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Title: Feelings

<3 Finally!!!!! d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2017 03:46 pm

Title: Feelings

Brian was holding that in forevera86; and Kelly was hoping he felt that way when she moved out🙋 now no more excuses😃 nice updatea86;

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2017 01:31 am

Title: Feelings

It took a drunk mind to speak a sober heart and he spoke the truth. Kelly needs to be honest with herself and admit her truth to Brian too. Because hiding his truth was hurting him, that's why he was drinking so much. I feel for poor Adam because he didn't stand a chance. Great update honey!

Author's Response:

LOL Adam tried his best but it just wan't good enough.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 05:53 pm

Title: Feelings

Will Kelly finally stop being a punk? I hope so, Brian is a keeper!



Author's Response:

She's going to get her life together dont worry. Hopefully it wont be too late!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 05:05 am

Title: Adulting

We have to all grow up sometime. We like how Zoey's handling herself. Get yourself right first and then worry about other people. Nice chapter😀

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2017 10:26 pm

Title: Adulting

Very wonderful update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 04:17 am

Title: Adulting

Darren is right, he better get with the program and get Kelly before ol boy does. They are soo right for each other but they both need to stop fighting it. And why is he tripping about Danica not wanting more than sex? Isn't that what he was complaining about weeks ago? You got exactly what you asked for. Don't trip now! 

UPdate soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 07:14 pm

Title: Jealous

How freaking bitter do you have to be to do that to somebody. Seriously?? You drench everything in bleach?! You don't deserve all the shit Brain brought for you either but no one is complaining!! I'm just glad she didn't find the journal, I'm sure that would have been destroyed too or even worse. Now Brain is getting a small dose of what Kelly felt seeing you and your ex fiance. 

Update soon.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 07:47 pm

Title: Jealous

Adam is a distraction from Brian.  Brian does need some time not in a relationship before pursuing Zoey.  Dang Danica, hot pants.  Everybody doesn't want to just sleep or date everyone.  She's trying to get her life together again.  Give the child a moment.  Once she feels established then she can rock the boat with Adam or Brian.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2017 12:30 pm

Title: Jealous

Admit for your feeling for each other to each other.  Why is it so obvious to their friends but they can't see it in each other?  Macy was arrested and it gave me life, I will need to reread that part again  Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2017 12:45 am

Title: Jealous

Awww!! Now it's really getting good. I can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2017 05:06 pm

Title: Night Out

I see Mr. Darren is catching feelings for D. He has met his match and now she is giving him a dose of his own damn medicine. That's what he gets. I think they would be cute together!!! I wonder what info Harvey did give that witch or if she will even use it now that things are already broken off. I don't know what it is but something about Adam has me off... Can't put my finger on it but something about him is off to me. 

Update soon! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 07:53 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

Yessssss!!!! FINALLY!!! Brian get your life back baby!!!! I'm soo glad that he did this because had she faked a miscarriage then she would have his behind completely. She doesn't deserve him at all. It's sad that his brother was killed like that and now it makes sense why he did all that for Kelly. I'm sure it's what he wishes he could have done for his brother. Awww.... 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 07:41 pm

Title: Trust Your Gut

I'm glad that Brian isn't completely oblivious to what is happening with that fiance of his. I love his dad's idea though. If she refuses then you know what's up. A pregnant woman would not object to seeing her child with the father if he was as excited about it as she was. I hope that with this newfound information, the PI decides not to tell Macy rather go directly to Kelly and tell her about her own life. Don't allow Macy to throw that in her face. It would not be good. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 07:22 pm

Title: Closer

Wow... He should be ashamed. While I do not like you're fiance, she still is that. Respect that notion. If you want to be with Kelly then break things off with Macy and keep it moving. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 07:08 pm

Title: A Break In the Case

I'm glad to know that Harvey at least felt like she was more than a job. I don't want him to tell Macy anything. Especially the news of her past, its going to be used to destroy Zoey/Kelly and that's not cool at all. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 06:08 pm

Title: Strange Behavior

I wonder what Macy is going to do when Brian doesn't let up on getting that doctor's info. It's going to blow up in her face. I hope he isn't screwing her without a condom now because she is 'pregnant'. I can't wait for him to find out, maybe that will put the last nail in the coffin and he will leave her ass! That is horrible. Her husband used to treat her like that. Dang near forcing her to have sex with you so you would stop beating her! That's still rape dude!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 05:31 pm

Title: Dinner

Lol. How shitty you must feel to know that the man you are supposed to marry's parents don't like you but love the woman you think is intruding on your life. Haha!!!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 03:12 pm

Title: Confessions

Damn!!!! So that's how Zoey/Kelly got into the mess she was in. That's fucked up, you sell your wife to your drug dealer to save yourself! You don't deserve her and whe she regains her memory, I hope she divorces your ass. You don't deserve to get over that. Now I'm not sure I want Kelly to regain her memory, that's horrible. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 03:02 pm

Title: The Pier

She is an evil manipulating biotch!!! She is the abolsute worst! Using a fake baby to keep a man. If you can't keep him on your own then you don't deserve him and a baby is never going to change that. I can't believe she pushed Kelly down the stairs! I would have kicked her ass after my wrist got better. She needs to tell Brain what that woman is doing to her! You don't deserve to be abused, you didn't ask for this to happen. Y'all hit her! The hell!!! Maybe this PI will be able to help Kelly find out about her past too. It may not be bad but I know Macy will use it to cause her harm. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 02:46 pm

Title: Working Girl

That's adorable. I must say, she did a damn good job on her first day working. Yes, he did work her like a slave but she killed it! I'm sure Darren will have no problems keeping her around. I feel like it was just a test anyway, to see if she could truly handle working for him. I'm glad that she didn't allow him to kiss her, there is already enough tension in the house from Macy to add that to it. I'm surprised she wasn't lurking around the corner watching them anyway. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 02:21 pm

Title: Night Out

i cant wait until next chapter

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 10:18 am

Title: Night Out

Brian has it bad for Kelly and I love it.



Author's Response:

He doesn't know if he's coming or going when it comes to her. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2017 03:15 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Your story is coming along nicely! Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks! 😊

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2017 09:04 pm

Title: Night Out

Hahaha I love it!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks😊

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2017 05:12 pm



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