Title: Chapter 1

What is wrong with Callie?

Reviewer: blackpanthershay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2016 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

This story is getting juicy are you coming back to finish it?

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 09:04 pm

Title: Casting

I like the cast pictures.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You go girl!!! Get him where it hurts. I bet he won't try to intimidate you again. Peace out!! Natasha.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

I tjink i'm confused. Did he not get HIS girlfriend attscked her first? Its like he heard half of what she said. His comment was good, but it didn't really fit with the conversation.  I like this story and where I think u r going with it, but u need an editor/beta reader.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 09:50 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

Ah come on more chapters this just got interesting.

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Date: August 14 2015 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

Soooo glad this has been updated!!!!! Loved it and I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 4: The curve ball

There is no detention in college or a principal for that matter. Also, your characters seem really immature to be in college. If this were a high school story that would make much more sense. You might want to reconsider or rewrite your story so it can make sense. And you might want to get a beta reader as well. It's a good storyline, there's just some mistakes that are hard to ignore.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

Loved the first few chapters when Callie stood up to Darren and Darren's reaction..it was very entertaining and inspiring to watch..loved their banter..wish it continued longer..Darren's transformation seems too dramatic..wish he retained a bit more of  is bad boy appeal...surprised he can't see what a silly selfabsorbed and horrible girl Natasha is...can't he see that he turned a new leaf coz of Callie and he wanted to prove to her that he was not a monster..y would he choose the side of a horrible girl like Natasha when he clearly knows she bullied Callie and Callie only acted in self defense..is he blind??..hope he comes to his senses and ditches Natasha.. Callie is too brilliant of a girl to be treated like that..

Reviewer: Lizzie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

I think its overkill for Darren to call Callie a monster..she has never hurt anyone senselessly like him..she was just defending herself against that bitch Natasha..god Natasha is like the most disgusting girl ever... she's shallow stupid superficial cruel and conceited.. And if Darren thinks Natasha is right then he probably deserves to be with a bitch like her...its sad for a moment I thought he was better than that..I'm glad Callie decided to speak up for herself her courage fearlessness and loyalty is very admirable...

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

Darren and Natasha can get the deuces.  They both on some BS.  Darren wasn't giving Natasha the time of day until Callie said something and now he acting like she can do no wrong.  Please Darren get your life together.  She a bully because she won't let you nor Natasha disrespect her in any way.  Please let her go back to her gorgeous self, get her education and let them wallow in their own stupidity and let her start talking to another popular guy.  Let's see what Darren and Natasha say about that.  Please don't have her at the party and how the heck can she avoid Darren when they are in detention together.  Dumbass chick.  Ooooohhhh Darren and Natasha ticked me off this chapter.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

I really like this story!  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

I think she has feelings for Darren. One thing for sure, I wouldn't let them fuck things up with my scholarship. I hope she's smarter than that. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 6: The argument

I just read all the chapters and the story is interesting.

 I think Callie can find other people to hang out with or better yet get a part time job.  She probably should date too bc Darren's nose is wide open for Natasha's silly, mean girl azz--and that's nothing to brag on.  

Darren did act like a bully, but apaprantly he was a sensitive one bc she caught him crying like a big ole baby.  These people are acting like they are in middle school.

What makes Nat thinks Callie is after Darren?  

Glad to see Callie man up to Nat, but it is time for Callie to move on and please have enough pride to not go to a party you weren't invited to.

Each chapter keeps getting better and better! 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 2: Detention

Just a few things : university's do not have principals they have Deans and you do not get detention in university you get suspension depending on your offense.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 2: Detention

Just a few things : university's do not have principals they have Deans and you do not get detention in university you get suspension depending on your offense.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 5: The date

update please

Reviewer: queenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 4: The curve ball

Darren....NO Callie-cham can Not pull a James Bond i see bad results

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2015 01:23 pm

Title: Chapter 2: Detention

Callie it might not be wise poking a panther with a stick but its fun as hell to watch the proceding chaos

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2015 01:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

WHOOO thay was some take down go noona

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2015 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 5: The date

Interesting update! What's going on with Darren. Why is he so emotional? Hope Darren isn't using Natasha to get close to Callie.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait until the next chapter!!!

Write soon!!!

Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 5: The date

Natasha doesn't deserve your friendship if allowed your feelings anout her every crush to end your friendship.  Darren seems to have feelings for Callie so why ask out Nastasha? Nastasha will be an easy lay he will definitely get some. Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 12:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5: The date

Okay she is starting to like Darren and I am guessing that Darren has liked her or noticed her for a while.

I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Faith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 07:17 am

Title: Chapter 5: The date

Ok....this is a development of a sort.

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Date: December 03 2014 05:06 am



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