Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 15

I'm so done with Elle. She makes things more difficult than it has to be. First of all she needs to have a real talk with my mother. No wonder her brother doesn't want to be around her. Her mother will continue to butt in to her life because she lets her. She needs to tell her in a respectful way to back of her personal life and make it clear to not pull another stunt like she did with Justin again. I know that I would be PISSED if my mom went behind my back like that. And I would let her know it. 

Second of all, Elle should have told Justin to shove it. Who cares if he is up for a promotion and that he wants to show his boss an other part of him to impress him. That is not her problem. She should have left him then and there. 

And as for Dean, its good that he is ignoring her text messages. Its only been three week since they have talked and seen each other, so its understandable that he is still feeling some type of way. But as the months go by, he will and can move on. Elle is playing a game. Let her play it alone. She wants to friends, she wants to do this, she wants to do that. Its always only about what she wants. She is right. Dean indeed deserves someone better than her. Preferably someone more mature and who knows what she wants, or who at least is willing to try and risk things. I still think that Elle should take the first step and work for it. Dean going to her would make it too easy giving the way she had been treating him.

Also I hope that when Dean decide to stop things with Kate, she won't turn out to be some cliche obsessed psycho girl who doesn't know how or when to give up. Although little jealousy is ok and understandable, because there has to be some drama after all. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Max (her brother) is definitely a good example of their mother’s reign. With the holidays coming up, hopefully Elle will have that talk with her mother. Setting her up with Justin and not knowing the full story was a definite low blow. Actually, Dean and Elle haven’t seen each other in a month and three weeks. I agree eventually, with time, you can get over someone. Whether they do that or get back together is totally up to the two of them. As usual, thanks for reading and reviewing grazylisa.

CG

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 15

Dean and Elle are sad souls right now, they need to get together and Fast.

I have a feeling that Katie is going to be an issue, Dean needs to watch out.

Justin is Tool, and seems like he hasn't changed at all, everything is all about Him.



Author's Response:

Seriously, as I write I think about this all the time. They’re miserable! Katie does have some interesting qualities that will be discussed in future chapters. And yes, Justin’s a total tool and meant to teach Elle a lesson. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 14

Oh Elle, that ache isn't going anywhere honey.  It is there to stay until you husband that man and then it turns into another feeling.  Goodness, she threw me too Dean with the friend zone pass.  Maybe it is best that she gets her stuff together so when she is ready she will go in and knock b*tch out like fight night.

 



Author's Response:

You've been scouting Dean for a minute, Elle better watch her back lol. Yeah, she does have some loose ends in her life that need tying before stepping into something else. As always, thanks for your Migos reference, reading and reviewing lajack1.

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 08:38 am

Title: Chapter 14

I truly love this story, but why does Elle only want to be friends. OMG please turn this around real quick lol !



Author's Response:

So excited to hear you love it and I’ll try but my best. Just stay tuned. Thanks for reading and reviewing WHAT?!? (This name though...lol I'm here for it).

CG

Reviewer: WHAT?!? Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 14

Why??! I guess she isn't ready, but as soon as he finds someone else she'll be crying. Oh well. Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

You know how she is! Jealously is a funny thing especially in Elle’s case. Thanks for your continued support, reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 14

So now what? I feel like they missed their chance. How do they get it back? Who's going to make the first move? 



Author's Response:

Well how they go about this friendship is all up to them. At this point, if they're truly amicable, then anyone can make a move, right? Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 14

Elle is making my head hurt. Ok I'm glad that she apologized for treating Dean like a used piece of gum, but she knows that she wants to be more than friends with Dean.

Maybe with time away from Dean  she can Finally find her Big Girl Panties and confront Justin, call him a bastard and Let the Past Go.

Until then I'll keep some Tylenol handy Lol.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lord, she’s causing headaches now? Smh. Yeah, she needs to tie those loose ends. And distance makes the heart grow fonder, right? Thanks for continuously reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 14

Elle did the right thing. She needs to focus on herself. Things will work out in due time. Dean can handle stuborn, game-playing, wishy-washy Elle. But I do not think he can handle a thoughtful, engaged, and open Elle without reaction and add in the fact that Elle is a sweet person, he is going to destroy the friendship sign. He is used to resistance where Elle is concerned and if Elle treats Dean like a true friend, Dean's emotions are going to be on overload quite often because all Dean ever wanted was Elle to be real with him.  I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, there’s A LOT of truth to what you said. Overall, I’m glad you’re a supporter of friendship :) . You won’t have to wait long because the next chapter is coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing Anonymous.

CG

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 14

I hope Dean can get past this and moves on. Elle is tiring and isplaying too many games. 



Author's Response:

I think you’ll like how Dean moves on in the next chapter…stay tuned. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 14

Finally! She apologized! That's all she owed him, really. An apology for her behavior, and to stop that behavior. I also think it was a good decision to be friends for now. Dean may not understand it at the moment, but until she learns how to be his friend, how can she be more?

And a BFF is for life...hehe. As lomg as they don't do that again, its all good.

 

Nice!!



Author's Response:

Yes, the apology was well overdue. Your question is so on point by the way. It’s what I’ve been asking myself for a few chapters now. Yeah, Elle and Tracie are definitely over getting shitty booty wasted in public. Here’s to hoping they do it strictly in the comfort of each other’s home lol. Thanks a lot for continuing to read and review flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 14

Hmmm, don't like what just happened. I understand it. I just don't like it. Please continue with your creative genius!!! Enjoyed reading it like always. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured reviewers wouldn't be thrilled about it, but I’m glad you get it. That means I wrote the chapter well enough lol. Thanks for supporting my creativity, reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 14

Proud of Elle and I savored each line of her finally apolozing to him.  It was out of left field with her putting him in the friend zone.  Poor Dean, but it's for the best, because they need to be friends before going into a real strong relationship.  Elle thinks he deserves better than her, so now the ball is in his court to change her mind.  This is so good!  



Author's Response:

I’m glad you enjoyed the apology. It was hard to write because I wanted to make sure I hit all the right points. Yeah, I think it’s for the best. It’s all about how they go about this friendship---which will be discussed in the next chapter. As always, thanks so much for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 14

Ole girl done took my last nerve and tapped danced all over it. Can you say over dramatic? Then Dean decides my nerves weren't shot enough so he joins Elle's tap dance when by agreeing to be friend zoned. What type of fuckery is this?

Author's Response:

“Ole girl” though? Lol. Yeah she has a knack for wracking nerves. Dean’s reasoning for agreeing will be discussed in the next chapter. And to answer your question, this is some grade A messy Elle fuckery. Thanks for reading and reviewing shellyme.

CG

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Sigh. I'm disappointed in both Elle and Dean. I'm glad Elle apologized but it's clear that these two deserve to be together. Why are they making it more complicated than it needs to be? I hope they can quickly get over their 'friendship' and just be grownups about their feelings for one another.



Author's Response:

All the reviews seem to have this same air of disappointment, but we’ll see the effects of this “friendship” next chapter. I’m all for hoping it’s short lived too. Thanks for reading and reviewing MI97.

CG

Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Maybe it's just me but Elle seems to be making this more complicated then it needs to be. And Dean gave in too easy and should have shot down her friends idea and let her know what he really wanted. 



Author's Response:

Complicated should be Elle’s middle name. She’s starting to doubt herself which has made him doubt her in return. As for right now, she needs to work through some things before being with anyone. Could she have done that easier with or without him? *Kanye shrug* Who knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing CrimsonBlaze.

CG

Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 11:25 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Elle apologized and that was right thing to do but she-s still stupid.  Dean has feelings for you and she has feelings for him so why not work on herself while giving Dean a chance. More please!! 



Author's Response:

Since she’s convinced that she's not right enough for him romantically, she's once again hindering them from moving forward. She has issues to work out before going further with Dean. No worries, more is coming soon. Thanks for continuing to read and review pmgayles.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Elle is crazy! I loved it. Not sure where the story is going next, which is kind of a nice thing. More please 😃



Author's Response:

She’s a bit loco and I’m glad the unknown is keeping you along for the ride. More is coming soon and thanks for reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 03:32 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I really don't blame Dean. And I have a wait and see attitude with Elle showing up on his doorstep, AGAIN. If she f's this up, she can't blame it on the a-a-alcohol.

Tracie, all I'll say is that I'm not hard on her. Elle shares some responsibility in what she consumed. She grown.

I can not wait to see if Elle is going to come at Dean like an ADULT. All I see her doing is playing games with him. I'd hate it if it was the man doing it so I damn sho hate it when a woman does it. I hope she pursues him. That would be something that you don't see much in stories these days. But however you handle it, Chica, I'm sure it'll be interesting.

Maybe, Elle should work out her shit BEFORE she gets involved with a man. Dean ain't her shrink.

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Nope, she really shouldn't screw up this time. Dean is not his usual passive self and she knows she’s to blame. It’s refreshing to hear someone not really go hard in the paint on Tracie. Elle is very grown and very able to conduct herself without another adult. Now if only she would do that with Dean. Then it would make things SO much easier lol. Making her work out her own issues was always an idea. But now that you’ve said it, I really want to take that into consideration. Thanks so much for your encouraging words, reading and reviewing BellaChica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 10:35 am

Title: Chapter 13

Elle needs to sincerly apologize and explain her actions to him, if she can't do that then she needs to back completely off.  



Author's Response:

She does. Here’s to hoping she does that before she pushes him to far. Thanks for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 08:10 am

Title: Chapter 13

Elle is getting tiresome. I hope she does what she needs to do.



Author's Response:

You’re right. And if she’s tiring you, then imagine how poor Dean feels lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 02:51 am

Title: Chapter 13

Tracie is something else. Its like she refused to accept the fact that she was in the wrong and that she shouldn't have let Elle go home alone drunk like that. She didn't apologized and is using her being drunk and what not as an excused. If Elle had no problem ignoring Dean and treat him poorly, then lets see how good she is with giving Tracie the same treatment. If I was Elle I would have been very pissed at my friend and give her a silent treatment. Real friends don't do that to each other.

 

I can't wait to read what will happen next. Dean should not let Elle of the hook just yet. She will have to work for it. He has every right to give her the cold shoulder. I know that he really likes her and all. But that still doesn't mean that he should let her treat him like he is nothing. I still think Dean can do better than her. Maybe as the story progress she will change my mind. Now lets see what she will do now.




Author's Response:

Elle was right to feel they way she did about the situation with Tracie. Whether she makes Tracie fester over it until taking accountability or easily forgives her is all her choice. True, the mistreatment of Dean is definitely extensive and maybe it’s time he gave her a dose of her own medicine. Who knows? Maybe he will or maybe he won’t?  It’s all up to Dean to make that choice. Thanks for reading and reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Love Dean, and what he said to Elle, it's like he's been in my head Lol. I should have figured that Josie was Dean's cousin.

Elle please Woman up and Talk to Dean that would be a great birthday present.

 Elle telling Tracie off was a good thing, she know she was wrong.



Author's Response:

Yep, I think he said everything you and several other reviewers have been thinking from day one. I hear your pleas and they will not be forgotten in the next chapter. I agree, she did address the Tracie situation accordingly. Thanks so much for continuously supporting, reading and reviewing liberty lady. 

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 13

She betta come with her A game because right now, she is batting 0 for real.  I can't believe her sometimes and Tracie, regardless, if she has never had weed before any decisions she make are impaired.  Also she was feeling bad/low after seeing Josie leave Dean's house in provocative clothing so of course she is going to want something to help her feel better.  Elle, get your stuff together.  As they say it is time to either piss or get off the pot.  She is out opportunities if whatever her plan is fails.  Hope she can be mature and simply tell Dean the truth.



Author's Response:

The prior incidents leading up to showing up drunk at Dean’s definitely fueled her actions.  But that’s not making her look any better and she’ll have to make up for that in the near future. As always, thanks for giving it to Elle straight no chaser, reading and reviewing lajack1.

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 13

So good! I'm glad she remembered his birthday. Now she needs to apologize and get back on his good side.  I need longer chapters!! :)  great update



Author's Response:

Thanks and wow. I thought I was writing too much lol. I guess I’ll have to make them longer, huh?  Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Wow, I like Elle, but she has been a major dick to Dean. If I was him I wouldn't want to deal with her antics either, even if I did like her alot. She was drunk the night before, so that can be used as an excuse of why she forgot his birthday, but the way Elle acts, I don't know. She could have been sober and still forgot, but it looks as though she wants to make up to Dean by showing up on his door step. It's definitely time for Elle to do the pursuing. I usually do not like if a woman has to go after a dude and try to prove herself, but Elle is the exeption. And maybe the term 'proving herself' is too strong a word, but she most certainly needs to hold on to Dean to see where they go or just cut him loose. Playing games and being casual when she clearly knows he might really like her is cruel. Great update!



Author's Response:

She’s definitely pushed his buttons this time around. Elle is a huge exception considering all she’s done to him. She should make it right before it’s too late and keeping him hanging on is not making it any better. Thanks for reading and reviewing Anonymous.

CG

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Date: December 12 2014 12:28 am



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