Whoa that was intensely good. And you managed not to get too dirty with it. I applaud your vivid use of imagery. Your skill allowed me to feel as though I was in that moment myself. Great job!!
Author's Response:
Thank you MissCo. It was something I was trying out but I'm glad you got the feel of it. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2014 07:02 am
Goddamn that was hot! I liked it.
Author's Response:
Aww... Thank you CaramelGAl. I was trying something new. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2014 01:14 am
*pop* HOT!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Khamalani! I was just messing around with this.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2014 02:28 pm