Love the new chapters
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2018 02:39 am
Great chapter...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2018 06:29 pm
I love Storm!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2018 05:06 am
Poor Sally...she needs Storm...glad to see an update...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2017 02:54 pm
What if Salina get's her memory back Storm? I know you are trying to protect, because when she remembers Sally will will think she's not good enough for you and run away. Thank you for updating this phenonmenal story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2017 02:20 am
Salina deserves to know the truth. I’m afraid the shit will really hit the fan when (it’s only a matter of time) Salina not only finds out that she was raped, but that Storm knew and did not tell her.
Reviewer: darqchild Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2017 01:55 am
COMEEEEE OOONNNNN YOU HAVE TO GIE US MORE THIS KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER
Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2017 06:38 pm
I been following this story; I'm thinking I missed something due to the time between updates. Was Salina unaware she was not a virgin when she first had sex? She is in the medical field and never looked at her own medical records? The person she is; with her need to know everything about herself; I'm thinking she would have read them. Was the man with Churn one of her rapists? Her subconcious obviously remembers him. What is the time frame from rape to leaving the hospital after the coma, did she bare a child by her rapist? Also; what is to stop her from being killed now that the other players know they are not going to get any additional monies from her father's estate? There is no more incentive to keep her alive, unless there is a child to inherit. in fact it makes more sense to kill her, use her land for nefarious purposes and by the time anyone figures out the port is being used they would have made more than enough money to just abandon the port. Sorry for the questions but I feel as if I am lost or maybe I'm confusing this story with another.
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2017 04:28 am
You know it's true love... when they put your needs and your safety before their own. They deserve each other. Great update honey!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2017 04:00 am
This is getting so complicated!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2017 05:09 pm
They are in love
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2017 06:03 am
Salina doesn't know that she probably can't have kids, I hope that there is still a small percentage of a chance. She and Storm deserve to have a family.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2017 02:10 am
They divested each other of their clothes, not devised...a good story in need of serious editing..
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2017 03:40 am
Great update honey!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2017 05:02 pm
They both were keeping secrets. Now the fun begins. Great update honey
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2017 04:10 pm
Wow...it's finally coming together...Sally has been a mystery and it's a doozey...good job...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2017 09:58 pm
Definitely glowed better.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2017 02:26 pm
Awesome as usual. I love how the action flows despite the fact the updates don't always flow quickly. Although, I will have to reread the previous chapters because I don't remember the robbery.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2017 02:18 pm
OMG!!!! This story is really, really good, I didn't want it to end....Can't wait for the next
chapter..
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2017 01:02 am
Now that is a way to end a chapter. Great build up and cliff hanger.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2017 08:38 am
Another hot a$$ scene, yeah! My sexy scene quota has been successfully met in a story.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2017 07:31 am
Now that was one of the best love... first time scenes written. Disturbingly sexy. Subtle and erotic.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2017 06:35 am
Thank you for updating!! Storm now knows which Sally is, but there is another name used in an earlier chapter. I think the name was Lily, how many names does Sally have? Why would the DEA involved with a no-drug related murder case of a Caribbean investment broken?
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2017 05:50 am
Please don't stay away so long. Update soon.
Reviewer: connie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 23 2017 08:29 am
Yes anothr update!! I still find Sally annoying however, Storm is protective and I love that about him.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2017 11:43 pm