining of your story. But reading this last one, I'm just confused. Why are the characters so contradictory ? Ken says she needs to stop running away from her problems and yet, she ends the talk without knowing anything in the next second. Kirk says to his mother he doesn't love ken but confess his love for her the next second. He admits that Harley is insufferable and makes him miserable, and yet thinks he needs to concentrate on her and their life... WTH!! I understand being confused as a teenager, but now..is just confusing. Kirk needs to man up, Harley didn't put a knife on his throat to make him accept this marriage. Even if he can't have Ken because she moved on, I don't see why he must keep his relationship with blondie. I just don't understand. Better alone than in a bad marriage. Since the wedding is now during Ken's stay, I hope it won't be a trigger for her to interrupt it because he's "the love of his life". Kirk needs to stop this madness himself, he's a grown ass man! His shallowness just makes him unattractive. And I would like to have Doc's opinion, as a character, he can't just stand by while his girl is confused. Otherwise their relationship wouldn't have any meaning nor purpose.
Author's Response:
In later chapters, I'll explain why these two get so stupid around each other, and why Kirk is getting married to Harley. In response to Doc, he's not a stupid guy. He knows what's up, and everything he does is for a reason. I hope that answered anything without giving away to the story.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2014 04:44 pm
Kirk is about to mske a big mistake, don't marry that ho Harley. Hell you don't love her, please kick her to the curb. Now Keny is really dating Doc?! Does she really love Doc?
Author's Response: We can all agree that Kirk's an idiot. Keny loves Doc in a way, she still wants to get over Kirk. Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 05:04 am
Im pleased at how you handled Jamie Anon's ridiculous question. You can have all the white, black, or green people you want in your story. It's your story after all :). Smh at some people. You are doing a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate that. That anon was being out of line. Reviewer: zoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 02:11 am
Why are there so many white people in your story? Seriously?
Author's Response:
I don't know, maybe if you took the time to go to the the next chapter, you'd figure out that there are two black characters.
Reviewer: Jamie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 19 2014 12:53 am
What the hell is going on with these two?!! This is kind of a mess.
Kirk needs to get rid of Harley. That's just a mess waiting to happen. She's crazy.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 11:04 pm
This is interesting so far. The whole thing was kind of awkward to me. Kirk seemed surprised, yet not? Keny tried to walk it back and then got Doc involved. Now she's taking off. And why would Kirk lie if he really liked Keny?
Author's Response: To answer that, Kirk is an oblivious idiot. He didn't really know what to say. And Keny only got Doc involved to get Kirk away. Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 10:55 pm
ggod start! will be interesting to see where the story goes - if Ken will end up feeling for Kirk and Doc :)
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2014 03:43 pm