Reviews For Camp Outlook
Title: First Things First

Go Rosie,  teach ole girl some moves.  Tobias won't know what hit him.  I absolutely love Tobias.  He is what she needs.  He understands her issues and will probably be one of the few boys who would have patience with her.  Can't wait to see how they progress in future chapters. 



Author's Response:

Tobias is perfect for her. I think she's gonna learn a lot about herself this summer.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 03:13 am

Title: We All Try

Love it! You always pick Asian men as your male characters. It's interesting. I loved te last story you did about the fake humans. Briella I think? I wish youd finish it!! Keep up with this story thiugh. It's fun and can go so many ways. 



Author's Response:

I just realized I do use them a lot. When I look for cast pics they always stand out to me, all gorgeous and whatnot. It's hard to pass them by. I lost the inspiration for Other Half but I was re-reading it last night and I may go back and finish it and post it in it's entirety. I hope you like where I go with this one.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 07:49 am

Title: Country Club Fresh

Woow. So sorry to hear about your housing discrimination experience. Unfortunately some things will never change. That's so disappointing. But Im glad you feel better now. You're story is awesome by the way. Update please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I took a little vacation and got my mind off things. I'm back full force now. Glad you like the story, writing the next chapter now.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 07:53 am

Title: We All Try

Yay! They kissed! lol



Author's Response:

Lol you're so silly. 

Reviewer: AstralSkies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 07:58 pm

Title: Camp Outlook

New reader! Love this so far as well as your other story "Other Half" :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  One day I hope to finish Other Half when the inspiration comes back to me.

Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 04:24 pm

Title: We All Try

Thanks for the update ! Hope you enjoy your holiday ! :) 



Author's Response:

You too! have a happy new year!

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 04:23 pm

Title: We All Try

Thanks for the update ! Hope you enjoy your holiday ! :) 

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 04:23 pm

Title: We All Try

Yay, Tobias kissed her  and it altered her universe.



Author's Response:

Girl her world is upside down

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 04:22 pm

Title: We All Try

I love how you keep reiterating Joss's need to do things for her. That's the most important thing about weight loss, self motivation. Even thought I think she needs more confidence than motivation, because I really feel like she’s just cute and thick. And that kiss...I'm here for it. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

She does need confidence and thats the hardest hurdle for her to tackle. Lol they're so cute together i cant wait for their future encounters.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 04:19 pm

Title: Country Club Fresh

When my plans fall apart I sulk for a little while and then try to find a way around the problem. I pray about it first though.

Also, that comment about Joss not knowing what to do with a guy if she had one? It is my life. That said I am ready for some more Joss/Obie time! When is she gonna get it that you gotta fake it until you make it? You've got to love yourself now or even if you lose weight you won't be happy.

P.S. I'm really sorry to hear about the apartment discrimination.



Author's Response:

I'e been sulking lol. But I'm coming out of it and making myself get over it.. 

I cant wait to get to the Tobias/Joss time, it's not written yet but I have so many ideas for how it's going to play out. The possibilities! 

I think Tobias is going to show our girl lots of things about herself.

THANK YOU!!

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 09:25 pm

Title: Country Club Fresh

I'm sorry your plans fell through. A pretty similar thing happened to me with Portland. I got accepted in to PSU as a transfer and I was really happy because they sell you this nice, fair, unracist, un-bigoted area that everyone loves. It's not that. Literally they gave me a quater of what I needed in fin aid and when I called to find other options the lady told me "some people just don't get to make it out of texas" and perhaps "its better if I stay home" and basically that I didn't belong. So when I called back, this really unpassionate black guy answered the phone and was rude to me so I detailed him my experiences and told him that if he didn't have to look down on me and be asshole because someone already told me that black people don't belong/live up there. He was really sorry, but I still refused to go to the school.

 

I think it's so "free" because the city is nearly 90% white and they are liberal because they've mastered keeping everyone out besides themselves. It's easy to be free when you're the only kind of people in an area. I was really bummed at first, but I realized that I would have been lonely and discriminated against so much there that it wasn't even worth leaving the south. I'm not sure how to get over it cuz I hate Texas and really wanted to escape, but I totally feel your disappointment. 



Author's Response:

Damn that's so messed up. They sell you this dream but dont mention "certain people" arent invited. I've been pretty bummed about it too but you're right, I would most likely be miserable there. I'm actually still waiting to hear from one guy about an apartment but I dont have my hopes up, I dont even know if I want it now. The biggest issue is I've told everyone that Portland was my plan for the past year so to hype it up and then be like "well what happened was.." I'm gonna hear a lot of shit about it ::kanye shrug:: 

I want something like Portland with the nature and stuff but with mass brown people. 

Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 03:08 am

Title: Country Club Fresh

Regroup and go to plan B. Sometimes the first option was never right to begin with. I'm sorry you had to go through that, some people are real idiots. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm getting things together trying to figure out the next step. I dont think it was the right choice

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 01:53 am

Title: Country Club Fresh

Loving this story, it's sweet, cute and quite refreshing.  Love how Obie just laid it all out there because Joss is so clueless, lol.

I hate it that you had to go through all that crap house-hunting; at least you found out now, rather than down the road when you had already moved and started the new job.  Something better will come along that will make this opportunity pale in comparison; just don't give up!  Good luck with everything!



Author's Response:

I love that Joss is so confused about the situation. She has no idea what to do with him its so cute. 

Yeah I'm glad I learned before I put down a deposit and stuff. Thanks for the encouragement I really needed it.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 12:56 am

Title: Country Club Fresh

Bitch, Regroup, Find something better than the original plan.



Author's Response:

Lol I'm working on it. I had to whine first but I'm back on my game and making plans again hahaha

Reviewer: linalin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 11:49 pm

Title: Country Club Fresh

Joshua did tell her the truth,  find a way to be happy with herself.  Which is easier said than  done. Excellent update.  



Author's Response:

It's always easy to give that advice but actually believing it and doing it is damn near impossible. She's got a lot of growing to do

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 10:54 pm

Title: Country Club Fresh

I loved this chapter. And I'm sorry about your house hunting situation, you'll find a better place than Portland. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. There's gotta be sometihng better right? I'll find it lol

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 10:40 pm

Title: Camp Outlook

That's so messed up about the apartment hunting try Seattle maybe ?



Author's Response:

Seattle is so expensive :( but I love the west coast now so I'm lookin into it. 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 10:38 pm

Title: Country Club Fresh

These short chapters are killing me! :( lol



Author's Response:

Sorry :( i actually like my chapters to be between 1,000 and 1,500 words. I try to keep it short and simple without too many unnecessary details.  So they're always short it's just my writing style lol. I will try to post more often to make up for it though.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 09:07 pm

Title: Swim Test

Oh crap. Obie. Obie likes Joss. I'm squealing over here and second-hand covering up my body for her. This is beautiful. Her catching on to it and then doubting it only to have him come right out and say it? I like it. 

And lol at your end note. Bribing people with food is a good way to get help.



Author's Response:

Lol, I like him bold. He's like this is what it is... You down or what?

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 10:59 pm

Title: Swim Test

I love your stories and I love this!! 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you! I'll keep it going

Reviewer: Rainbows. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 10:11 pm

Title: Camp Outlook

This story is such a breath of fresh air. Tobias is something else.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it. Im at the airport working on the next chapter now lol

Reviewer: Noni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 10:54 am

Title: Swim Test

I am interested to see how you plan on having Tobias help her overcome her inhibitions and become more confident.  I understand we want her to have an honest reflection and assessment of her body, values and goals but what will push her to that point.  Right now she is so entrenched in this altered view of herself that I am not sure even Tobias is enough to give her 20/20 eyesight, despite how drool worthy he looks and sounds (picturing Barry White voice when he speaks).  Great chapter.  I wonder if it is required of all campers to see a psychologist as part of their program?  I feel like their is one specific event in her life that really gave her this viewpoint that she can't shake right now.  Sorry, don't live in Portland but I can be a great pen pal ;).  Keep these chapters coming.

 



Author's Response:

As I said before I'm still figuring it out but reviews like this point me in a good direction. You've given me some things to think about for upcoming chapters.

All the campers do see Tobias but only as a nutritionist. Joss is the only one he's giving unrequested doc time to. Although if I ran a camp like this, all the campers would be seeing a psychologist.

I'm gonna be the loneliest kid in Portland so I might take you up on that penpal offer

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 03:24 am

Title: Swim Test

Daaaaaaaaamn...Tobias about to lay it down!



Author's Response:

lmao the boy making plans that for sure.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 03:20 am

Title: Swim Test

Lol move to Chicago and I'm your girl but your so very wrong for leaving me hanging like that ... I so excited for joss I feel like I'm watching the story of my life that hasn't happened yet.



Author's Response:

Lol same here. I'm living vicariously through her.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 03:12 am

Title: Swim Test

I really like where this is going. Joss, just needs to open up a bit. After all thats the first step in this process she's going through. An Tobia's is amazing. I love how he is being patient with her. But i'm greedy, and can't help but to want more from them.

Author's Response:

Lord he's being more than patient. I think Joss will get there bc Tobias is good at getting what he wants... I mean look at him. I'd give him whatever he wanted :)

Reviewer: Soulholder Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 02:37 am



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