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Title: Working Girl

When is Brian kicking that trick Macy to the curb?  Brian make her crazy ass go to her own place.  Brian almost kissed Kelly, yes  but she pulled away.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 12:48 am

Title: Working Girl

Good for her!  Thank you for the update and hope you are feeling better.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 11:34 pm

Title: Working Girl

I'm glad you're doing better, but i love this story, cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 07:46 pm

Title: Nightmares

Sooooo, when do we get an update. Brian and Kelly make my days go by a lot faster.!

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 01:34 am

Title: Nightmares

This is going to be interesting to see Kelly and Darren working together.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 01:45 am

Title: Nightmares

Lol. Nothing wrong with not cutting corners for anyone. But you do have to learn a bit of restraint. There's always a time and place for complete bluntness. I hope it works out for Kelly. I know she can handle his attitude, judging from the beginning of the story. I think he's going to like her. Maybe not romantically but at least he will be cool with her. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 08:19 am

Title: Meet the Fiancée

Interesting memory. I wonder who she was talking to in her memory flash. Is Macy serious right now? Are you that intimidated that you have to threaten a woman who has no idea who she is? If you were handling shit with your man you wouldn't have to worry about any chick in the house. Insecure ass

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 08:08 am

Title: A Whole New World

So she can cook... Macy should be worried. LOl. A woman who can cook a meal for her man is always better than a chick who can simply order out. Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 07:55 am

Title: What's In A Name?

I love Danica for looking out for her like that. Many people wouldn't go that far for a stranger. I don't blame Kelly for panicking like that. I would too, you don't know what to expect and you have no clue as to who you are. It's like everything is stacked up against you. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 07:43 am

Title: Decisions

Oh!!! That's why she's acting like that. Brian is her bank for life. Her family is wealthy but she isn't since she didn't go to college. I see now... She doesn't even love him, she just needs to marry him so she can have total access to his money. A true golddigger. I wonder if her headaches are her brain's attempts to bring her memories back. Who knows. I agree with Danica though, don't hurt that girl while you try and erase your guilt. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 07:34 am

Title: Jane Doe

Again... Macy is doing nothing to help her case. You don't want to learn how to cook for your man? You and your mom are a waste. At least learn how to season some damn meat and throw it in the oven. It's really not that hard. Simple cooking classes, why pay someone to do what you can do yourself? Why can't you spend your own damn money? I do not like gold digging women. But, I can understand her being upset about him inviting ole girl to live with them. That is something he should have discussed with her, they are engaged after all. I also get why he didn't tell her, she is just going to flip like she has from the beginning but she has a valid reason. What if she gets her memory back and is a damn killer who was running from the scene of a murder? Just saying... 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 07:20 am

Title: Rise and Shine

That's amazing. I'm glad that he continued to go to check on her. Seems like every post thus far as made me like Macy less and less. Anyone who throws around the N word is a piece of shit in my book. Black or white. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 07:07 am

Title: The End

Macy is a bitch. How can you say that? Any decent person would at least try to check on that person out of genuine concern for their well being. You would want someone to do that for you  if they almost kill you with their car. How rude. I like Brian, you can tell he has a big heart. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 06:58 am

Title: Nightmares

I think her memory is slowly coming back. I hope when she do remember who's chasing her she would tell Brian, so he can protect himself. Girl, this is about to get real! when Zoey goes to work for Darren. I know we are about to laugh our butts off! thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 02:27 pm

Title: Nightmares

Nice,

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 09:13 pm

Title: Nightmares

When is Macy going away? Hell she doesn't even live with Brian, what does he see in that skanks? Macy is nothing but a money gold digging strumpet. A slut monkey!!! Thanks for the update.

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 06:11 pm

Title: Meet the Fiancée

Why is she so impressed with that Macy girl ?

 A person acting the way Macy does shows more weakness than strenght actually

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 07:11 am

Title: Meet the Fiancée

Macy is really dumb. Why would you warn the enemy. Anyway, she's so insecure and hopefully Brian won't be such a slave to the p that he doen't notice that his fiancee is being a b to Kelly.

At some point I expect Kelly to set her straight once Kelly gets more secure in who she is. Right now, Kelly is dealing with some major issues and needs to focus on those. Macy is Brian's problem.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 10:13 pm

Title: Meet the Fiancée

Girl... I would've checked Macy from the start and said " Look w!tch don't come at me that way, you need to check your man, he's the one who invited me to re-group at his house." and then I would've say " Deuces" and walked out. This is really going to be some trying times for Kelly, and she has 99 problems but Macy is not one of them. Thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 12:45 pm

Title: Meet the Fiancée

In this version make sure that Kelly/Zoey whoops that ho's ass but good.  I want Macy drinking her food threw a straw because her jaws are wired shut.  I love how she calls Brian's house her house, heifter you don't live there hell you pay for nothing.  You are nothing but a liability, a sycophant living off of Brian's stupidity.  Wake the hell up Brian!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 02:19 am

Title: Meet the Fiancée

She should tell Danica about Macy... Who will then tell Brian.  I hope Brian overhears Macy showing her true colors., because I  don't see Kelly standing up to her.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 01:34 am

Title: A Whole New World

Brian's feelings are really growing for Kelly. I'm glad.



Author's Response:

Yeah he's about to fall hard I think. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 12:42 am

Title: A Whole New World

I really want Macy gone, she makes my teeth itch. Both Zoey and Brain deserve better than either of them have received.



Author's Response:

Your teeth will have to itch for a little while longer. lol Macy isn't don't causing trouble yet....actually she hasn't even really started. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2016 12:06 am

Title: A Whole New World

Girl, 2 gas stoves are essential, 2 ovens is a blessing and a brick pizza oven is necessary, when you have a big family and they all eat like food is about to be extinct at any minute. I think Brian and Kelly( Zoey ) has some type of connection, but I think they shouldn't explore it until Macy is out of the picture. Why do I have this feeling that Macy is about to make an appearance at the house while Brian is at the store. Stopping by to mark her territory. All I can say is poor Kelly. Thanks for this update



Author's Response:

Girl! How big of a family are you cooking for! I'm good with my one over. lol Macy is like an annoying little gnat she'll be around for a little while. Thanks for reading 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2016 08:16 pm

Title: What's In A Name?

I like the name " Kelly " and the meaning behind it. I wished they would've let her pick the name she wanted though. Girl, all I see is trouble for Zoey- Kelly coming from that evil witch Macy. I hope Brian can cast out the evil spirit that is Macy away from our girl. Thanks for this update.



Author's Response:

She wouldn't have been happy either way. Yes Macy will shake things up in a major way later down the line. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 05:05 pm



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