Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 11

There's too much going on in the story so it moves at a snails pace and then there's these random leaps to some real action. You're a good writer, but this story needs to be filtered out.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 07:47 am

Title: Chapter 9

The fact that she kissed Dominic or even confronted him about crushing on him was totally out of her character, it didn't even fit the person you were building her up to be. Can we atleast lay the groundwork of who she is and get to know her and Dominic's relationship better before she starts doing these random, nonsensical things? That whole part didn't even make sense. The guy shows zero signs of interest in you and you put yourself out there like that? C'mon that's not even how women like her would react. So out of character it was like I was reading about a different person. The transition wasn't smooth...just weird.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 07:32 am

Title: Chapter 11

The best, strongest and longest lasting relationships all start out as friends!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 11

  1. There could definitely be more than friendship. Plus Dominic seemed annoyed when she said just friendship 

Reviewer: ChsnteJae Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2015 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 11

Wait, I though Sasha and Dimitri already had two children.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2015 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 11

This is my first time reading and reviewing on the chamber and I find your story so refreshing and wonderfully written. I meet this beautiful lady with a equal beautiful spirit who suggested I come to this site and I'm equally impress. Thanks for making my first time viewing very enjoyable.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 11

THanks for the great update. Good chapter. Excited to see how things progres withthose two.

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 08:05 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Dominic is upset because he doesn't like that Adaline is trying to move on with her life. He can't have it both ways. But I bet if she starts seeing someone else, he's going to realize what he missed out on and I pray that Adaline doesn't make it easy for him. I hope Carla gets punched in the face. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Carla is going to ruin her new marriage by chasing someone that never wanted her.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I think she can be a stronger person if they're just friends. I believe she has accepted this but Dominic is still wanting that unconditional puppy love to fill the voids in his personal life.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 12:25 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I really love the idea of them getting there friendship back on track! One in which they were support for each other without any of the drama. I want her to find someone else to date though. Sometimes you have to find out how to be in a relationship with an unknown person to learn about yourself. I just want Adaline to be happy. Away from that crazy ass cousin of hers. What is her deal anyway? UGH.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 11

Of course they can have friendship, plz let her settle on someone else... I want this to drive him nuts... Yep, it must happen.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 11

This is the best foundation if Addy hopes to continue with Dom romantically or otherwise. Back to basics! Back to the friendship that bound them together to begin with. They both need this now. They both need someone they can just be themselves with. Warts and all. And to do so without fear of judgment, condemnation, or reprisal over some slight. To let go without all the pressure. There aren't that many people you can truly do that with. So, I'm glad Addy came to these conclusions. It frees her up to that friendship again and enables her to move forward in her heart and mind without him in that capacity. She needed to realize she really could let go and go on without bitterness toward Dom. Release the dream and she may get an even better reality with him. Besides, she has a career she's there to work on.

Dom is still processing and releasing his own drean with the Dina fiasco. He's in no condition now anyway. He needs a friend more than a lover at this point. He's getting there. Its a lot for him, too. His heart was broken in this as well. He honestly didn't see that coming.

Carla needs to be dealth with. Simple as that.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 11

Oh yeah, there can definitely be friendship between those two. I think Addy has romanticized Dom way too much. They need to deal in reality. Dom is still trying to get his head straight after Dina. He could've easily taken advantage of Addy, but he didn't. I'm looking forward to them being friends first and then finding that, yes, let's get horizontal. :)

As for that Carla chick, she's mental. Addy would do well to stay as far away from her as possible. And oh Carla, did you forget that yo ass is MARRIED? What is wrong with this chick? Addy needs to handle her ass.

Looking forward to future updates.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 11

They can be friends...now that she is at peace with her decision it will show and she will start getting asked out.  Accept every date, make news friends, and don't always be available for Dom.  Now bring on Carla. 

 It is not their time and he is right--he shouldn't be angry and he's not ready. I enjoy this story so much!  Thank you.

I think Sasha is acting do emotional and a little because os hormones and stress.  Dimi needs to reassure her that he will always be there, apparently she is having flashbacks.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 11

I love how you are setting up Adaline and Dominic's relationship....le sigh!!! I'm anxious to see what happens next! Especially when Evilyn aka Carla comes into town. Adaline is coming into her own and I feel that Dominic and Carla with her potential scheming will come to some home truths about themselves. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the new chapters. 

I am still not very much interested in New!Dina's storyline, but I am glad Dominic is moving over his hurt and called New!Dina out for her selfish behaviour. I wans't too surprised that Adalaine ended up at her gallery as I knew we wouldn't get rid of her so easily. also, kept to the minimum I can tolerate her storyline. And at least, she gave Aladine's a godd push to develop her art. So there's that...i guess ;).

Now the one I was glad to read about is Sasha. I liked that we get to read more about how she's living her life now. And I think it's pretty realistic to have her still being a bit insecure and afraid of losing the people she love. 

I also liked the turn that Dominic and Adaline's relationship seems to be taking. I am looking forward to them being friends again and getting to know each other and supporting each other. I think it should be interesting to see how "more" can happen between them this way. 

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Sasha, Sasha, Sasha you are so slow on thebuptahe!! Dimitri loves you , you special woman!!  Why does Carla hate Adeline so much?  He mother doted on her and ignored Adaline so I am no understanding all of that evil.    Addy grew up knowing she was unloved and unwanted.  Her uncle treated her nice but not too nice.  Dominic has the nerve to be upset about apology and saying that she was alright with being his friend, why?  I want him to put Carla in her place, Addy deserves to have someone on her side.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Sasha, Sasha, Sasha you are so slow on thebuptahe!! Dimitri loves you , you special woman!!  Why does Carla hate Adeline so much?  He mother doted on her and ignored Adaline so I am no understanding all of that evil.    Addy grew up knowing she was unloved and unwanted.  Her uncle treated her nice but not too nice.  Dominic has the nerve to be upset about apology and saying that she was alright with being his friend, why?  I want him to put Carla in her place, Addy deserves to have someone on her side.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 10:27 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Fantastic update.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 11

There will be more between those two. However, Dominic is kind of clueless; so it will take him a while. He better hope that Adaline is available when he finally sees the light.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 11

The time a women become pregnant it is very stressful, she is not only thinking about her baby she's also thinking about what all she can do to keep herself healthy so her baby want suffer. Sasha was wrong for not telling Dmitri about the situation with the baby it's his child too. A "Heart Murmur" is a extra sound in your heartbeat, some can be very quiet and some can sound like waves crashing against some rocks in the ocean. The sound Sasha heard could be a "Innocent Murmur" they are very common in children and sometimes pregnant women, she would have to wait until the baby is born to get a true diagnosis. Sasha is 8 months pregnant if there were anything seriously wrong with the baby's heart they the (doctor's) would've notice it by now. The situation with Adaline and Dominic I can see it growing into a relationship but I like the fact that she has forgiven him and is trying to do the friend thing, it's going to be hard because she already has strong feelings for him. Ms. Carla is a different story altogether, this chick can't stand the fact that Dominic dumped her and preferred to be friends with Adaline and not her, I can see this situation with Carla playing out like the movie " Fatal Attraction" she's thinking if I can't have him then no one will have him, especially not my cousin (over her dead body). Thanks for the update and I'm happy to hear about the upcoming publishing of Sasha: the Wallflower.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Loved this update. Addy feels more confident but she deserves some love too. She can be friends and hang out with Dominic. But she should date the other guy.  I think that could make Dominic jealous!!  Carla would hate it!!! Lol. But if she does end up with Dominic he'll have to choose her over Carla and Dina. He'll need to show Addy she's the one he wants!!! Ok I need more updates!!  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 04:00 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I want Adaline to find happiness without Dominic with another guy.

Please let Carla's husband discover her intentions for their move; have a backbone and pride and when the truth comes out about her real feelings.

Slade has to work to get back into Dina's good graces, really work.

And Dominic really has no right to tell Slade. I understand his guilt out of knowing, but still it really isn't his business.

well those are my thoughts.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2015 04:03 am

Title: Cast

im soooo happy your back !! It's not Dom's place to tell Slade but I understand why Dina is reluctant . That doesn't mean she shouldn't tell him, he doesn't deserve Sofia but he has a right to know she exist . 

I know this is wrong , but sorry not sorry , I'm sooo over seeing or reading rather about accomplished black men or just black men period with white women . It's just everywhere I look . That's why I love site like this , although I do wish for more BW&BM stories .  But it doesn't tKe away from the fact I love your writing . 

I also can understand Sasha's fear but secrets in marriages can be deadly . I hope it's that's she's having twins and nothing bad happening with the baby.

 

Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2015 07:46 pm



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