Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 10

You're back! I loved the update. 😊

I think it is Dina's place to tell Slade about their daughter. Regardless of his earlier thoughts about a child, telling him now would give him a second chance to choose to be involved or not. In the end, at least he knows. I'm glad to know that Dom is willing to help Dina out.

I'm happy for Adaline and hope that she can continue on this path of self-discovery, and build up confidence in herself. It would be great to see the growth in her, rather than her moping around waiting for Dom to acknowledge what is between them. 

All I can say about Carla is that she is absolutely rotten. I can't believe that though she is married, she wants to meddle in other's love lives. She is clearly not over Dom, but I hope her plans will not succeed. Such a miserable witch!

Can't wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2015 02:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Finally! This is a good chapter and I am ready for the next update

 

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10

It's a interesting position Dom is in. Ultimately, its not his place to tell Slade anything, but I do appreciate what he is saying. He does ha e to see this man daily and to know something like this isn't easy. However, when the time comes, he can remind Slade he did the same while screwing his woman! And that these are the consequences of their actions, not his. They put him in that position.

Dina should tell Slade. If he rejects them again, it's on him. Her hands will be clean with her daughter.

Adaline should concentrate on herself and her craft for a while. Make herself strong and independent.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 10

You came back with a bang! I love it! Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next update missy. However, if that does happen we will still forgive you. LOL.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I am sooo glad to see this story is back.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I think it's pretty clear Carla isn't happy in her marriage. I bet things didn't work out in new york because no one wanted to kiss her butt. She was a little fish in a big pond.  It would serve her right if her husband ups and leaves her. No matter how pretty she is on the outside, no one wants to put up with a stank attitude forever. Adaline just needs to avoid her and work on getting better at photography. It would be great if Adaline became a huge sucess and her cousin gets left behind. I think Slade has the right to know about  his child but it's not Dom's place to tell him. Really he needs to cut all ties. I know there will be some mess when Carla gets to Boston but I hope Adaline has the backbone to stand up to her. Please don't take to long to update again. I love this story so much!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Carla makes her husband get a transfer and move cities just to cock -block her cousin? I'm curious to see how said husband reacts when he finds out about that!

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wow. Well first I'm happy you're back. Second, this chapter was insane, in a good way! Now Addy will know Dina, Dominic is gonna tell about the little daughter, and poor Sasha!! What's wrong with the baby??! Please just let her be nervous and scared.  I don't want the baby to be in danger...I'm stressed out!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 09:02 am

Title: Chapter 10

I think I lost my comment and so here goes again:  Dom should not tell Slade; he wanted her to abort, so unless Dina is asking for child support, Slade should have no say over what she chose to do.  I wouldn't even trust him around y child.

For Teagan, well fingers are cross, because hopefully he is strong enough to follow his heart, but I think he is going to hurt her terribly; then realize he messed up...perhaps he and Dom can cry on one another shoulders.

Carla is not happy and misery loves company. Notice Adeline did not tell her Dom rejected her.  Carla should look and feel like a fool when she goes to him to cut Adeline down.  Maybe, just maybe, Dom will now see what Adeline had to go through with that so-called fine family.  I don't see Teagan, Sasha or even Dina caring for Carla.  Does this chick really think she and Adeline can hang just so she can cut her down--Adeline don't owe her or her mama anything.  

Adeline is just not feeling Murphy.  No chemistry + dating = settling.  There needs to perhaps be someone else or no one else...just Adeline doing Adeline and becoming strong.  Hopefully strong enough to get a burner phone for her real friends to call her on--this way he can ignore catty carla.  Sooner or later she is going to have to put ole girl in check, along with her mother.    I find it strange that she is going to become closer to Dina and her child and then learn that Dom had a serious relationship with Dina---something she will never know.  Sad to say, but this will knock her back on her heels, again.  

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 10

So very glad this story is back. Addy should make a point to stay clear of Carla. She really doesn't have to interact with the witch. And if push comes to shove, a restraining order might be in the works. If Carla has time to torment Addy, then there's something seriously wrong with her and her life.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 10

Carla is a evil bitch and needs to loose her husband.  I really wish that Dominic would give Adaleine a chance as she is exactly what he needs.  Carla bitch get a life please!!  Why does she hate Adaleine?  Why didn't Adaleine change her number?  There is no need for her to contact with her aunt VIctoria or Carla. Dina is so wrong!!  Tell Slade Dominic he deserves to know, maybe he will step up to the plate.  Hell, Dina is such a vindictive bitch!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I love the fact that Dominic is getting his power back and singing again. I think Sofia is Dina story to tell to Slade not Dominic's.As far as him helping Dina with Sofia I think that's honorable because that is what a friend will do but he has to let the women in his life know first. I think Teagan is underestimating the depth of Carter's love for her. Sasha is freaking out because she's carrying more than just one baby. I love this story and I pray everything goes smoothly with your schooling and job. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I did my happy dance when I saw your update to your book, fantastic.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 9

A breakthrough, yes! Addy deserves real, true, everlasting love!  Too bad Dominic is not ready for her. Hopefully, it will never be too late for them!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 09:10 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Why so short though? There's not much happening with each chapter. I was happy to see mostly dialogue this time tho!! Finally :)

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Oh hell! HAHAHA Dominic is gonna catch his tail with this one once he realizes he messed up big time. I mean I do applaud him for taking his time to get over his hang ups and not entering a relationship and dumping that on Adaline but LOL it's gonna be fun once she gives him some blue balls. I'm going to enjoy reading that

Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 9

His apology seemed lame to me.  I'm hoping I'll see a stronger side to Adeline, because I can't root for her yet...too much of a pushover.  Hope she is shown standing up for herself against her aunt and cousin first and foremost like Sasha..Need to see the bitchy side come out and play.

Reviewer: DPerrion Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 23 2015 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the new chapter. 

I liked how most of it played out. I am glad Dominic apologized and I liked that he was honest with her, and also that he called her out about her teenage crush bordering on hero worship. I think he did the right thing when he didn't agree to enter a romantic relationship with her : even if he does have growing romantic feelings for her, he is way to emotionally messed up right now with that Dina business. And I still think that Adaline isn't sufficiently emotionally mature yet to be able t handle all the ups and downs of a romantic relationship with Dominic right now. I wish they could have tried and (re)build their friendship, but I also understand why Adaline decided to "go big or go home" and told her how she felt about him. The way she disregarded his reasons was a bit selfish/self-centered though...But I guess, seeing as she has some serious self-esteem issues, she get a pass for me this time.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Dom is not necessarily the bad guy here. What he did will benefit both parties in the end. Because honestly, I don't think Addy thinks clearly when it comes to this. He cared enough about her to tell her what she needed to hear, not what she wanted to hear. The easy thing would have been to take advantage of the situation for his own selfish reasons and really end up hurting her a lot worse than this. Addy only sees what she wants and isn't considering the whole picture. If she backed up and looked with a clear head, she would see maybe the guy is not ready for what she needs from him at the moment. That's hard when you are in your own feelngs but I give Dom huge props for doing just that. 

As for Addy, isn't this her time to be working on her own independence and individuality anyway? Right now this thing is still in high school crush mode that never fully matured past that. She needs to focus on herself and her career now. Mature and be her own person that can make it on her own.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 03:29 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yes, Dom. I have come to realize that Dom is the one that needs confidence and some backbone. Amazing. He's fine and all, but evidently, fine folks have issues too, who knew.

Dom is over thinking this. He doesn't want to hurt Addy by making her the rebound girl, but he's hurting her right now, but in the long run, it's better that he gets his act together and if it's too late, so be it.

At least Addy knows that he feels the same for her. He's more scared than she is. So, if she moves on, good for her. I just hope she doesn't use Murph as the rebound.

She does need to be away from Dom. Let's see how he handles that. I just don't think he can be away from her for long, since he's gotten a taste. Oh Dom, youse a bit of an idjit.

Loving this.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

Dom is still an asshole. Nothing stopped him from telling her that he only saw her as a friend back then. And he definitely could have manned up and been honest with her this time around as well. I hope Adeline finds happiness with someone else and Dominic comes crawling. I hope he crawls and humiliates himself more than his brother did for Sasha. Screw him. And can Adeline cuss her cousin and Aunt out one good time? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 9

Dom story reminds me of my baby sister crushing on this popular football player in college.  She reallyw as interested in him, but he said no, she was a good girla dn he was not the one for her.  My sister later told me that she appreciated what he had did--basically looked out for her in a way.  

Dom is not ready to face that he has feelings for Addy, feelings that run deeper than just friendship.  In his mind, his pulling away from her is what is best for both--mentally he is not ready to move on--he just wants rebounds.  He could have used Addy and with his unresolved feelings for Dina, would have permanently broken Addy. 

I want Addy to become interested in someone else, but not settle for someone else--if that makes sense.  Murphy seems interested, but I have always been leery of guys just staring at me like he does Addy---they tend to become clingy and way too controlling.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Soooooo damn good! I am loving the character development with these too. It's going to make me sad to see Murphy hurt in the end, but le sigh...things will work out for the best. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 10:34 pm

Title: Cast

Love the story so far.  I think Adaline needs to move on.  I am not getting from Dom that he will ever see her in the light of anything more than a litttle sister or as a friend.  I am hoping that Adaline will meet someone who is worthy of her!  Hopefully she will give Murphy a chance!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 08:55 pm

Title: Chapter 9

This was great. This was a very needed chapter. This felt refreshing. Everything is now out in the open and they've both come to a resolution. 

I'm glad Dominic said no and I accept his apology and explanation. He's not ready for Addy and he knows this is it. I'm glad Addy can now begin to move on from her infatuation with Dominic. Both were long overdue.

And maybe they'll never be friends like they once were, but now (in the FUTURE) I can finally see them building a better, new and improved relationship with one another. Maybe then I could see them in a romantic relationship (MAYBE....like possibly. Not quite sure yet).

awesome sauce as always!

 

Reviewer: reneicy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 05:13 pm



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