Reviews For COLORLESS
Title: Chapter 27

That trick is soo desperate it is absolutely ridiculous. Her mother is right, let it go. She is going to get people killed and herself killed over a man that does not want her. She has already gotten a man killed and Hiram put in jail over ther obsession. How far will this go. 

I feel soo bad for Steven. How could they treat him like that? He is a child, why would anyone want to destroy his innocence like that? He can't have friends now? If he doesn't want to live that way then fine. Shit, kids don't always turn out the way parents want, that's apart of life. Beating him senseless isn't going to change anything. I hope he gets away and finds Hiram

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 02:33 pm

Title: Chapter 26

Now that's how you start the new year!!! LOl. 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 02:10 pm

Title: Secound Act

I'm loving this plotline. Can't wait to get the juice!!! 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 01:46 pm

Title: Chapter 25

It's crazy to think that your own family and close friends will turn on you in the blink of an eye. I would have tried to kill them all, it was either that or they hang you like they would anyone else. But of course he was arrested. At least it was just that. The police could have just delivered him to the Klan or something like that. I hope they get out, I know that bitch is still looking for him.

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 01:42 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I can't believe they actually said those things to her face. Their entire family is a peice of shit and will be dealt with accordingly. That is simply horrible. A damn reputation over your own flesh and blood. All she did was come into this world looking different. I wonder how many Baxters there were out there whose skin was a lil darker than what they expected. Her dark skin had to come from somewhere.

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 01:03 pm

Title: Chapter 23

This was great. What a Christmas gift that is!!! Haha. LOl.

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 12:41 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Wow, why now when everything trying to is starting to look up? Great update!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 04 2015 10:24 am

Title: Chapter 22

That is cool. I commend Camille for wanting to expose Savvy to that. She doesn't have to because she isn't Jewish but to want to at least keep her memories of her birth mother in her life is truly amazing. Savvy is blessed with amazing parents. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 21

Those sisters are just sickening to me. Pitiful. Craziness but I actually agree with those brothers. Give it a fucking rest! He doesn't want you so move the hell on. You didn't have a problem fucking every white man walking so go back to that. Jesus 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 20

Well well... I do hope they are safe out there. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 19

I love Hiram!!! Stand up for what's right. Even if everyone around you doesn't agree. But they do need to get out, things just went from bad to absolute worse. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 18

His pecker. LOl that's a new one. And I don't blame him, don't tell me not to do something and then I catch you doing it a week later and apprarently you have been doing it for quite some time because she was pregnant. Who's the coward now. It would make anyone question everything that you were told by that person. He deserved to die the way he did. If not worse. They should have wrote on him that he fathered a black child. Sitting there crying over him being hanged but rejoice over a black person being hanged. What the hell 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 17

I knew that bitch was going to be trouble. I lowkey want Hiram to kill her fuck ass. Penis is not that damn serious!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 16

Hiram is such a great father. I'm glad that the Klan didn't pull him back into that lifestyle. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 15

That nightmare is definitely scary. I can actually see the Klan trying to do something like that. Especially because Debbie saw them together. I hope they don't do any craziness like that but who knows. I'm glad that he will be there to protect them though. Look at him, moving in.... What's next for them. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Both situations are sad to me. Living during times like this took a lot of strength. You're going to kill that man because he called you out on cheating him out of his money. What's fair is fair and he should have paid him. He has a family just like they do and color doesn't make him any less of a man. I can't believe that parents wouldn't want a child because of her color. Y'all are all black. The Klan could care less if you were dark or light skinned. To them, black was black end of story. Every child deserves love. She seemed like an exceptional young woman and for those mothers to not want her because she was 'too dark' is simply unacceptable. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Uh Oh!!! He's cooking for them now. They are getting to know each other more. Well she is learning more about Hiram... When will he learn about her is the question. I wonder what that girl is going to do to try and force Hiram to be with her

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 10:09 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Aww man. This trick here is about to cause all kinds of uproar over somebody who doesn't want her and never did. Desperate ass females. I figured someone would see them at the store but did it have to be her of all people. Geesh! They are too cute together, I'm mad the doctor walked in before Hiram could get his flirt on. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 09:47 pm

Title: Supporting Cast 1

Look at TD Jakes!! LOl 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Damn... I wouldn't want parent like that at all. A child is a blessing that should never be taken for granted. I can't believe that they would just abandon and act like she didn't exist. Now it's like Hiram's family is doing that to him. Truly sad. Can't imagine how that would feel

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 07:56 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wow.... She is better than me. I would have slapped her. She is completely disrespectful and she has no right to. Is she jelous of her or something. Where did that come from? I understand her being cautious because of who he is and his family name but she over stepped her boundaries. If the Rev accepted him into the church then she should just deal with it or leave. Plain and simple. She is just as bad as the whites who cling to the Klan mentality. All whites aren't bad just like all blacks aren't bad. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 9

I like your approach. It's not just about them, even though I can't stand his family or the Klan. These people are so narrow minded. Putting petty beliefs before their own family. At the end of the day, family is all you have, not sadistic and egotistical ideals. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 8

Aww how has he been hurt? Besides losing the mother of his child and his family basically disowning him? They are already attracted to each other. LOl. One big happy family

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 7

He seems to fall into the father role like he didn't miss anything. He is really good with her. Maybe they all can move to New York together. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

Aww I like this first meeting. I'm glad it wasn't akward or anything. I hope that when this year is over he doesn't take her away from Camille. She needs a mother and a father figure

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 02:41 am



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