Loved the update! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed




Date: September 15 2015 04:00 am
TThanks for the update!
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2015 11:16 pm
So was her dad watching her? I wonder...
Update soon
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2015 10:58 pm
Yes girl they are talking about you! You are 18 run the hell away to the forest and find out why it peeks your interest so much. Forget them
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2015 10:40 pm
Now this is going to be good. What a way to start this. I'm excited!
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2015 10:21 pm
On the one hand I feel so bad for the way Vic is being treated. On the other, I'm impressed at how she hasn't let it destroy her. Is her father still out there waiting for an opportunity to get her back. I so want her to be reunited with the man she never knew. Once she is, there will be HELL to pay.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed




Date: September 14 2015 08:21 pm
I am team David!!! He protects and loves her as no oje in her life has done before. Emerald is evil and her grandmother woll just allow him to take her. David needs to take her and his sister and leave immediately
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: September 14 2015 11:19 am
I like it, keep updating this wonderful story,
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 11:55 am
Interesting update! Hope she discovers the truth soon. Wonder where is Lord Cadeyrn?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed




Date: November 06 2014 03:07 am
Me likey! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed




Date: November 06 2014 02:17 am
I like this. Keep going please :)
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed




Date: November 05 2014 10:53 pm
I want Victoria to get away to the forest so that revenge can be had for killing her mother and kidnapping Victoria. After Caderyn is killed, please kill Sylvia? These are some evil and vile people whise annilation is at hand. Goos stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: November 05 2014 01:05 pm
wow! this was a GREAT START! more please!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed



Date: September 28 2014 01:27 pm
Wow really interesting, keep going please. 😁
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed




Date: September 27 2014 09:33 pm
Wow, can't wait for Lord Caderyn to die. He is evil and a punk!! Please continue!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: September 23 2014 12:57 pm