Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 8

She needs to move on, make new friends and have her own life. She has started doing that with Lucille, Tegan, and Sasha. Once she has her own life, she gains some confidence maybe she will learn to value herself. She will not have to settle for bullshit from Dom or her family. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Mikka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 8

welp F Dominic.. he did once and then he tried again tonight... NOPE move the F on. ATM he's not worth it at all. screw him. I am highly disappointed in his behavior... very nasty. HE needs to check himself.. gross

Any way! Great to see Adaline feeling more comfortable with everyone around! Team Adaline all the way! 

 

Thanks for the update and I'mma kick DOminic in his ass for acting a fool! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 09:31 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I would move on and is it sad if I say I wouldn't mind her with Slade.  Slade would be good to her.  Maybe we need another girl for Dominic, he's too chicken shit for me to like him, right about now. Not feeing Dina either...ugh can she go back to Italy.   What is her purpose for being here?  

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 09:25 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Adaline should move on.  Audrey is the one who's challenged. Who doesn't know what sign language is?  Blue man group?

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 8

To your question in the end chpt notes, I'm wondering the same thing. Dom sounds like a jerk. Adaline had grown so much, if and when Dominic realizes how he's mistreated Adaline, I hope it'll be too late. I'd like to see her move on and I hope Sasha can accept and respect that. In the meantime can Cillian beef up a bit? Lol great chapter!

Reviewer: femmedlx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

This chapter made me so mad!  I think Adaline should let Dominic have it, since he's always been ashamed of their friendship, and she should move on.  How much rejection is Adaline going to have to take?!

Reviewer: La_NaeWoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 06:28 am

Title: Chapter 8

Hell yeah she should move on! Stay stuck on him for what? He isn't remotely interested nor does he seem to respect her friendship let alone her as a person. She needs to build her confidence and work on her insecurities first. In fact, I am not a fan of Dominic right now. Adaline deserves better. 

Thanks for the update! Love this story. Update soon please!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 8

I really  like the idea of Adaline continuing to grow into a confident sassy woman with a good support system in her new friends. I rather not see her with Dominic until he grows up, which he really needs to do, and can really see her value. He actually nweds to chase after her for a while. Make him work for it.

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 03:36 am

Title: Cast

Well Dominic is officially a bigger sick than I thought possible and to think I felt bad for him with the Dina situation ... But I feel so bad for Adaline to be forever friend zoned by the dude you adore for something you can't help must be the most horrible feeling in the world.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 8

I don't know what to think! I am excited about an update. Great chapter! 

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:34 pm

Title: Cast

Please let Addy move on. She needs to date anyway because she has no experience with it. Also Dominic is an ass right now. He deserves that Audrey chick.  Murphy seems like a good first boyfriend.  I want Adaline to be happy and Dominic is too full of himself to make anyone happy!!! How could he just stand there letting people say stupid stuff??! I'm so disappointed in him.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapter...even though it ended a bit abruptly.

I am glad that the focus is back on Adaline and that she is ejoying her new life more and more, is making new friends and all. I wonder about her dream job as a photograph, I'd like to learn more about that side of life. I am not sure what is it about her seemingly trying to loose weight though...That reference was kind of random.

Now about that Dominic situation : what is going on with him? His behaviour is pretty weird, and it was a rather dicky move of his to not check his very rude date. He was definetely NOT a very good friend to Adaline and I hope he realizes it himself soon and makes amends.

On the other hand, rather than "moving on" Dominic altogether, I think Adaline needs to get over her teenage crush on Dominic. She seems to have developped some "hero worship" towards him and it's not healthy for her, neither is it fair to him (he shouldn't feel obligated to reciprocicate her feelings). I like their friendship, first and foremost, I want to see that relationship explored, have it rebuilt, restart on healthier grounds. So, this is also on Adaline, this is part of her growing up. If she feels like Dominic isn't being a good friend, she should call him out for this, she should bother and tell him just why, and not just up and leave 'cause by doing that she is also part of the reason why "history is repeating itself", she is the one repeating the same behaviour as when they were younger. 

Also, please, no "triangle" or jealousy plot or using Murphy as a fake obstacle. I don't mind Adaline giving a go at a romantic relationship with Murphy. It might be good for her to discover and develop the romantic and sexual side of her life whith a nice guy. But if Adaline and Dominic get together, I'd like, for once, to read about their relationship developing into a romantic one because they make the decision themselves to do so at some point, and not because of some forced externel drama. 

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 8

So Dominic can have gfs garlore while Adeline pines away until he discovers that she is the one for him?? NO WAY!! Adeline deserves her own love story with Murphy, because he noticed her beauty inside out and was not dictated tp by what society sees as normal. Dominic was gutless then and he's gutless now. Adeline deserves to have a man who has no issues to get over. Can Murphy not be an undercover ass please. :)) Dump Dominic I say. lol

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 10:08 pm

Title: Chapter 8

It is time for Adaline to move on and let Dominic do the longing for a while.  He needs to miss her.  She needs to be physically and emotionally unavailable to him for a minute.  It would not be a bad thing for her to gain some relationship experience with someone else before they come together.

BTW, you are doing a excellent job with the storyline.  Keep up the good work.

 

kb

Reviewer: K Branson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 8

She needs to move on. She needs to let Murphy treat he like the beauty she is. Why waste time on someone that will never stand up for you, when you have someone that's sees you for you and wants to be with you. Let her move on with Murphy foe a while and experience a really relationship.

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I wish Adaline would have stuck around both times to hear what Dominic responded. I can understand her walking away in the high school situation but I wish she would have waited to see what he said back to Audrey. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 08:28 pm

Title: Chapter 8

seriously im not liking the thought of domonic and adaline together

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 08:00 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 07:43 pm

Title: Cast

Is this seriously the same Dominic of the previous story? Because in this one he is an asshole. He can't even be a good friend to Addy. What a douche. I'm honestly liking Dominic less and less. I don't know about Murphy, because we don't know much about him. But when it comes to Dominic, I don't like him for Addy. Addy needs to move on and let go of the feelings she has for Dom. He is not interested and barely acknowledge her. She deserves better. And even if they end up together. Addy better make him work for it big time.  But honestly, I'm just not feeling Dominic anymore. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Adaline may be deaf but she surely is not dumb...to hang onto this infatuation with Dominic after he repeats the same behavoir to not acknowledge her before his peers as a teenager and now as an adult suggests a dumb woman...so Adaline should move on to someone who really sees her and is not ashamed of his feelings for her...the typical story would be that Adaline moves on and Dominic gets jealous to come back but why should Adalinewant someone who can't acknowledge her publicly...she needs to understand her own value instead of pining for a man who can't accept her as she is...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Ok, this is my 2nd comment on this chapter: last night Dom had my foot twitching, but after a night's sleep, I came to realize something:  Dom has never told Addy that he cared for her as more than a friend.  He has now toppled off that pedestal Addy placed him on; he didn't put himself there, she did.  

Now we all know he has shown himself to be a piss-poor friend and Addy was in denial, but she knew this when she read the jock-jerk lips, but refuse to read Dom's reply.  She was not a stalker, just desperate to have a friend in her high school crush--she was so lonely that she thought Dom's friendship would carry over to their time in school, instead of just the backyard gazebo.

Dom knew she was new to the area and he never even checked on her, didn't notice she was getting healthier, he didn't even search her out at the party.  I know he is hurting, but he didn't even look to Addy as the rebound chick.   This is the same guy that gave his brother hell for being careless with Sasha.  Dom is not into Addy and she can't keep loving someone that don't love her back.  This may have been a deep infatuation on Addy's part.

Hopefully, Murphy is a good guy and Addy can start out slow and be open with him.  She does not want to take advantage of his feelings for her, but he may be the right one for her at this time in her life.    

 I am glad her list of friends is growing AND glad for the update, bc this is one of my favorite stories.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 06:11 pm

Title: Chapter 8

That chapter broke my heart. At this point I don't want Dominic and Adaline to end up together because frankly, Dominic is an asshole. What kind of bullshit is that where he can't even acknowledge her as at least a friend. Screw this dude. Adaline deserves better. Maybe she should give Murphy a try because Dominic sucks ass. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Shoot, Dominic is not even a good FRIEND to Adaline.  She should definitely move on and she's got the perfect opportunity to do so with Murphy.  I hope she takes it.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Am I the only one wishing Sasha or Teegan overheard her? Of I am ok. Going back to my corner. Mumbling "it would have been really cool if Sasha overheard and told both Dom and Audrey about themselves." 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 03:46 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Ohh this chapter was so sad...can't believe Dominic is dating such a rude and insensitive bitch like Audrey.. He was such a sensible guy before and much nicer than Dimitri in the past..can forgive him for his mistakes during school coz he was a kid back then but now he is a grown up he should hv defended adaline..very disappointed in him..adaline is so sweet and kind hearted hope Dominic regrets not speaking up on her behalf..hope Lucile noticed that adaline has feelings for Dominic and helps her..don't want adaline to completely give up on Dominic like to see them to end up together..I think Dina has truly broken him..adaline has loved him for soo long it would be a shame if he didn't return her feelings..like to see Dominic fall for adaline she is such a sweet girl..update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Jenny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 03:28 pm



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