Sacrifice is all I think about these two. It's so heartbreaking, but I love it.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2015 08:11 pm
Update soon please
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2015 10:33 am
Will lyssa give herself for her lover's safe return? Once he comes back, will he accept her faith? She might find a family of her own as he has his child and mate. Will he be able to let her go again?
Author's Response:
Loads of questions, will def answer them in the plot :)
Reviewer: Ava Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 09 2015 09:11 am
It's amazing, no it's fantastic, no it's mind blowingly good. I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Made me grin like a loon that :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2015 07:03 pm
Whoo!! I felt like I was watching a movie. I was reading so quickly I'm exhausted! Excellent writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying it
Reviewer: mya1967 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2015 04:01 am
This is awesome!! I couldn't stop reading until I finished all posted chapters. Now I'm tracking it and it's my current fave!! Good stuff!!
Reviewer: mya1967 Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2015 10:12 pm
This is a nice story but I dont think I care for it anymore. I don't like the alpha who claimed her when he already had a mate. I would rather she belong to Leopold. True mate is sacred and if he truly loved her and thought she was his mate, he would have never went and mate with someone else and have a child with them. I started reading this but now b I think I will stop. I am turn off by the story line and both lead characters are rubbing me the wrong way. The only person I like is Leopold. With that said keep doing what you do, you are a good writer, for some reason I do not like this story at all, its just not my cup of tea sorry. 😞
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2015 02:41 am
Good work! I love the start of this story!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2015 03:12 am
Aaaand I'm hooked
Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 08 2015 09:36 pm
I love this story. Please continue it.:-D
Reviewer: April_Destinee Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2015 03:15 am
Yasssss!
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2015 08:29 am
<sigh> This made my eyes tear up , i felt her pain at his reply. Love is not always kind, just or unselfiish , it just is. Sometimes you love someone without reason and it is the purest love you can ever know , but it hurts the worse. I think , I know that she will go back because no matter where she goes , even if she gets away this time, she can be on the run for years, but at somepoint she will go back. They are bonded.
Author's Response:
Hi Redmoon,
I really enjoyed reading your review on the complexities of love, and I agree completely. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2015 09:05 am
hmm wolves and vampires..okay I'm being nonchalant about the story in case you snatch it. I can't risk getting too involved. I hear therapy session are expensive. When I tell them I'm seeing them because this excellent writer got me caught up in another one of her stories and then removed it from the site. I'll either get pushed out of the office or sent straight to the padded room that I'll be calling home
Author's Response:
Oh, vemo anon, your words burn me, yet I find myself chuckling at your wit! Thanks for reviewing...in case I snatch it! Oh that made me laugh :)
K.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 28 2015 04:02 am
He needs to leave her alone!! Me likey.
Now what's this I hear about you hating Lover's Dance? That is my favorite story! OK one of my favorites. But a favorite nonetheless!! Can I tell you that I laughed out loud several times when Maddy (?)blurted out "I am a virgin!!" to whomever was listening!! I absolutely love it! I hope you get back to it soon.
Author's Response:
Hi Khamalani,
Glad to hear you like the story. Umm, Lovers' Dance and me are having some serious words right now, but never fear I will continue to work on it until completion. The love-hate vibes should disappear soon, I hope. Then it's back to posting. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 04:13 pm
Love it!! Arric leave her be, you are only hurting Lyssa. She deserves all of you and you can't give her all of you. is Soraya really Arric's true mate? Not really liking Arric too much. More please!
Author's Response:
Hi pmgayles,
Happy to hear you're enjoying this short story, and yes, Arric should leave Lyssa alone, but love... That's some crazy stuff right there, can't control it, can't ignore it. Thanks so much for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 02:15 pm
Hmmm it so good
Author's Response:
Hi purplelover23, glad to hear you like it so far. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 01:15 pm
This is fantastic, I can't wait for the remainiing chapters. However, please don't deprive us of lover's dance anymore. I have been pining for a conclusion to that story. And you took it down, so I can't indulge in a little re-read when I miss them.
Author's Response:
Hey bobbie,
Nice to know you're enjoying this short story so far, and as I mentioned to another reviewer, I should soon overcome the love-hate relationship I have with Lovers' Dance. I will endeavour to return to that story as soon as. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: bobbie Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 08:42 am
Great start, I'm definitely invested in this story. Love paranormal so this is right up my alley. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hi Michmom,
I know right! Paranormal stories are my thing. I did read your last review on Lovers' Dance and you always make me crack a smile. I am now fully aware your eyes are on me watching for part 2. Hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 08:15 am
I'm more than interested, I can't wait to know what's next !
Author's Response:
Hi Peanut,
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying this short story so far.
K.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 07:44 am