More please 😊
Author's Response:
Coming soon, girl.
CG
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed
[Report This]Date: March 04 2015 03:32 pm
YAS YAS YAS YAS!!!!! THIS. WAS. FIRE!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks thincakes!
CG
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2015 05:47 am
Wow, This was HOT!!! Dean does not play. He put it down on her. He practically knocked her out. This was an intense scene. I mean lets face, the poor guy waited years to finally get Elle, so of course he wasn't going to be easy on her. LOL. I really like this dominate sexy side of Dean. I hope to see more of it.
I like the sweet, caring and shy Dean, but I like that he is also being a little more sure of himself and dominate. He doesn't have to be over the top dominate like an alpha male. But with a woman like Elle, he has to be firm and sometimes even wear the pants in the relationship. She is a smart woman, but when it comes to her relationships she slow, clueless and a little dumb. Especially in the beginning. But there is progress and she is changing for the better. But I still feel that if Dean gets to lay back and wait for her to initiate about things or decisions in there relationship, that it won't happen. But I like how things are so far.
Now if only pervert Randall can disappear.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think Dean handled that accordingly. I’m especially glad to hear you’re enjoying this new side of him. Just know you’ll probably be seeing it again.
Progression comes with revelations. Some are good and some are bad. They’re still getting a feel for each other as a whole. So with that comes seeing different sides of one another. Hopefully they’ll keep things going in the same direction.
And doesn’t everybody wish pervy Randall would disappear?
Thanks for reviewing Msroos.
CG
Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 05:57 pm
That was hot ! It worth the wait, definitly.Dean handled Elle perfectly, he was THE man. We can understand, after all he waited for 7 fucking years. But i must have to admit that somewhere i miss the sweet, caring, introvert and shy Dean from the begining,he is the eason why i love this story so much from the start. He is so different from the other male characters. Please, don't turn him into an alpha one... What can i say, i have a thing for this kind of men.
Now i can't wait to read what's next. So I'm going to wait very patiently for my weekly update.
Very good work Madame.
Author's Response:
Don’t be scurred lol. He just had to regulate this chapter. Plus, I wanted to show a different side of him. Dean is still Dean---just a little revved up. Your patience is appreciated & thanks a bunch siobhan! I always look forward to your reviews.
CG
Reviewer: siobhan Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 02:10 pm
Nice dress pic!! Finally, I don't know how they lasted so long. Very sexy and erotic. Hopefully everything after the sex will work out as easily. They are definitely perfect for each other. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it took a while. Luckily, it was worth the wait for the both of them. And they are pretty perfect for each other, huh? Here’s to hoping things continue to go well. Thanks Michmom2!
CG
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 03:56 am
Ahhmmm 👀 that was very intense. I guess it's good to see another side of Dean, the more dominant man, but I missed the sweet caring Dean when they finally coupled. I guess slow dances happen after the frenzy. This long awaited chapter was good, excited for more. The dress was all the sexual seduction he needed to be pushed to the point of no return.
Author's Response:
I’m just giving y’all a taste of Big Daddy Dean. I felt it was necessary, but don’t worry darling. He’s still very much there. I’m pretty sure that dress was the culprit for it all though. Glad to know you’re anticipating more and thanks for reviewing HumorMe.
CG
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed
[Report This]Date: February 24 2015 01:08 am
Wow, Dean put it on her. That was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks liberty lady! Glad you enjoyed it.
CG
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 10:55 pm
Wooow gurrl I'm getting that dress.
Author's Response:
Thanks traccie! And if you haven’t found it yet, it’s from Missguided.
CG
Reviewer: traccie Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 10:51 pm
That scene was worth all the wait! That was hot!
Author's Response:
Well, good to know you appreciated it---despite the wait. Thanks for the review katt!
CG
Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 07:49 pm
Hot diggity!! Dominant Dean is in the house..and Elle. Mean muggin people at the restaurant was greatness making it known to others that Elle is his. Those quiet, yet buff, nerds are the ones you need to look out for. I'm glad they finally got down to business. I am eager to see how this changes their relationship...mainly Elle. I'm sure Randall is going to have some craziness to say if/when he figures out Elle and Dean are together and I'm sure he'll effect her job in some way. I am eagerly awaiting the next update.
Author's Response:
They both were a little edgier this chapter. But I think Dean took the cake. I agree those are the ones you need to be lurking for.
Now as for that Randall situation…
That’s for a whole other chapter.
Thanks for reviewing Mavs0515.
CG
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 06:02 pm
LOL....homey has been saving that since college!! He let her have it!!! And he has a dominate streak in bed with her. Ha!! Good grief.
Can't wait for the morning after events....hehehe...
Love, love, love the dress!!
Nice!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he’s been waiting to put it on her and it showed. Apparently Dean’s newfound dominance is winning in the reviews. Glad you were feeling it & thanks for reviewing flikchick!
CG
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 05:34 pm
Love Elle's dress! Elle broke Dean off piece and he put her in coma!! Damn, that was good!!
Author's Response:
He put in work on her ass!
Lol thanks pmgayles.
CG
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 05:14 pm
Well...damn!
Be still my beating heart---Dean knocked her out and I know he is smiling. Elle is going to go to work glowing--love the outfit.
Author's Response:
I’ll take that “Well…damn” as the highest compliment. He definitely didn’t hold back. A glow & limp are probably destined in her future. Thanks for reviewing Penelope!
CG
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 08:52 am
absolutely loved it! I really liked that it wasn't the typical sex talk. Excellent work!
Author's Response:
That’s what I was going for. Good to know it showed. Thanks kuriouskale! That means a lot.
CG
Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 07:56 am
Damn...that's a valentine's night :-)
Author's Response:
*Smirk emoji * Glad you thought so dcphoenix1!
CG
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2015 06:26 am
Everything okay? Pleas update.
Author's Response:
Sorry, Anonymous. I wasn’t feeling my best and the update got delayed. But I’m better now, so expect an update soon.
CG
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 21 2015 07:00 pm
Hahaha girl you are too much. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Glad you like my ignorance alee92.
You Da Best.
CG
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 05:20 pm
I like Elle more now. Good job.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews! I read & appreciate them all. I can only hope you’ll enjoy future updates jahchannah.
CG
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 02:08 am
It's good to see Elle start to grow up and shed her fear. Good story.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 01:36 am
Lol, Tracie still makes me laugh, and knowing her, that dress she gave Elle is Hot.
Ok enough with the waiting, it's time for Elle and Dean to Wear out the Mattress.
Author's Response:
"Wear out the mattress" though? You want Elle to wibble wobble after Dean puts them paws on her, huh? Lol, you're a trip and thanks for the reviewing liberty lady!
CG
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 12:42 am
Elle deserves to be ignored by Dean. She's so stupid! Aghhhh, why do Justin any favors even if he begged? She still should have shut him down. Frustrating!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 12:18 am
Elle just gives TMI to Tracie--who holds her own personal business close.
I am just not feeling these two in a long-term relationship. Something is missing, even the texts are short and to the point. There is no affection and no urge to see one another. There was more chemistry when he showed up at the party with another woman.
Author's Response:
Elle & Tracie have always been extremely open & comfortable about talking about pretty much anything together. They know & spill each other’s tea safely solely amongst each other because that’s just how strong their bond is.
Let’s also remember that they're still only two weeks into being an official couple. Not to mention, this is still foreign /rusty territory for both of them. I can only hope you’ll be more interested in how these two open up as they progress. But as always, thanks for reviewing Penelope.
CG
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2015 12:12 am
It's hard to garner sympathy for Elle as I don't get from reading so far why she's so immature and selfish. Her relationship with Justin didn't seem that deep since she knew it was for sex. So her history doesn't jive with her behavior or maybe we're just supposed to watch her finally grow up? I like Dean and the other characters and your story has me interested. Good work.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2015 11:00 pm
Again, I hope Elle can begin to treat Dean better.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2015 10:04 pm
I so don't like Elle's immature antics.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2015 09:57 pm