Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 10

She better apologize to that man!!



Author's Response:

Say that!  I totally agree. Let’s hope she does it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 10:14 pm

Title: Chapter 10

The ending is so delicious!!! Its time for Elle to make things right before Dean moves on.



Author's Response:

Delicious is a first, but I’ll gladly take it! Yeah Elle’s gotta come correct---fast. Thanks for reading and reviewing keluboo.

CG

Reviewer: keluboo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 10

uh-uh, Elle is going to have to step up and show Dean something.  There is chemistry between these two, but that is not enough to build a strong relationship.  I think they need to become friends, because they basically know nothing about one another.  

Elle needs to grow up, but she may drag out apologizing, and if she does, I hope a knock-out opens his door or he opens it as he is going out on a date, Dean accepts her apology and then continues with his date. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, their chemistry is definitely what they’re riding on. There needs to be more depth to their connection and only getting to know it each other over time will help them gain that. I hear you. Elle definitely has some major maturing to do. Let’s hope it doesn’t happen before it’s too late. As always, thanks so much for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 06:45 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Glad that Elle has a friend like Tracie that snacks you in the head with the truth; Now let's hope that Elle takes her advice. Also Elle, you have to Kiss a few Frogs b4 on of them turns into a Prince.

 



Author's Response:

Tracie never fails to give it to Elle straight no chaser. Like you, I hope she takes her advice also.  I think the few frogs she’s had have clearly gotten her too spooked to kiss the others lol. Thanks for your advice, reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 06:25 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thank goodness for Tracie. Elle makes my head hurt. How many hoops does she want Dean to jump thru? Like he's a trained monkey. She either needs to cut ties with Dean or make an effort to not be so self-involved to be ignorant of how her actions are affecting him. And blaming her past relationships for how she is will only work for a while. Since she knows it, then do something about it.

I just love Dean's Mom. I hope he talks to her about what's happening with Elle. Dean is right to wonder if she's worth the chase. Only he can answer that.

 



Author's Response:

Elle has high expectations because she thinks they’ll keep her from getting hurt. In reality, depending on them is only hindering her love life. I think gaining more inner self assurance that the past (hurt and all included) is simply just her past. Hopefully, that'll put more things in perspective. Considering her past, it may not be easy. If she wants anything with Dean then it’ll be more than necessary. I’m glad you like Dean’s Mom!  She’s loosely based off my aunt (a single feisty mother in her own rite). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing BellaChica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 10

No Dean she is not worth it. Leave her alone. Let her take the first step so you know that she is also interested. Elle is not only clueless, but also selfish and has no regard for his feelings at all. If you ask me he needs to ignore her at least a little while so that she knows how it feels. Dean is not in the wrong here, Elle is. Let her work for it a little. I get that Dean is willing to chase her because he likes her a lot. But a person needs to also have some  self respect and dignity. She treated him poorly. As of now, she didn't do anything to deserve him. No, she needs to put her big girl panties on and work to get his trust and respect. After that Dean can continue with his chase. After she earned it.

It will also do her some good to have some competition for Dean. Not some psycho obsessed girl, but a girl that can be even better for him. Elle needs some WAKE UP CALL!!. An eye opener so that she can see that Dean has other options. I think that something like that will definitely make her step up her game if she really wants him.



Author's Response:

Once again, you made a valid point. Sure she’s selfish and wrong, but their chemistry is the pull between them. At this point, competition is definitely needed---that’ll come. But all in due time, of course. Hopefully, that’ll gain her his trust and respect. Since as of right now, she’s not doing much to earn either. Then again, sometimes you never know what you miss until it’s gone…Right? Elle’s wakeup call is coming. I think I’ll let her put those big girl panties on first though lol. Thanks again for reading and reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Elle works my last nerve!!  She is so clueless yet she's selfish because she only thinks of herself and her own hurt feelings. It would serve her right if Dean never gave her the time of day. Amazing update!



Author's Response:

One of these days, I’m gonna make sure Elle doesn’t work your last nerve lol. Elle’s definitely selfish, but it’s only because of her past. But by no means, does it validate the way she treats Dean. Hopefully, she’ll appreciate that she’s still of importance to him before it’s too late. Thanks again for the compliment, reading and reviewing pmgayles.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 02:48 pm

Title: Main & Supporting Cast

OMG. I'm hooked! I read it all in one day. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear I’ve got you hooked lol.  It makes me look forward to getting these chapters done. Thanks for reading and reviewing LolaWrites!

CG

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Well well. I really don't know what to think of Elle. She clearly has some issues that she needs to work on. Dean is a nice guy, and doesn't deserve to be treated this way. Also I get that Dean like Elle a lot. But at some point you also got to have some dignity and self respect. There is no point in chasing someone who has no regard for your feelings, treats you poorly and isn't willing to give you a fair chance. I do think that maybe Dean needs to focus on other woman. Elle obviously is not mature enough for what he wants or is looking for. Elle needs to see that Dean has other options. She needs a wake up call to make her see what a catch Dean is and what she would be loosing. Its obvious that Dean cares about her a lot. But there is only so much a person can take. Especially if you get such a poor feedback.



Author's Response:

You made excellent points. Elle is a definite work in progress…kind of.  A lot of reviews agree with Dean needing to leave Elle alone since she can’t get it right. Elle’s used to getting her way, but her reality check is coming. Hopefully, with a little more explanation of both their pasts, this will make everyone think differently about the emotional complexities of these two. And not just Elle lol. That’s for future chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 10:55 pm

Title: Main & Supporting Cast

Dean cares for this girl, but I guess now that he does need closure, but she can't give him a satisfactory answer.  My sister once told me after a relationship just ended out of nowhere that I may never get closure and needed to make my own (sis always keeps it real).

Dean makes his own closure and that's when she sees what she has lost ;-).



Author's Response:

Interesting take on closure. Dean has a lot of thinking to do. Hopefully, he makes the right choice. You’re right, sisters do always keep it real (mine is the same way). Thanks for your enlightening perspective Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 05:16 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Not going to lie, but Elle deserved some tough love. If Dean didnt stand up to her foolishness from the past, what's to say she won't do it all over again. They are too old to be messing around like that and side stepping important conversations. I'm glad Dean acknowledged the big pink elephant in the room. My what a difference a day makes. You took it difficult moment for both characters and I like that. Sometimes writers keep things going along a plot for a while before they turn the tables, I didn't expect it but it was well planned. Me gusta!!!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 9

Yeah...lol...Elle gets no love in this chapter! I agree with a poster that said Elle needs to deal with that Justin thing when it comes up. And Dean needed to call her out on all of her crap because she never gave him a chance to before now. She needed to know it wasn't and isn't ok to treat him like that.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Elle left a bad taste in quite a few people’s mouths this chapter---especially Dean’s lol. I agree, the Justin fiasco will be tackled. Dean definitely called her out and probably hurt her feelings. But that was only because he was a little hurt too. So, hopefully, they’ll get past this. Thanks for reading and reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 9

Not going to lie, but Elle deserved some tough love. If Dean didnt stand up to her foolishness from the past, what's to say she won't do it all over again. They are too old to be messing around like that and side stepping important conversations. I'm glad Dean acknowledged the big pink elephant in the room. My what a difference a day makes. You took it difficult moment for both characters and I like that. Sometimes writers keep things going along a plot for a while before they turn the tables, I didn't expect it but it was well planned. Me gusta!!!



Author's Response:

I agree. Stand for nothing, you’ll fall for anything. Right? Out of the two he is the most mature, so him bringing it up was pretty expected. Who knows if Elle ever would lol. Those 24 hours brought on a great deal of change. I’m glad you liked it. Writing about two hurt people is far from easy. Thanks for your encouraging words, reading, and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 9

Man they were making such progress, but I'm with Dean on this one. Elle left him in the dark and I'm confused as to why she wasn't able to talk with him about it in college. Well, I'll be interested to see where this develops. It's obvious that this issue is something that needs to be addressed for both parties. I just hope Elle can deal with her issues on this one because she is mostly at fault here.



Author's Response:

They were progressing, but no one said they wouldn’t have some hurdles along the way. I agree, Dean was right to bring it up. It needed to be addressed for them to really move forward. Elle definitely has some explaining to do. Clearer, more concise explaining. We’ll see if she’s capable of it in future chapters. Thanks for continuing to read and review MI97.

CG

Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 9

Dean needs to leave Elle alone and maybe even focus on someone else. Because honestly, she is not worth it. Elle doesn't know what she wants. And besides that she also doesn't know how to communicate. Her answers to everything that she doesn't know how to handle is to avoid, ignore and walk away. She keeps dismissing him, treating him poorly and has absolutely no regard for his feelings. Dean needs to date and get to know other woman. Elle needs some serious competition. She needs to realize that Dean can get other woman, and that she is not all that. Maybe that will open her eyes and she will realize what she is missing. And if she decide that she does want something with Dean, then she will have to work for it. That is if its not to late. If Dean were a friend of my, my advice to him would be to leave Elle alone and move on. She has some issues that she needs to work on and figure out what it is what she really wants in a romantic life. She is confuse and doesn't know what she wants. Well that is her problem then. Dean doesn't have to suffer because of this. He has done nothing wrong. Dean deserves better. Someone more mature. I know that know one is perfect and that sometime people doesn't know what they want and all. But the ones who has, doesn't have to suffer and put op with it. I do want Elle and Dean to be together, but she will have to earn it and work for it a little bit. 



Author's Response:

I agree. I think some distance between the two might be necessary. But then what good would that do? Will it make them yearn or appreciate each other more? Or just wedge them further apart?

Elle’s never been a good communicator. Her reasoning, ignorance and dismissing of issues in her romantic life will be highlighted in future chapters. Although I think Elle knows that Dean is a catch, she can sometimes be an over analyzer. She states how she feels her serendipity is too easy and questions every good thing about her happiness. It’s what’s kept her romantic life in shambles. 

Dean, for some odd reason, continues to pursue Elle. Regardless of her mistreatment of him, he continues to pursue her because of his own past relationship issues (which will be discussed in the future). It’s not that he likes the chase, but that he simply likes Elle.

Maybe with more explanation of their pasts, everyone will see why they actually complement each other.  Whether they can work through their issues, is up to them. Thanks for reading and your in-depth review grazylisa.

CG

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 9

NOOOOO!! WTF, how in the hell did they get to hear, I'm totally lost. First, he's mad about not getting together back in the day, then her ignoring him at the club.. DAYS AGO!!!

Then accepting to meet and cutting her down to a lie... THEN, she doesn't apologize and try and explain, just plain ass answer, knowing he wants more. To just leaving?

AND he let's her take off knowing it's over?!!! WTF??!!

I'm not happy with this chapter at all, I thought they would get back to the passion not this shit.. UH!

Please post again, don't leave it like this... Great Job :D



Author's Response:

This chapter will definitely have you going through the motions thinking of what led them here. I will say, Elle definitely got a wakeup call. Dean is a respectable straight forward guy, so he’s not about to force anyone to do something they don’t want to do. He let Elle leave because he doesn’t feel like he should force her to do anything. I doubt the passion is dead and gone and I won’t leave you hanging. Thanks for reading and reviewing sweetlooking218.

CG

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Not understanding Elle right now, shw confuses me. She treated Dean in the past and still treats him like he-s short, what is her major malfunction?    Elle is making my left eye twitch!!



Author's Response:

She seems to have everybody stumped this chapter. Her reasoning for the mistreatment of Dean will be explained in the chapters ahead. Sorry for making your left eye twitch lol. Thanks for continuing to read and review pmgayles.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Why is she such a dick to him? Lol



Author's Response:

Not a dick! Lol she’s definitely a little stiff towards Dean. Hopefully, in future chapters, you’ll see why she’s the way she is. Thanks for reading and reviewing keluboo.

CG

Reviewer: keluboo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I'm guessing that Elle is the way she is due to how her last relationship, which was with Justin, ended. If she wants any kind of romantic relationship with Dean, she's going to have to sit down with Justin and tell him how their relationship affected her.  Otherwise, she's going to be playing the woulda, shoulda, coulda game.



Author's Response:

Her relationship with Justin is just a piece of it. The other stuff will come to the forefront in due time. She definitely has unfinished business with Justin, since she’s clearly holding on. I agree, she should get it right for the right guy before he slips right through her fingers. Thanks for reading and reviewing darqchild69.

CG

Reviewer: darqchild69 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I totally understand Elle; heck, I've been Elle. She is gonna have to put on (or pull off (lol)) her big girlbpanties and make a decision. Is she willing to lose the friendship for a chance at a relationship that she totally craves?



Author's Response:

Wow, you’re the first to be on Elle’s side. She definitely needs to put on her big girl panties or off when necessary lol. I think she’s at a crossroads. She wants to be with Dean, but at what cost? Thanks for shedding some light plus reading and reviewing lovely.

CG

Reviewer: lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I love you story, and specially the realness of your characters and the pace of it.

But I still don't understand Elle, she makes me perplexed. Why is she so closed ? Sure Dean is intense, but she can't deny the chemistry. How can she be so dense ? She better put her shit together or i'm gonna come snatch dean from her ^^

I love your story, keep on the good work.



Author's Response:

Ecstatic to hear you love it! The characters and pacing are all things that I really harp on, so I’m glad you like them.  I’m hoping, in future chapters, to reveal why Elle is clueless in the love department. She definitely has some maturing to do in that area of her life. Trust me, you’re not the first who wants to snatch Dean from her---she’s got a hell of a lot of competition lol. Thanks for your encouraging words as well as reading and reviewing Toimêmetusais.

CG

Reviewer: Toimêmetusais Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Wow! Well...Dean is senstive, but I can see his point: he felt used, unwanted after sharing such intense feeling and intimacy.  Some of the stuff Elle said was just too cold and she is not a mean person.  

Perhaps Elle would get it together if she saw someone else paying attention to Dean, but if it takes that to make her come clean then maybe Dean should start paying attention elsewhere.  Love your story.  



Author's Response:

Dean is only sensitive to the fact there was no closure. You’re right, Elle’s not mean, she just says stupid things sometimes. In return, those stupid things can be hurtful. Hopefully *wink*, something will make Elle stop playing around with Dean. So glad you love the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Elle is working my last nerve, she is running scared b/c what Dean said to her was on point. Elle is wound so tightly its suffocating. What made her this way?

I wouldn't be mad if Dean moved on.



Author's Response:

You’re not alone in her working your nerves lol. That seems to be a common theme in the reviews. Elle's reasoning for running away from things in her personal life will be revealed in future chapters. Until then, thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 05:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Wow they went downhill fast.  Obviously he's still pissed about the past and she really didn't want to acknowledge his feelings on the subject.  Of course I think they will come back from this, but it seems like it might be awhile.  Hopefully he or she won't start dating someone else in the meantime.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

That was fast, huh? Dean definitely has some neglected sentiments about the ordeal, since Elle’s swept it under the rug for SO long. How long it'll take them to get it together will depend on Elle, since the ball is in her court. Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 03:36 pm

Title: Chapter 9

OMG!!! More! I'm glad Dean talked to Elle about what happened or tried to. A lot of thoughts can be wrong for years because of a misunderstanding and lack of communication whether is warranted or not. Dean has struggled with this for years even though it was probably in the very back of his mind. Elle probably would have struggled with it if she hadn't chartered it off so fast and thought off; the main reason I think she did was because she was scared. Anyway, Dean bringing up the past was necessary. Please More!



Author's Response:

I’m working on more as we speak, so no worries. The talk was necessary. Elle’s fears will definitely be tackled, since past relationships are the cause of it. That will be revealed later. Thanks for you enthusiasm, reading and reviewing Anonymous.

CG

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Date: November 24 2014 02:49 pm



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