Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 7

Whatever Adaline does, she should do it for herself, not some guy. That just sets her up emotionally for failure.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 7

Maybe Adeline needs to date Murphy. Dominic is so much more experienced and it may make him jealous. I love Dominic though but he's so hung up on Dina.  Happy about the update can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 7

I just read all the  chapters love it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see this story is back in rotation. I can't wait for the new chapters. I wasn't't too surprised to see that Dina had a child with Slade, their relationship seemed stronger than her relationship with Dimitri. Besides more Adeline and Dimitri please.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter, I had a feeling Dina's daughter was Slades. Since he couldn't commit to her due to his culture and didn't think Slade would slip up like that. I hope Dom doesn't explode during their family dinner.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 08:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I am thoroughly enjoying your story.  So many things to look forward to, I missed Sasha's story so I don't know the back story of some characters.   Dina, Slade for example.  

I'm thinking about rooting for Murphy since Dominic is still pining over Dina.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 07:14 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I loved this chapter!  Both of the main characters are showing growth.

The new and closer relationship with Dom and Dimi was really touching and Sasha ia no longer a wallflower and blossoming.  Dimi explaning how he felt when he thought he could lose her was very realistic.  

So now Dom knows who the daddy is, but the daddy is still in the dark and Dina kept it a secret bc she was ashame of her behavior, not her child (book3?).

I was a little stunned that Adaline was considering losing weight to get Dom attention--little does she realize she would be the rebound chick and should get healthy for herself.  You have brough a new male interest into her life and Murphy is likable, so it's going to hurt when he gets heartbroken.  

Love the way Ada put Carla on silent, priceless!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 04:45 pm

Title: Cast

i want more of Addy. I don't even want to read about Dom and his issues with Dina, because I don't care for Diba and it's not her story. Dina  is a cold hearted b!tch. There was obvious chemistry between her and Slade and she goes and mess around with her supposedly good friend's beau's brother. Really? She goes from dimitry's friend to his brother, has baby, lies, cheats and this is supposed to be Sasha's friend? Messy, just messy. Anyways, enough about Dina and her messiness. I want more about Addy. It's her storyline.

Reviewer: Ijs Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Uh oh! Dominic has some competition. Murphy seems like a cool dude, helping others is a plus in my book and helping children I think I'm in love. I'm thinking Dominic see Slade in Dina's baby's eyes. So could Slade be the father of Dina's baby. Sasha is so cute with her pregnant self, paying someone to bake when you can do it yourself, they are spoiled brats. I'm glad you are back.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 02:43 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Dominic may have some competition for Adaline's affection, how will he react?  Is Slade Dina's baby daddy?  I am really not liking Dina!  Dominic let those feelings go as Dina is not worthy of your love.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 01:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oooh. Who's the daddy?

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 10:02 am

Title: Chapter 5

I think the baby Daddy is Dom's Father. Slate is too obvious.

Reviewer: sharon1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the new chapter. I liked reading more about Adaline's job. It's good she get to make new friends. And maybe get some good lovin' too. Girlfirend needs some fun and action! It's nice to hear from Sasha too.

Now about that Dina's business : at least the faux mystery didn't last too long and there was no mistaken baby daddy drama. I am still so not interested in Dina though. Like the moment she appears in the chapter and opens her mouth, I can bet I am going to side-eye the hell out of her. Sh ecomes off so annoying. And I used to root for her and Slate...Now I just want Dominic to just move on already. But he shouldn't just up and fall for Adaline 'cause he would just use her as a rebound. Adaline deserves to be loved the right way and Dominic isn't there yet, if ever. I just want him to do something other than mope around that Dina woman.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I am just the child isn't Dominic's . Lol.  great chapter

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I completely understand where you are going with the Dina/Dominic side of this story. Is Slade the father of little Sophia? Yeah for Addie she will now get to see and learn more about her new home and city!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 08:15 am

Title: Chapter 6

I agree Sha2011. He needed to completely let go of Dina. This heave ho should do it... If not then his pursuance of Dina is annoying.

Thanks for this last chapter.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 6

OUU I'm interested in Dina's situation. Tell me more! I mean we can't have a Dominic/Adaline relationship if he' still preoccupied with the idea of Dina so she's necessary.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 07:58 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I don't care for Dina I am here for Adaline and her story not Dina's. I am interested in seeing how Adaline and Dom ever come together because right now I am not seeing how that is possible. Adaline would be nothing but a rebound or placeholder for Dina. If he is still "battling" as you say then Adaline should move on because no woman should be someone's second choice. If he wants to be with Dina then be with her and let Adaline move on to someone who is less confused about his feelings.

Nothing attractive about Dom right now. He is too sprung on Dina and that is not a good luck, all interest would have been gone because Adaline would have to be too concerned about Dina. Three people never work in a relationship built for two. I hate triangles because there is too many people in the world to be hung up on one person that is "battling" feelings for someone else. Cheating and love traingles are very cliche, I must admit, but I realise that there are only so mant ways to add the necessary "drama" that so many people think reflect "real life" (I don't think it does because if your relationship has that much drama then it is time to move on LOL)

Dom needs to make up his mind, go after Dina if he wants or move one but come to a decision and stick with it. All in all I am here for Adaline only, Dina not so much :)

Rant done. I am loving this story. I hope that you update soon!!

 

Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 06:24 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ugh, Dina is making me want to punch her in the face. Seriously, she's being incredibly selfish and like Dominic said, if she or her child is not in danger from the father then she owes it to him to tell and to me i sounds like she was using Dominic to get over Slade and she never loved Dominic like he obviously loved her. Dominic deserves to hear the truth so he can quit pining over her because she's so unworthy of his love. Please don't make the majority of this book about Dom resolving his feelings for Dina, Adaline deserves so much better. She deserves to be persued, cherished and loved. I'm enjoying this story and you have tons of talent. I'm always happy to see and update from you and you never disappoint.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 6

poor poor dominic..he truly loved dina..who is the father of Dinas kid? does sasha and tregan know what dina has done..hope dina gets caught by sasha with the kid would serve her right...hope they get to know that dinas done with dominic so they can help adaline..love to see dominic start to see Adeline as more than a friend..she is a sweet girl...update soon!!!!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 6

Love the way you wrote this chapter.  The situations with Dina, Dom, and her child, Sasha and Dimitri, Teagan andher guy were short, but written so well that I can't wait to see what else is in store for all of them.

I like the little bit you give us of Sasha and her man--nothing coming between those two, again.  Teagan knows she has to respect her guy or lose him.  Dina will be talking to Slade, but what did he do to her? 

Now Adaline is doing well and coming to realize she can enjoy the life she is making for herself and her new friends; willing to look forward and not backwards.  If Dom wants to be in her life, he has to make the first move and keep making them.  Now that he has closure with Dina, he will go for Ada but she may not want to be the rebound chick.  

Why should Ada dread Carla coming from her honeymoon--aren't they living in different states?

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, this is the push Dom needs to move on. I don't see how it can't be. Besides, he really does need to sort this Dina situation out before he's ready to roll with Adaline. She deserves that.  

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

Gooooo Dominic!!!! I hope this reveal from Dina is what he needed for him to move on. I'm loving the development of Adaline!!! I can't wait to see what her night out will reveal about herself. She comes with some baggage like most do, but she's strong and can overcome. Her family is awful to her, but I get some twisted joy out of seeing them interact with her. I cannot wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loved this chapter.  This scene does help him turn off his feelings for Dina.  Ok so who could the father be???

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 6

Duna on that bullshit. Smh. I hate that "I can't tell you now" stuff!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 12:07 am



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