Chase and Maya are so cute together. The update was really good..
They are good together. I really enjoy writing them. Thank you for reading and for te review. It makes writing worth it when ya'll appreciate it.Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:29 pm
Thank you!! Thanks for the review!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:17 pm
Maya is growing by leaps and bounds. Maya is opening up and sharing her story her way. Are you going to have Maya practice shooting ? I don't want her to having any problems shooting Domingo! !
pmgayles!!!! I've been wondering where you were. I haven't seen any " Happy Hump Day" or " Good morning" in the shout box. Chase is helping Maya open up and she is absolutely willing. I never thought about her shooting or her experience with guns. Maybe? Thanks for the idea. As always, I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 05:29 pm
Great update & Great Job! So happy Maya and Chase finally got together, I can't wait for more from those two.
Please post soon, this chapter was well worth the wait :D
Me too. I'm looking forward to writing more of them together. Thanks for still reading and the review.Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 03:58 pm
I love this story. Fantastic job.cant wait for the next chapter
Awwww... Thank you for the encouragement. Hopefully I can have the next chapter up by next week. Thank you for reading and reviewing :-)Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 03:19 pm
I need a drink that was so hotttttttt!!!!!!
LOl! And that was just oral. Thanks for reading and reviewing.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:18 am
well, that's picture perfect :)
and i have been checking for your updates everyday :D
Thank you for checking for updates, it makes feel so fancy. :-) Thank you for following this story, I thought it was perfecct for Chase and Maya too. I appreciate the kind review.Reviewer: Tannistha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 08:05 am
Hi hope all is will when will ch.5 be up
Yes. All is well. I've been fun busy. I started a comic/sci-fi meet up group and did some stuff with that for the past 2 weekends. Thanks for asking. The next chapter should be up late today or early tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing.Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 11:59 pm
I loved the update! It was sad that Maya had to go through that because of her mom but great because Chase accepted all of her! No wonder she's so shy! Hope she can blossom in a relationship with him.
Maya story is very sad but I think Chase is the right person to pull her out of her shell and help her accept herself. Thank you for reading my story. I'm soo happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 04:43 am
YAAAAAAY! an update! this chapter was so goooooood! her mother was a cracked out psycho. i feel so bad for maya the only memory she has of her mother is her walking the streets and stabbing her with a knife. man, this girl has been through so much shit. but im so glad chase is there for her and the fact that he realized he loves her i was like awwwwwwwwwwwww. i did a happy dance when he left that other girl. maya really needs someone there for her especially since her dad died. omg whats gonna happen with her and chase next chapter you cant leave me hanging its too good girl lol i love this story! and good job
Ahhhh! I'm so glad you liked it! Maya has been through a lot and she does need Chase there for her to help her realize what a beautiful person she is. I am soo happy he figured out he loves her, now what will he do with that realization? We'll find out next chapter. Thank you for your review it really motivates me to continue working on the next chapter and hopefully have it out by next week. Thanks for reading Heartless808!Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 02:00 pm
Maya shared her situation with her human incubator with Chase and it was good!! I am team Chase all the way!! What the hell was her thinking when he married a drugged out ho? So good ad usual!
pmgayles!!! I'm glad she's trusting him and allowing him in. It's like Aunt Glenda said men will do some crazy shit for pussy even try to reform a druggie ho. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 04:02 am
YOU HAVE TO MAKE LONGER CHAPTERS LOVE IT
Thank you !!!! I will. I just thought this was a good cut off point before the next chapter which will contains a lot of them together. Thank you for reading and reviewing.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 03:12 am
I have been waiting for this! It was emotional. And revealing. I can't wait until the next chapter. Poor Maya.
I'm working on the next one. I'm glad you've liked it and felt the emotional side of it. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 01:49 am
Dang I have been waiting to get the info on the mom! After hearing all of that I'm glad that was the last that we will have to see of her! She was horrible. Oh and Veronica is little better. I guess Chase would not have been going on three dates to get it from her. You have a way of writing women that showcases just how different we are. Thank you for the update and you know I can't wait for another 😄
Thank you MissCO. Her mom was pretty bad but like everyone who knows what kind of shit she went through to make her like that. Thank you for the compliment on my writing, that means a lot to me. I'm working on the next chapter and will hopefully have it up by next week. Thank you so much for your review.Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 03:43 pm
Loved it glad he didn't mess up by getting with someone else and bringing them home. Glad he realized he's in love & got to see her scars and the story behind them & he finally kiss kisses her
Yes! He finally got some back story to her. It will be interesting to see how he's going to proceed with his new feelings for her. Thank you for reading and reviewing.Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 03:04 pm
Poor Maya. Omg! What a tragedy! To almost die at the hands of your own mother?This chapter had me tearing up. Chase needs to take things slow with Maya. She's got a lot of healing to do. I'm glad that Chase didn't have sex with that shank. Great work showing the growing bond between Chase and Maya.
Thanks azzure1020. Maya has been through a lot in her life, Chase definetely needs to take it slow with her and allow her to start loving and accepting herself. I'm glad Chase was aware enough to know he didn't want Veronica. I want to show that Chase and Maya's bond isn't purely based on physical attraction that there is more to them. Thank you for reading.Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 07:56 am
Maya made me cry!
Chase is so stupid....lol!
That's men for you, not always the sharpest tools in the shed. LOL! Maya has been through a lot but maintains her sweetness and innocence, I think that's what makes me sad for her. Thank you for reading and reviewing flikchick.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 06:00 am
Hell yeah, I liked it.
I can not wait to meet Glenda. Love her.
So, Chase is in luvvv. Fabu.
This is such a sweet story even though there's so much pain invloved.
Well worth the wait, Chica.
Thank you BellaChica! Aunt Glenda is something else and the funniest thing is she's based on one of my friends. Chase is so cute in love. I love writing this sweet love story it makes me feel happy when I read it. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 05:46 am
Amazing as usual! I like how chase didn't sleep with the Latino bimbo lol please keep up the good work!
I'm glad Chase was smart enough to realize he didn't want just a quickie. Thank you for reading this story and reviewing it.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 05:41 am