Title: Chapter 12

Awww., I hate to see this story  end.   Loki wasn't  bad after all but Thor is still my favorite.  Awesine sauce!!

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Date: January 15 2015 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Some things are worth waiting for and this was a good example.

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Date: January 15 2015 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 11

Loki appears  to really love Senta, who would've thunk?  So glad that bitch Leidr is dead as she irked me something  fierce.   This is some good story telling!!

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Date: January 14 2015 02:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10

By Odin,I knew something was off. I can almost see where this is going to lead. As for Loki with Asmund this was long overdue. By now Senta should have realized that the god of Illusions has nothing to be ashamed about. The stage been set, the actor have been cast it is tume for the curtain to rise. Let the drama begin, exit stage left.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2015 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Low blow low blow!!!! He needs to really think about it!!! Why would she be hooded when she is with Loki or thought to be? Hmm?

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Date: January 05 2015 02:01 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Senta is about to yo ham!!

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Date: January 04 2015 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yes, Oriel is back and ready to kick some ass!!  



Author's Response:

Hell Yeah!

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Date: December 13 2014 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 9

It sees that something is about hit the fan.Whatever happens something is going to change, how will soon be revealed. The stage is set, it is time for everyone to take their places. Odin has every right to be distrustful of Loki, of course not everything he says is deception. I wonder what Leider is up to, no good that much is sure.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 8

I do wonder how far this situation will go. Bit by bit, Senta is changing as well as a certain frost giant aka Loki. I commend Thor on seeing the good in everything even when its not there. Seems the brothers went home chasing their own tails. I guess they did not take a hint oh well. It seems Odins awake, the plot thickens.

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Date: November 15 2014 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 7

No offense but I think senta is better without her family. There is more to life than what she thought. No way was that going to end without a hitch. They certainly did not expect what occurred. 

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 8

Loki is growing in me. Thor is still my fave, I love Chris Hemsworth as Thor. Marvel is killing me with changing Thor into a woman Thor is supposed to be a fine man!

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Date: November 14 2014 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I really like this couple.  I never thought I would read a fic about Loki and an OC, but I think you did very well here and I also find Senta interesting.  Do you happen to have a pic of her?  I am hoping that if they do go ahead and have sex that she does fall pregnant....just to see what a demon who burns and a Frost giant produce as a child.  It would be funny if the child looks like Thor.  Hahahaha!



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you!!! And I'll try to post a picture of Senta in the next chapter. LOL if their baby looked like Thor, who knows how Loki would feel. :)

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Date: November 11 2014 09:14 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Senta still hasn't broken Loki off a piece, shame on her!  I don't like her father as he allows his wife to mistreat his daughter which is wrong because it isn't Senta's fault that she was born.  Thank you for updating you made my day!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for enjoying the story! Senta and Loki may or may not...you know what hehehe. 

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Date: November 04 2014 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 7

Senta still hasn't broken off a piece for Loki? Thanks for this wonderful update!

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Date: November 03 2014 03:35 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Poor Thor he always hopes against hope for Loki

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Date: October 26 2014 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Okay I just want to.for the record make it clear that it may be best for now that Senta stays where she is. When everything comes full circle, not all the relaxation techniques in the word is going to help anyone. Oh and this build on Loki and Senta's viewpoints is well appreciated.

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Date: September 14 2014 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Okay it is clear that things will only increase with each chapter. It's kind of cute to see Thor's wants to see the good in things persona.

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Date: September 14 2014 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I would be lying if I said everything is going to be fine. Nothing is what it seems in this story. I for one have no problem with the tension and killing attempts. I do wonder how long this little charade will go on.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 04:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Senta is a spit fire but Loki can read her very well.

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Date: September 13 2014 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Alexander is simply beautiful,  every inch of his 6'5 inch form!!  Loki is catching feelings!! Senta your father sold you,, realize that sweetie.



Author's Response:

LOL Yes he is! And Loki will definitely find out the hard way about how he feels for Senta. Surtur is very sneaky, maybe he isn't done using Senta as a pawn. Hehehe, thanks for reviewing!

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Date: August 23 2014 02:42 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Wow, that was cold of Sutur to leave Senta behind.  It looks like Senta will teach Loki about love ans his mind won't be able to handle it at first.  Loki definitely likes what he sees!! Good stuff!!!

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Date: August 17 2014 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

This is interesting and I like it. Keep the updates coming.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm slowly updating, but I'm getting there lol!

Reviewer: miss jlb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 3

Eventhough I had little to say before, there are no words to describe how this makes me feel. Onthe one hand, this story is becoming more interesting with each chapter. I wonder how far this can go and what the end  result will be? All in due time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews! I hope you keep enjoying the story!

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh this will end well.

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Date: August 05 2014 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting.

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Date: August 05 2014 05:20 am



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