What Mr. Ken's wife is doing to him is tantamount to emotional abuse. It's a shame he feels like he has to swallow that mess in an effort to keep up appearances.
I like where you are going with this story. So far it's emotional without the usual overwrought melodrama that you sometimes find in stories on sites like this.Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 07:14 am
I want to hear from Mica's point of view definitely. The only error that i saw was that you put mines instead of mine but this story is so intriguing i read it as soon as I realized that you had updated please do so again.Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2015 10:33 am
Oh man, I feel so sorry for ken. I hope he finds happiness soon maybe with Jamica? 😉
I would love to hear Jamica's point of view. This story is really deep and I'm loving it, so keep it coming 😊Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 11:23 pm
I've read this story and with each chapter I try to get into the grove of the story you are telling, but something is off. I can't put my finger on it. The implausability may be to much for me, but I think it is the character of Jamica. She just isn't believable. I am not saying the story is not good, outside of Jamica, I like the story. I like Ken and his struggle and his trifling wife and the detached kids. But the two of them together just is not quite there for me.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 05:37 pm
It may enrich the story to have Jamica's point of view. However, I fear a loss of the intensity you've cultivated in Ken's character, given that you have little time with your studies to write. That's just my greed and impatience talking. Whatever makes this story flow for you; keeps you inspired. It's really great, this far!Reviewer: Not sure Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 01:30 pm
I would like hear Mica's point of view, although I can admit that age difference bothers. Ken is his best but MJ is like an albatross around his neck bringing him down. Telling him that he was ruining their family when it was her cheating ways that were. Nasty drunk heifer!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 12:11 pm
Wow. Ok so I've been reading since the first chapter and I've got to say that this is amazing!! I love the pacing and the characters but also how you've written the story. It's like (don't know if this is true) you've been through a divorce etc and you're bringing it out on here. Anyway thanks for posting this and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ken & Jamica takes things slow 😜 10/10Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:27 am
Good start. I love a Good North Carolina based story. :)Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 05:06 pm
"No, I don't know you from Adam, but I help people. That's what I do, then they are out of my life."
It can be really draining to take on others' problems. There's something mysterious about Jamica.
I flucuate between being pissed at Ken for letting that skank get away with all that she has and being so hurt for him being so devastated by that skank. MJ has always been a selfish git, Ken just didn't want to see it. He may have lived for her, but at no time did he figure in her life. 20 years, a very long time to be deluded. I'm concerned about his dependence on Jamica. She can not be his saviour.
This is a really good story, Chica.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 05:37 am
Mildred is crazy, showing up at the house drunk. If Ken hated you it would be because you cheated on him repeatedly and didn't hide that you were cheating! Looking forward to Ken finding himself and being truly happy.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 02:45 pm
Love this chapter. Glad he had the courage to close the door on his wife instead burying is feelings. Seeking out comfort is natural response and he found that with Jamica. Hopefully he doesn't hurt her because it sounds as though she has a past as well.
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Date: November 30 2014 01:28 pm