Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 20

Hmmm.  I think Elle should be crystal clear and honest with herself and Dean about where exactly she wants to go with their relationship.  Based on how she's reacting, I'm getting the feeling that either she isn't sure or it's possible that she's been sexually violated in some way.  Her girls also seem to imply that Dean has some control issues to work on.  I think Elle needs to be very careful.  After the many, near-misses they've had with taking their relationship to the next level, I think Dean may feel she's playing on his emotions if they go through another round of that.



Author's Response:

I definitely would lean more towards her still not being sure, but only because of past occurrences. Tracie didn’t imply control issues as much but more so Elle’s lack of knowledge of how men work. T was just letting her know most men don’t act the way Dean does unless they want serious commitment. But I agree, Elle and Dean should be careful especially considering their history. Thanks so much for reviewing Musicluva!

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 03:13 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I don't think Dean will be taking many cold showers, b/c I give it about 2 weeks before Elle Jumps his Bones Lol

And I agree with Tracie, Dean was marking his territory with all the hickies.

Can't wait to see what they texted each other .



Author's Response:

Two weeks??? Lol we’ll see. Yeah, Tracie was spitting knowledge which she tends to do often. He texted her back at the end of the chapter. But no worries, I have plans for their future texts *rubs hands like Birdman* Thanks for reviewing liberty lady!

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 20

I love Dean!!



Author's Response:

You feeling his fine ass too?

That makes two of us.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 12:00 am

Title: Main & Supporting Cast

This was good and they are talking...and listening.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

You’re welcome love. Thanks for reviewing Penelope!

CG

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Ha ha Elle really thinks she's going to be able to hold out from the love of her life!!! I'm excited to see how this dance plays out. 



Author's Response:

Girl...

Apparently she thinks she can.

I’m glad you’re excited for what I’ve got in store and thanks for reviewing hon!

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Please do not let Elle mess this up with Dean because Tracie said something. Too much back and forth. Either she's going to try to be with him or not. Jesus. 

 



Author's Response:

I feel you Reader…

In Jesus name we pray, Amen.

CG

Reviewer: Reader Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 08:00 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Perfect Saturday afternoon pick me up. I really love Elle and Dean, and Tracie keeps me in stitches. 



Author's Response:

Glad I could provide you with some weekend bliss and that you’re feeling all the characters. Thanks for reviewing kurious kale!

CG

Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Awesome story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much kurious kale!

CG

Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2015 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 19

DAMN. Elle just ain't right. Leaving the man in such a state.

Randall is a pig. No offense to pigs.



Author's Response:

She did leave poor Dean a little stiff, huh? But he’s a big boy, he can handle it---or at least I hope so. And I agree, Randall’s definitely swine. Thanks for reviewing Bella Chica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 09:24 am

Title: Chapter 19

That was sooo dirty Elle, but I like!!  Good chap and I see Randall is going to be a problem.  When big money is involved, everyone likes to pretend they don't see anything happening.  She need to set Randall straight from the beginning.  This is my job, I don't date clients and i definitely don't date anyone who interferes with my money.  Let's move on now....

Great chapter.  Elle is really discovering some sexuality there.



Author's Response:

Elle was a bit deviant this chapter. I thought it was about time for her to show another side of herself, so I’m glad you like. I also like your take on how she should handle the Randall situation, you make an excellent point. Thanks for reviewing lajack1!

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 19

I hope the partners have Elle's back when she sets Randall straight ONCE AND FOR ALL.  I can't stand it when folks pursue those who don't want them.  Buy a clue and move on.  Elle also needs to let Dean know what's going on.



Author's Response:

Good point on the Randall situation. Let's hope Elle handles this accordingly. Thanks for reviewing darqchild72.

CG

Reviewer: darqchild72 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 03:31 pm

Title: Chapter 19

LOL! 😄  She was wrong for that.  That was too funny. 



Author's Response:

Dean shouldn’t have suggested it. HE WASN’T READY!!! Lol thanks for reviewing Musicluva.

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 01:35 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Seriously even Elle's thoughts have Duh moments. Beyond that, they were intimate. Yay! Whether they realize it or not they changed their relationship a bit with that act. I can't wait to see how they react to each other in person.

Author's Response:

Oh I’m sure they’ll notice the difference when they see each other next time. Thanks for reviewing shellyme.

CG

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Thank you ! You've made my day...

That was sexy, that was hot, that was great !!!

Update pleaaaaase...



Author's Response:

You’re welcome siobhan! I’m glad you enjoyed it and that update is coming soon.

CG

Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 19

This was good.  Thanks



Author's Response:

You’re oh so welcome Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 19

YAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!! Elle is giving Fitz a run for best phone sex game!!!! I'm sooooo here for this.

 

One another note I see her not telling Dean about ole boy working with her company coming back to bite her in the A.S.S... And I'm not excited for that *insert monkey covering his eyes emoji*



Author's Response:

Comparing it to the addictively salacious and delightfully kinky Olitz phone convos though?

I’m honored boo.

And let’s hope it doesn’t come back to haunt her. Thanks for reviewing PearlsofWisdom!

CG

Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 05:49 am

Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! Need more & more



Author's Response:

I gotchu Anonymous.

CG

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 19

Omg! You slay me!!!



Author's Response:

*Prances around the house triumphantly while listening to ‘Feeling Myself’ after reading your comment*

Thanks hon.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 19

Randell is a Stalker, he knew exactly what he was doing when he chose  Elle's firm. She needs to tell Dean about him as soon as he gets back into town.

I hope Elle takes her vitamins, b/c after that teaser she gave him, Dean is going to Wear her Out. And I can't wait Lol.



Author's Response:

We’ll see how she handles this Randall situation. Now that wisecrack about Elle taking her vitamins though…lol. Y’all are a mess after this phone convo. I love it! Thanks for reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 19

She should have told him about Randall. Its gonna come back and bite her in the ass!! Lol!! Good update!! She better stop playing with that grown ass man. He gonna tear her up when he gets back in town!!



Author's Response:

Some other reviewers are definitely on the same page about the Randall situation, so I get it. Thanks and y’all are killing me getting hype over Dean getting back lol.  Love the enthusiasm and thanks for reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 19

Lol. So mean. She's such a tease and I love it. Can't wait for when he finally comes back. Keep that in flowing' =)



Author's Response:

She might’ve been a tease, but kind of Dean egged it on lol. Happy you’re anticipating his return. Thanks for reviewing SeekingVirtue17.

CG

Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 19

When did Elle and Dean progress to phone sex?  Have they been on date yet? Tracey called Mr. Petetsin6 penicillin  and i hollered when i read that.



Author's Response:

They didn’t really progress there. It just sort of…happened. And yeah, they went to dinner and a movie in earlier chapters. And you know Tracie doesn’t give a damn about saying it like it is lol. Thanks for reviewing pmgayles!

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 19

That was hot!!!! Please don't leave us hanging....



Author's Response:

I'll try my best not to hon.

CG

Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 19

That was hot. Can't wait until Dean gets back.



Author's Response:

You’re not the only one. Apparently most of the other reviewers are rooting for his return too. Thanks for reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 02:42 am

Title: Chapter 18

Please tell me that those two are Finally going to get this party started. And please Elle, don't over think things, just Go for it.

Hope we saw the last of Katie, and I knew she slept with Randell. She's the type that wants to be a "Kept" woman.

Tracie was spot on with what she told Gretchen, she and Tyler are Adults, what they do is Their business and not his parents. I think Tyler is a good guy, and will be happy to be a father, and set his parents straight if need be.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are. But it's at their own pace and on their own terms. We’ll see if Elle is capable of letting go of that thinking cap of hers. Katie definitely showed her true colors in this chapter. Dean did the right thing by cutting off all ties. Tracie came through on her rant. Hopefully Gretch will take her advice. Thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2015 02:36 pm



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