Reviews For Memories Lost
Title: Cast Pictures

I love the cast.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 05:37 am

Title: Cast Pictures

I hope Z. can cook, bc that will make greedy Macy so mad.   Does Macy actually live with Brian?  I hope he can easily eradicate M from his life, so he can then focus on who had beaten up Z.   I am loving your story and the updates keep getting better.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah Macy managed to wiggle herself into his house.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 06:23 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

What is your hold-up? you are off to a good start.



Author's Response:

Just had life slow me down a bit but I'm back to it! I'll try and get these out quicker.

Reviewer: Faye Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 07:42 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

I really enjoyed your first chapter, but please don't hold out on adding future chapters. I am very curious about how Brian is going to proceed with both of these women.



Author's Response:

I'm working on getting the chapters out to you guys quicker. I'm glad tha tyou are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 07:35 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Love the cast!! Chris Evans,  sigh!!



Author's Response:

Right! Could he be any hotter? lol

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 03:36 am

Title: Cast Pictures

I don't understand why some authors feel the need to hold off on continuing a chapter until they recieve further feedback or more reviews for their story. When you're writing a story aren't you writing for yourself and not neccessarily reviews? It's such a turn off to be honest. You shouldn't have to hold your chapters hostage whether you get a review or not. Write because you want to. But don't write if all you want to see is the number of reviews go up.



Author's Response:

Hi! I definitely understand your point and it wasn't my intention to come of as hungry for reviews. Since this is my first story I was really looking for any constructive criticism regarding my writing style, the story idea, etc. I didn't want to get too far in if some of the more experienced writiers on the site noticed something glaringly wrong with my story. Maybe I should have made that more clear! And maybe one chapter isnt enough material to make any type of judgements. I do hope you continue to read and I didn't turn you off too much.

Reviewer: Britney Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 02:02 am



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