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Title: What's In A Name?

I enjoyed your first version, but I think I may wind up liking this rewrite more.



Author's Response:

I hope so! Thanks for reading

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 07:20 am
Title: What's In A Name?

I love Brian as offerred her a place to stay, but it's about to get ugly because Zoey/Kelly will be meeting MGD. ( Macy the Gold Digger)



Author's Response:

lol MHD! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 04:40 am
Title: Decisions

Macy makes my teeth itch!!  When is Brian going to wake up to Macy's evil?  

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 04:35 am
Title: What's In A Name?

You can't have two Queens under one roof...just don't be the serf.  I hope Brian let her know that it is his place, because that will go a long way in settling her anxiety , especially when old girl try to step on her.



Author's Response:

Especially not when one is an evil queen!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 02:54 am
Title: Decisions

Macy is so cold and heartless, If the shoe was on the other foot and she was the one in a hospital bed with no memories of her past, I hope she would want someone like Brain in her life. I guess I would think differently If Macy and Brain was married and he chose to bring a stranger into their house without talking to her first. I wouldn't blame her for being PISSED! but they are not married and they don't even live in the same house, so she really don't have a say. I hope he ends his relationship with Macy before Zoey moves in because Macy will make that woman life a living hell. She would be over there from sunup until sundown watching like a hawk!!. Thanks for this update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 08:25 pm
Title: Jane Doe

Please give Brian a backbone earilier this time.  He is just too nice for this chick and hopefully he kicks her to the curb, esp. for her racist rant, which will probably come out in full force. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 01:13 am
Title: Jane Doe

Yes the begininng of Macy's down fall into hell which is where she belongs.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 09:31 pm
Title: Jane Doe

Yes Bitch he invited her home! What you gonna do bout it!

Love this surprise. Hope he flings this gold digger 

To the curb! 

 Reviewer: Antoinette Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 08:42 pm
Title: Jane Doe

Girl.. I like this!! Miss. Macy is about to get a rude awakening. How she said she grew up with a maid, butler and cook. she is about to be all those things to Zoey If she insist on living in the house with them. This is going to be so much fun! Thanks honey for this update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 06:13 pm
Title: Rise and Shine

I love this rewrite and I'm along for the ride.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are hanging in there with me. thanks.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 02:56 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

Nice cast!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 02:55 pm
Title: Rise and Shine

Welcome back please update regularly and finish.  Interesting back story.  This story was one of my favorites glad to see you continue. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I plan on it. 

 Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 11:49 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Good to have you back!!

Author's Response:

thanks!

 Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 12:30 am
Title: Rise and Shine

I'm happy she's awake. Brian is going to be smitten.



Author's Response:

he is not going to know what hit him.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 12:24 am
Title: Rise and Shine

Yes, Zoey is awake!!   Brian is finally seeing Macy for the racist tramp that she is.  Please in this newer version make Brian kick her the curb much sooner.



Author's Response:

ill do my best.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 09:00 pm
Title: The End

That was a great start! Glad to see you back!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 12:20 pm
Title: The End

Welcome back...what was wrong with the original story?



Author's Response:

i just wasn't happy with what i wrote and had no idea where to take the story from my last chapter. i think i have a better grasp on it this time around.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 09:21 pm
Title: The End

I still hate Macy can't wait for Brain to see the true Macy and drop her kiss to the curb!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 08:00 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

I am so glad that this story is back!!



Author's Response:

thanks!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 07:45 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

Glad Kim's dad got a beat down also.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 08:36 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Loving thu story! Well written!

 Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 06:29 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Lmao a front yard brawl all kelly needed to do was pop macey right in the nose. Brian also needs to get his life together and have this talk before all the shot hits the fan. Update soon please loving your story!

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 03:02 am
Title: Cast Pictures

oh yes, he is sexy. You should look up Mike Colter as well. He is another hot one.

 Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 08:04 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

Does she even have a HS diploma? Probably more like an attendance certificate...

Great story. Keep the chapters coming:-).



Author's Response:

Thank you. Thanks for reading.

 Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 04:08 am
Title: Cast Pictures

More please!

 Reviewer: Faye Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 11:06 pm


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