I love the cast.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2014 05:37 am
I hope Z. can cook, bc that will make greedy Macy so mad. Does Macy actually live with Brian? I hope he can easily eradicate M from his life, so he can then focus on who had beaten up Z. I am loving your story and the updates keep getting better.
Author's Response:
Yeah Macy managed to wiggle herself into his house.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2014 06:23 pm
What is your hold-up? you are off to a good start.
Author's Response:
Just had life slow me down a bit but I'm back to it! I'll try and get these out quicker.
Reviewer: Faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2014 07:42 pm
I really enjoyed your first chapter, but please don't hold out on adding future chapters. I am very curious about how Brian is going to proceed with both of these women.
Author's Response:
I'm working on getting the chapters out to you guys quicker. I'm glad tha tyou are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 07:35 am
Love the cast!! Chris Evans, sigh!!
Author's Response:
Right! Could he be any hotter? lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2014 03:36 am
I don't understand why some authors feel the need to hold off on continuing a chapter until they recieve further feedback or more reviews for their story. When you're writing a story aren't you writing for yourself and not neccessarily reviews? It's such a turn off to be honest. You shouldn't have to hold your chapters hostage whether you get a review or not. Write because you want to. But don't write if all you want to see is the number of reviews go up.
Author's Response:
Hi! I definitely understand your point and it wasn't my intention to come of as hungry for reviews. Since this is my first story I was really looking for any constructive criticism regarding my writing style, the story idea, etc. I didn't want to get too far in if some of the more experienced writiers on the site noticed something glaringly wrong with my story. Maybe I should have made that more clear! And maybe one chapter isnt enough material to make any type of judgements. I do hope you continue to read and I didn't turn you off too much.
Reviewer: Britney Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 20 2014 02:02 am