Portland is my dream city! I hope you find friends!!!!!!
Why did you end it there?!! I can't! I wanna know what happens. Also is there a character pic for the main lady??
Author's Response:
Me too! I'm soo scared.
Come with me, we'll share a tiny studio apt downtown lol
I dont have a cast pic for her. I've been searching high and low for one but I got nothing.
Reviewer: JB Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 03 2014 02:35 am
UGH Joss really makes you want to shake her sometimes! lol but that's what happens when you have self esteem issues, so hopefully she'll realize that Tobias (total hottie btw) will realize that he really likes her for her! Maybe he'll even be able to help her become more confident! This story is turning out so well!
Author's Response:
Lol our girl does need a shake. I'm glad you're liking it! It's constantly on my mind.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2014 01:37 am
Joss put it out there, but she is just going to ignore it isn't she? I want to see Joss make an honest assessment of herself as well ad love who she is. It's hard especially when you don't see yourself in a positive manner. More please! !
Author's Response:
Joss doesn't even know what to do with that information. She's gonna get there eventually.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2014 12:53 am
Tobias is cute :)
Author's Response:
I know right. Thanks for reading
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2014 06:42 pm
The fact that Joss debunked him clearly putting the moves on her makes me want to shake her. Girl, Tobias wants you---act like you know. He keeps pushing boundaries with each chapter, so I can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Joss is so clueless while Tobias keeps trying to be subtle. The boy is gonna have to shout it at her.
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: November 20 2014 11:07 pm
This is where it ends? Here!?! Got me all girly and squealy and giggly and then it just stops!?! I cannot even. Le sigh. I'll be over here. Waiting.
Author's Response:
lol more to come I promise
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2014 02:47 am
Joss let the manhelp you lose weight on a healthy manner. She is obviously not morbidly obese bur she nweds to do an homest assessment of her weight and body type and go from there. Team Tobias, that boy be fine!!
Author's Response:
You're completely right, the journey starts with Joss doing a REAL HONEST assessment. Hopefully our boy can get through to her.
...He's too pretty.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2014 11:43 pm
I don't know where you're going either but I like it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! 3rd chapter is up, hope you enjoy
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2014 10:12 pm
Im in love with this already. I hope you update soon please!
Author's Response:
Yay thank you! 3rd chapter is ready for you.
Reviewer: Noni Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2014 10:45 am
Oooh. Flirty Bunk Leader
Author's Response:
Who doesnt love that? More to come
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2014 04:17 am
She's a little dramatic but I like tobias
Author's Response:
Yeah it's a self esteem issue. Tobias has his work cut out for him
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2014 01:46 am
Me likeyyyyyyyy (not even a real word). Keep posting i can't wait to see where this story goes.!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is up, hope you like it. THANK YOU
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2014 01:33 am
Obie has stated that he likes your curves in a round about way. Listen to the man abpit your eating habits and be more active. I could use this camp! ! Loving this story!!
Author's Response:
Right, he tried to be sneaky about it...
Joss is oblivious
Thank you!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 11:55 pm
I'm really feeling this so far. Never seen a story discussing a weight loss camp on here, but now I'm glad to say you're doing it---and you're doing it well. Joss reminds me of myself, she's her own worst critic. I also like Ezra Miller, so that's another win for this story. I'll be looking forward to your updates.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I think a lot of people can realate to the self esteem issues Joss has. Ezra is underused on this site lol he's gorgeous. The next chapter is up! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 11:54 pm
Yay, I love Tobias!!!
Author's Response:
Aint he pretty?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 01:13 pm
Yay! It seems so interesting !
Author's Response:
Working on the next chapter! Thanks for reading
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed
[Report This]Date: November 08 2014 06:23 pm
Sounds good so far. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Chap 2 is in the works.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 04:29 pm
Yes! A new story, I can't wait for the next post. Please keep going :D
Author's Response:
working on it! thanks for reading
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 03:26 pm
I say Yay! I am really enjoying the start of the story. I never knew there were camps for overweight people until the show, I think was called, My 500lb Life or so something. Then I took notice. I am way too old for those camps, but wish I had one during my 20s. I like the short description of all the girls in the bunk and I am really enjoying where you might go with Tobias. First off I like his name and I think the guy you chose is super cute and Tobias fits him.
My only concern is that Joss stays focused more on her goals and less on Tobias. I like the idea of her having some personal achievements that are not later connected to a guy but supported by him. I actually think the fact that she saved all that money, because I know those camps are crazy expensive (watch Tobias's family are the ones who own it), shows determination, perseverance, and passion. Beautiful person there. I am enjoying it, please keep it coming.
Author's Response:
I think I'm going to turn it into a "health camp" like not just for overweight people but for people with all types of eating disorders, idk yet. I'm still figuring out where I'm taking this.
Ezra Miller (Tobias) is adorable in a hot hippie kind of way. I have him cast for a few stories I have sitting around, he's just so pretty.
Joss is definately on a mission. Initally Tobias was a distraction but I've made him into more of an ally... we'll see where it goes. I'm working on chap 2 now
Thank you for reading
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 09:50 am
Yay, I want to read more......
Author's Response:
Thank you! working on chap 2 now!!
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 08 2014 01:48 am