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Title: Chapter 45

Them Baxter's are evil and are going to hell wearing gasoline draws and a pork chops necklace for the hounds of hell.    Mildred didn't deserve your kindness Camille because she sure didn't show you any.  What Savie did was really stupid, but why didn't she talk to Hiram?  Had she asked maybe Camille would have told her the truth?  



Author's Response:

I could have done it that way but it would have been boring. Savannah is 12-13 years old and kids don't make the best

choices she thought it was a good idea for her project and was just curious.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 11:53 pm

Title: Chapter 45

I'm glad Camille spoke her peace and let those evil people know that what they think of her doesn't matter anymore. That they are " The pot that called the kettle black" no pun intended. Girl I wanted Camille and Hiram to kick some " High yellow sidity butts" for messing with their children. I'm also happy Savannah finally got her answers, even though they  probably wasn't what she hoped for. The guilt this child was living with thinking she was the cause of Priscilla's death was heartbreaking. They are truly healing each other. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 11:44 pm

Title: Chapter 45

Wonderful chapter. Poor Savannah!!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 44

It was good then this chapter kind of ruined it for me. To me someone's whiping post and then mourn when they die, its not natural its sad.

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 44

Savannah needs to know about Priscilla and the Jewish faith. So Mean Milly has died I hope she found the lord because hell is HOT and Busy. Camille should feel no worries she has good intentions but God choose another outcome. That evil sister trying to make her feel bad better watch out, because she could be in the same situation that evil mildred was in and need Camille herself. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 44

Ohh....wow. Definitely boohooed at the end of this update. Poor Camille all that pain...smh. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 44

I feel for Camille but I am glad the heffa is gone. It is between her and the Lord know to account for herself.  

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 44

I feel for Camille but I am glad the heffa is gone. It is between her and the Lord know to account for herself.  

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 44

Please don't let Camille cry one more tear over that wretched woman. Let those horrible people stay to themselves. I'm sorry but that whole family doesn't deserve a squirrel fart of empathy from Camille. I know she is hurting because she probably feels that there is some good in everyone and that she wasn't being a good Christian but that's not true. For evil to prevail good must either look the other way or go along with the program. Camille doubted her choice only when she compared that viper to Savanah's birth mother. That's like comparing apple juice to piss. Again, I plead you to not let her suffer over her decision because if that vile woman would have lived she would have taken the same pot shots at Camiile that her spawn did. The sad part is I'm speaking from experience on this but the good is I didn't let people like this into my life for very long. 

 

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 44

The Baxters are an evil lot. They have no right to make Camille feel guilty. I hope she never hears from them again. They only cause nothing but pain.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 44

Although Mildred was a mean, selfish, ungrateful old bitch, who did not deserve Camille's bone marrow...Camille did the right thing even though it was too late. Her sisters and brothers need to suffer with the knowledge they couldn't save the old bitch either! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 11:41 am

Title: Chapter 44

I don't think it is right for Camille to really have that type of guilt in her mind after Mildred Baxter and her birth siblings' behavior towards her.  Then Mildred passed away and the Baxter siblings did not even have the courtesy to tell Camille - the person they were guilting into helping them that she passed away and then had the nerve to exclude her from the funereal proceedings now that she is not useful to them.  Camille needs to write that whole Baxter family off.  They are all malicious and selfish in their actions and she is blessed to not be like them or raised by them.  She would have been treated horribly and should have no guilt over taking her time to decide on having a procedure that is invasive to her body to help some evil old woman who has never shown her a shred of kindness. Shame on that Baxter family.  Karma needs to be that bitch for that whole family.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 44

I'm glad that old battle axe is dead. Hope she's in hell. But I feel like that's a very unsatisfying ending. Those Baxters are blaming Camille for not getting tested when they were the ones who treated her like crap. They didn't really learn a lesson except to hate their 'evil dark skinned" sister. I hope the siblings learn a lesson because that just kind of feels unsatisfying if they don't. I hope Ethan shows up for Savvy and I hope Camille doesn't feel guilty over that old devil dying. Hope her siblings all go in a flaming car crash. Maybe they will need Camille for something else. Wouldn't it be funny if on her death bed Mildred had some kind of change of heart and left something to Camille. That would piss her siblings off even though I doubt it because that woman was evil til the end. Sigh, poor Camille 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 44

She should get her peace of mind knowing that she was going to do the right thing, perhaps if Mildred had been decent to her, the transplant could have happen sooner.  I hope she doesn't go to that funeral, bc that would make her a glutton for punishment.   Hoping Ethan shows up for Savvy.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 44

Thank God the old bitty died, good riddance to bad rubbish!!  It's called karma Odessa, it is coming for all you as well.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 43

I hope Camille doesn't get the test but I bet she will wonder what if because she's too good a person. Maybe they'll find out that either she's not a match or she is a match but for some reason Mildred dies anyway. That family is disgusting. As for Savannah, I hope Ethan goes to her Bat Mitzvah, or maybe they can change the date so more people can come to Savannah's party. It would be hilarious if people say Chelsea's party was boring and Savannah's was better. I'm sure Chelsea has some hateful ass parents for her to behave like that. I hope everyone gets what's coming to them. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 43

Please let Ethan go to Savvy's party.  That Chelsea girl needs a whoopin' by somebody and soon! Sweet Thirteen ???  Wth is that! Also, if Camille gets tested I hope she isn't a match.  That way she did what she felt was right, but she'll die anyway.  Also I wonder if all those kids really were tested? some seem selfish enough not to do it themselves and lie about it.  Just saying.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 42

Great chapter, sad but necessary for Savvy to hear those things.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 02:08 pm

Title: Chapter 43

There is nothing redeeming about Mildred. I know God preaches forgiveness but you don't have to ignorant. Why risk your health for such a evil women. All she sees is Camille color. She does not see her as a daughter or even relate to on level as mother to mother. Mildred is paying the price for her pass misdeeds.

As for Savvy, school can be hard any little girl. Mean girls are the worst. She'll survive.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 43

I'm stuck... As much as I hate that worthless hag, I'd get tested to see and if I'm a match ok but they gonna have to treat me with respect or I'm not giving it to her... She doesn't get dust and indeed get the karma my thing is she deserves much worse and her kids are gonna get it as well. 

Now he better go to her party lol, reminded me of a movie where the mean girl had nobody at her party... Or the proud' family party episode lol

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 43

Nah, Mildred can die

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 02:54 pm

Title: Chapter 43

I don't think that she should take the test. Or even if she did, she shouldn't tell the family. These are not nice people. Entitled much? Tough decision.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:40 pm

Title: Chapter 43

No, don't kill Mildred yet, let Camille give her the bone marrow, but in a strange side effect make Mildred color change from creamy beige to milk chocolate...and watch how the Baxter family react to this. Let her see how her society friends shun her. That would really kill her!

Ethan needs to come to Savannah's party since he will be her boyfriend, and eventually her husband.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 11:33 am

Title: Prologue

I would of made and instant U-turn how dare you be rude and nasty when you're asking me for something. Camille should be glad she wasn't raised with those horrible people or she would turn out to be just like them.the old bat is lucky camomile isn't cruel and didn't pinch her oxygen cord.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 43

Camille better not give in, just the way that they still treat and talk to her should be the reason why and plus they don't care about her so why should she care about what happens to them they aren't her family anyways 

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:36 am



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