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Title: Disappointment

Welcome back, he has to break it off with Jenna. That's going to be ugly..

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 12:13 pm
Title: Disappointment

You know all Caleb has to do is break it off with Jenna. The situation would still be filled with drama for later. But Caleb isn!t taking in Grey's feelings with him keeping Jenna in the picture. I'm just saying. And now Jenna is telling his mom stuff thats not entirely true. 

 Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 12:11 pm
Title: Disappointment

Jenna is a stalker! !   Caleb it is wrong for you to use Jenna. I love this story, but I won't get my HEA.  Sigh.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 12:10 pm
Title: Disappointment

Wow, what a dilemma they love each other but can't be together. That would cause any strong relationship to be strained. But this so hard on the love they are trying to develop.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 10:36 am
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

Yay an update.  Jenna is relentless.Caleb just needs to tell her he isn't interested and they need to go off to college together if they want to hide their love.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 08:07 am
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

Enjoying this story, great pace, can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 01:37 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

Wow, that is different, but I like it!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 09:36 am
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

Wow, that is different, but I like it!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 09:36 am
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

Omg this story is so beautiful..I'm so addicted to it...dying to read the next chapter..update soon!!!!!



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Thanks!

 Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2014 01:14 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

This is so good. I love Grey and Caleb.

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2014 02:02 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

I love this story! You now have a definite follower!



Author's Response:

Thanks! U should check out my historical fiction!

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 11:32 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

😍

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 04:39 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

What was Caleb's reaction to Jenna's decision to go to Australia with him?  How are he and Grey giung to continue this secret affair? It's going to get messy. Good update! 

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 03:04 pm
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

He's sweet. He really loves her and is willing to wait for her. This was so good.  I know Jenna is gonna be a problem. Caleb and Grey need to move away to college together and see how they really feel about each other.  Good chapter!!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 08:26 am
Title: Sister

Perhaps Caleb can tell Jenna that he has met someone in Aust. and later on can say it didn't work out and date Gray?  Although this will only bring out more lies, it may be the best way to go bc right now Gray is showing herself a sneak messing with her annoying best mate's man and bc Caleb didn't set boundaries he is coming across as a player. 

Who did Caleb use to tell he was going to marry Gray?  If it was the parents, then they may not be so surprise.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 07:24 am
Title: Jealousy* Kiss

When is Caleb kicking to Jenna to the curb? That heifer is delusional! ! Grey ia truly annoying, don't string him along he loves you dummy!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 02:38 am
Title: Confused* Acceptance

She is legally his sister not by blood!  I think they need to go to their parents and tell them what's going on, because this has the potential to hurt the whole family as well as friends new and old.  Although Jenne is falling in love with Calab he needs to be a man and tell her that he is not in love with her and that he loves someone else so she can move on.  Calab's and Grey's new budding relationship is going to hurt her the most because she is under the impression that she has him and she is going to believe that Calab is cheating with her best mate.  That is a receipe for revenge!!!!!

I hope there is more soon!!!!

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 12:50 pm
Title: Confused* Acceptance

I'm liking this, hope you update soon, very soon!

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 10:04 am
Title: Timid

It's so good. I didn't even see this update until tonight.  I just wonder how they are going to be together?? The family will be dead set against it. If they move to Australia they can be together, but how long will that last? I like how you're pacing the story 

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 05:25 am
Title: Confused* Acceptance

I find them to be quite adorable actually. I do feel sorta bad for Jenna being though poor girl.

 Reviewer: simplymandy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 05:14 pm
Title: Confused* Acceptance

This can't end well.

I hope Caleb goes to Australia. Maybe time away would help him. This will cause all kinds of havoc in the family. What a mess.

I feel for Caleb. He is so hurt and frustrated. He knows this is not going to be a good thing. But he's loved her for sooo long, will he ever be able to truly let her go.

Grey needs time. She's needs to be real clear about what she wants before embarking on such a dangerous path. Caleb's pressuring her is not helping. He's had years with his true feelings for her, she's had a very short time to deal with this bombshell that's been dropped in her lap. What a mess.

Update soon.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 11:50 am
Title: Confused* Acceptance

It's  getting really weird.  Will they  go to Australia and live  happily ever after? Or confront  everyone and spill  the beans? Next update!! Lol!!

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 06:44 am
Title: Confused* Acceptance

When is he going to tell Jenna to get lost?  Grey is being selfish, Caleb is in love with you and being around you is causing him pain. Why would you want him to continiously hurt, Grey?I  love this story! I am also loving the rapid updates!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 05:06 am
Title: Confused* Acceptance

They will be together

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 04:56 am
Title: Timid

Oh...

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2014 04:39 am


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