Reviews For Play
Title: Play

<p>Hey Caramelgal you're my favorite girl ever. First the info on MTSU now this story.</p>
<p>How in the world did I miss it? You did a great job.</p>
<p>Those slurping sounds are weird!!!</p>

Author's Response:

Oh you're too kind and I'm just glad it was to your liking. Girl...those slurping sounds are atrocious lol. Thanks lleendaah!

CG

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 09:34 am

Title: Play

Well, Charlie certainly put the spark back in there, didin't she?  Very well done!



Author's Response:

Most definitely. Hopefully, she can finish what she’s started. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Veruca Pierce.

CG

Reviewer: Veruca Pierce Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 01:37 pm

Title: Play

Hot and sweet

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 05:00 am

Title: Play

That was a very good quickie! I know I am not the only reader who enjoys a QUICKIE every now and then....(in more ways than one!)

 

 



Author's Response: I agree, sometimes a good quickie is necessary. Thanks for reading & reviewing KittyOh48. CG

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 06:42 pm

Title: Play

Excellent!! I loved it.



Author's Response:

Glad you loved it! Thanks for reading & reviewing jjazz59.

CG

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 09:41 pm

Title: Play

I loved this short story.  I was very entertained.  I had no idea you could do that with a grapefruit. I need to get out more. 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you loved it and until I saw that video I didn't either. I'm a bit of a hermit crab. So unless it's something viral on the internet, then I never would've known about it at all. Thanks for reading and reviewing azzure1020.

CG

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 06:22 am

Title: Play

Really good!!  I enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading & reviewing lajack1.

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 02:08 am

Title: Play

I really enjoyed this story--erotic, with good romance. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 02:04 am

Title: Play

Grapefruit..hmmm interesting lol.  I don't like grapefruit but maybe oranges would work!  She definitely brought the spice back in their relationship.  Hopefully it stays like that for awhile.  Loved the writing!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she did suggest navel oranges in the video, so that's an options too. And I highly doubt she'll ever have a problem with "spicing it up" after that. Especially if she keeps a stash of grapefruits around. Thanks for reading and reviewing aDreamaFantasy.

CG

Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 05:11 pm

Title: Play

Wow; that was so hot!  Great job on your first writing foray; very enjoyable read:)

Hope to see more of your work.



Author's Response:

This was a tough one because I really wanted to channel the "steaminess" from the situation into words. I'm happy you liked it and I'll definitely be posting more in the near future. Thanks for reading and reviewing Amiefuzzy.

CG

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 03:24 pm

Title: Play

I really want to try this!!



Author's Response:

I haven't tried it personally, BUT I know some ladies who have. Apparently it works. I mean you never know. Right? Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 02:29 pm

Title: Play

That is the way to get your manNV back on track sexually, highjack his ass!!  That was sexy!!  I have to try that on my man, after he's earned the right to taste my goodies. 



Author's Response:

YES to "highjack[ing] his ass!" You're a trip! I'm happy to have inspired you on pleasing your soon to be VERY satisfied man. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing pmgayles.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 01:47 pm

Title: Play

Very good Caramelgal. I liked it. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! If it weren't for you and the other ladies bringing up the topic I doubt I would have tackled it. Thanks for reading and reviewing shadow.

CG

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 10:31 am



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