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Title: Treasure Hunt

So sexy! Got me wanting more 😊



Author's Response:

I hope I can deliver 

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 11:22 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

I'm so obsessed!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay! thank you. next chapter is up hope you enjoy

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 11:10 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

I'm so obsessed!!!!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 11:10 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

Lots of progress 😁 



Author's Response:

I'm all for my girl learning. Who better to teach right?

 Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 09:27 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

Oh no!!!!!



Author's Response:

:( theres always someone to ruin it. Next chapter is up enjoy

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 06:25 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

The story is good, but the chapters are just way too short.



Author's Response:

sorry, that's how all my stories are

 Reviewer: Miss Stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 05:42 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

I hop that Obie doesn't  loose his job, because Joss would close herself off.  Why does Joshua think that he is owed an explanation?  I thought that Obie and Joshua held the same position?  Awesome sauce!



Author's Response:

Joshua considers Tobias a friend I think he's just offended he wasn't told. They both hold a few titles at the camp but Tobias is the only nutritionist there and he's been there longer than Joshua. If we are talking about rank I would say Tobias outranks Joshua. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 02:52 pm
Title: Treasure Hunt

WAHHHH please don't get in trouble :( ohhhh TOBIASSS isn't shy!!! Loveeee it!!! Will we ever see a possessive or jealous Toby? >:) hahaha 

loved it



Author's Response:

I love possessive/jealous men in fics. So def a possibility bc it'd be hot! Thank you

 Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 09:09 am
Title: Treasure Hunt

I hope they don't get into too much trouble



Author's Response:

for now.. no. But maybe later.

 Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 07:11 am
Title: You & Me?

Loveeeee 💕

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2015 05:30 pm
Title: You & Me?

Damn Toby, you just got hotter.

 Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2015 01:10 am
Title: You & Me?

I'm happy you updated, and I love this story. I wish the chapters could be a little longer but I'm not complaining in any way a86;



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm going to at least try to update more frequently.

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2015 01:03 am
Title: Camp Outlook

I absolutely adore this story I cannot wait until the next updated84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 10:27 pm
Title: Camp Outlook

Yayyyy go joss go !!! I love them and Tobias oh mah gwadddddd I need to get me one of him.



Author's Response:

Girl I want one too!!

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 04:42 pm
Title: You & Me?

Congrats on the new place. Nice build-up. This last chapter was HOT!!!  Please give us more and longer chapters. 💖💖



Author's Response:

Thank you! I usually stick to shorter chapter because of my attention span lol. But I'm going to at least try to update more often, that wouldj make up for it right?

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 03:33 pm
Title: You & Me?

Congratulations  on the move, living  on your own is amazing!  God, I miss living by myself!  Team Tobias!!  She has grown so much and her feelings for Obie and his for her are responsible. Yippe skippy!  More please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so excited and it's so much more affordable than Portland would have been. I really like where this is going and I think, considering the circumstances and what Joss is dealing with, the story is progressing at a good pace. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 02:43 pm
Title: You & Me?

NEW FAN!!!! TOBIASSS IS SO HOT!!! Ahhhhh imagine that... A freaken tall lean handsome mofo is kissing the shit out of you ... Oh wow... 

So loving how he treats her !!! Cannot wait for more :D



Author's Response:

lmao Tobias is fine as hell. Who wouldnt want that? 

 Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 01:27 pm
Title: You & Me?

Well now. That was about the best update.  She's getting a sense of what she wants and how to ask for it.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! It was inspired by a fever dream lol. Joss is going to learn a lot this summer.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 08:34 am
Title: You & Me?

Uh oh Joss is gettin' feisty.. rawr! LOL great chapter!



Author's Response:

lol yeah she is. Our girl is getting bold

 Reviewer: AstralSkies Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 07:56 am
Title: First Things First

Thanks great update, I like how the story is progressing......................

 Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2015 07:24 pm
Title: First Things First

Yes, this is progressing quite nicely. I like that he's letting her set the pace. Though, is he breaking any rules by being interested in her?



Author's Response:

I haven't really covered that. I mean she's 18 but surely there's rules against it? I'll figure it out lol

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2015 04:25 am
Title: First Things First

That was hot! **Sssssst** 🔥💥

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2015 12:17 am
Title: First Things First

Really nice chapter :)

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 10:30 am
Title: First Things First

Ohhh la la!

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 05:48 am
Title: First Things First

Wow, Joss stepped out of her  comfort  zone for once.  She surprised  but will she take twenty steps  back? Cool beans!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 05:22 am


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