Title: Chapter 4

Lol so happy Your back !! That cliff Hanger tho !!! 😩😩 & im always crying While reading the chapters lol . Such a good story cant walt for the next update

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 11:54 am

Title: Chapter 3

Loved the update. That school that Yui goes to seems like a torture chamber. Mr Sato seems to have an evil streak!! Yui needs to stay far away from him. Hmm, are they experimenting on the kids at Yui's school? Glad she has her friends to help her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 3

I feel so bad for Yui,  why does she go to that special school?  Is it because  she mixed with African American?   I don't  like those people and i want them all to die horribly.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Idk if it's your purpose or if it's my big heart for children & justice, but I have literally cried about every chapter lol. 

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, what's going on? Are they experimenting on Yui? Interesting story so far.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 2

Excellent!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

Woahhhh, I'm still confused about whats happening. WHat period is this. Thats scary this is based off of like real facts that happened? Did this happen in Japan to foreigners? This is a really good book however way you are turning this. 



Author's Response:

No none of this is "historic" this is pure imagination. This is basically drawing from your generic "government goes crazy" type of stories. The time period is kind of "futuristic" not really definite or anything....

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Supreb!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 06:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2

What the hell, government is kidnapping children now? 



Author's Response:

Let's call it...a special education program....

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 05:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Don't like Rie, she took the child that she does not want and left Jason. Why does she think fetting married to Jason and raising their child would end her dreams?  What in world happened that they had to go running like some fugitives?  Will Jason ever see his child again?  Yep don't like Rie!! But I am team Jason all the way!  Will they ever cross paths again? Please continue.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see where this revamped version is going to go. I was already loving the first one you put up. this seems like it can only get better ! that into though !!!! lol



Author's Response:

Thanks! With time on my hands, I'm hoping to turn out something good

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 04:15 am



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