Reviews For COLORLESS
Title: Chapter 35

Why some people can't just live their lives and leave other people along.

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Date: August 22 2015 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 33

Now that is a real man, he sounds like my beloved.

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Date: August 22 2015 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 32

This hoe will never give it up!!!

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Date: August 22 2015 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 30

Man I'm ready to kick some ass hurting that baby like that.

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Date: August 22 2015 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 28

What done at night comes to the light, I can't wait for the white to be blowned off these recknecks.

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Date: August 22 2015 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Man!! that's so straight up bullsh*t, no way they charge him with murder that fool was trying to kill him. That's so backwoods hillbilly justice.

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Date: August 22 2015 10:02 pm

Title: Chapter 41

I had hoped maybe some of Camille's biological family would have a little contrition after what they did but I can see they are still rotten to the core. Screw them. If that old lady dies, it's because she was meant to. Screw that family. Don't do it Camille. Don't allow those vipers anywhere near your children because they would try to poison them and put things in their head that isn't healthy. Her two sisters are bitter bitches and I hope they rot. Stay strong Camille. You don't owe them a thing. 

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Date: August 22 2015 09:53 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I'm speechless.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 23

That was a very mature love scene , EXCELLENT!!!!

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Date: August 22 2015 09:43 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I love the fact that they are teaching themselves and Savannah about her culture.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 21

This hoe have slept with the whole kkk and she's worrying about one man. This piece of Sh*t just don't want to except that she's not good enough for Hiram and Camille is.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I would have bite those rednecks old shrivel up peckers off!! good thing Hiram came home when he did.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Good riddance!!!

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Date: August 22 2015 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 15

What a nightmare I'm hoping it don't come true.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:11 pm

Title: Supporting Cast 1

Nice supporting cast, no you didn't cast George Hamilton as Larry the cable guy, that's hilarious.

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Date: August 22 2015 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 11

What! how the hell this woman can not want her child because her skin tone is darker then her other children. Black people come in different hues Mr and Mrs. Baxter, these people are tripping.

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Date: August 22 2015 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Sister Elaine is a judgemental trot, people change sister Elaine everyday.

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Date: August 22 2015 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 8

It's hard to believe that Hiram came from that evil troll of a mother.

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Date: August 22 2015 08:48 pm

Title: Main Cast

I don't want to mess with the flow of the reviews, but the cast is beautiful.

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Date: August 22 2015 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 41

THat is absolutely crazy. I can't believe they really thought it was okay to ask that girl that. That's her fucking problem not Camille's. She should have thought about that when she left her ass there at the hospital. Bitter ass women, they deserve to rot in hell with the rest of their damn family. YOu mad because your 'fair skin' didn't get you a man? Too bad. I think Savvy will take the news good. At least she will understand why they don't talk about their families and what happened at the store now. She deserves to know everything. It would help her understand who she is and help with her identity issues.

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Date: August 22 2015 07:56 pm

Title: Chapter 40

Aww their wedding was soo cute. She's pregnant!!!! Yay. Two boys. Oh Lord. Twins. Give me some girls Camille!!!! LOl

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Date: August 22 2015 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 39

Awww. That is great. He finally has the family he wants. The woman he loves, his daughter and nephew. The perfect family. They all seem really happy. Now about these babies!!!! LOl.

Sad its almost over....

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Date: August 22 2015 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Wow love how you always twist it around, just when you think one thing you come up with another love it. They have five kids hey are doing well Savannah is growing up & asking questions on her birth mother, Harim, & Camille's parents. I was Az

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Date: August 22 2015 03:10 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Wow, her family is still evil I see.  I wouldn't get tested , that old ho would die and go meet Satan.  Satan has special place ready for her and her demon spawn as well. I love their family and thw fact that Stevie grew up with more  love than he probably thought was possible.   Kids are cruel, Savvie don't let those make you doubt your living family.  So good!!

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Date: August 22 2015 02:10 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Fantastic update.

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Date: August 22 2015 02:08 pm



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