Woah!! Is Kevin going to join too?
Author's Response:
lol is he? I don't think he's the sharing type lol
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed
[Report This]Date: November 10 2014 07:46 pm
The plot thickens, and your throwing in the Sheriff. What will Croy do?
Author's Response:
three men! what's a girl to do?? lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 04:08 pm
They want them some Croy!!
Author's Response:
lol ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 03:58 pm
Glad Todd has an older cousin that talked some sense into him & he rehired Croy. Glad he got rid of Diana she would be the demise of his company. Now this sexual tension going on.she there doing a great job & fixing to work along side him in a big case. Update
Author's Response:
the sexual tension is heating up!
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed
[Report This]Date: November 09 2014 03:56 pm
Great update! Glad Todd rehired Croy! Diana needs to go get a life and stop trying to control Todd! Liking me some Seth!!
Author's Response:
Seth is cool! Diana was a witch! lol
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2014 04:40 am
Jealous of each other like male egos and testosterone... Crazy id feel the sexual tension with both of them
Author's Response:
lol they grew up together and know each other well..both have some insane reason on being jealous of the time one spends with Croy lol
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 07:15 am
There are a hot men giving her the googly eyes!! Lol!!😍😍😍
Author's Response:
lol
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 05:10 am
diana was rude for no reason, im sure she's insecure
Author's Response:
Diana is crazy! lol
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2014 03:57 am
Very nice start Croy is smart and beautiful starting this new Job & doesnt even know she's causing trouble for her boss who already has a girl friend who has security problems. can't wait to see what happens when he calls her into his office what he wants.
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 06:27 pm
Diana sounds annoying already and she just got introduced. The fact that Croy is not here for her drama makes me like her already. Love that you used Bre Scullark as your muse too (I was going to do the same). Great updates so far & I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's a process for me chosing muses. It's bad because I write the stories first and then have to go and find the one that fits my image. I hope you contine to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 03:28 pm
Coming along nicely, but way too short.
Author's Response:
You guys are killing me. No more short chapters, got it lol
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 01:28 pm
too short
Author's Response:
I know, I'm sorry :(
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 08:02 am
Please don't tell that he is going to fire her because of Diana? She was just introduced and I can't stand her already. It's funny that her parents each remarried a white person, what was that about? Which parent had physical custody of Croy and her brother? Interesting.
Author's Response:
yeah, each re-marrying to white people came to me out of the blue as I was writing. I just let my fingers do the work. I thought it was them, actually going for what they really wanted. I didn't think of it as them seeing the color of their skin. They just re-married the ones that they should have been with. Custody was shared. They were good parents, though one varied in the extreme from the other.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 04:30 am
Loved the update! Wow, Diana has issues!!
Author's Response:
she does! insanely so! lol
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 01:34 am
Woah!! That was a drive by!!! Lol!! Excited to read more!!
Author's Response:
lol it was a quickie! lol
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 01:24 am
Update soon , I already like this story 😁😁😁
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 06:42 pm
I dunno what to say, except "more please!"
Author's Response:
lol!
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 06:37 pm
great start, looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
thanks so much!
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 03:56 am
I like it. I'll be waiting for your next installment.
Author's Response:
thank you, Virginia! I'm looking foward to yours as well!
Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 01:43 am
Me likey! More please!
Author's Response:
thank you! hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 12:36 am
Two kids named C/Kroy? Interesting...
Author's Response:
I always liked that name. I was watching Real Housewives of Atlanta one night when Kim started dating Croy, the football player and loved the name since lol
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2014 12:01 am