Oh I love it 😊 I hope we find out more about Charlie and Alana.Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2015 01:06 am
Alana clearly has issues that cause her to lead a very structured life and somehow her connection to Charlie could help her break free from these constraints she has placed on herself. So I like the story idea as it seems original to me and it's definitely different from the story New Home.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 09:19 pm
Yes, the first impression was reminds me of "a New Home" which just recently wrapped up. Still the characters are already very different.
Don't be afraid to get someone to edit for you. it may slow you down a day or so with posting, but it should be worth it.
Does Alana work?Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 06:05 pm
this was really sweet; i enjoyed every part of it.Reviewer: cc Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 27 2015 03:54 am
that's good. I can't wait to see what next.
Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2015 05:56 pm
Does Alana have OCD? Was she abused as a child? That is really nice of her to buy Charlie food and drinks, although that other dude can kick rocks! Can't wait to find out Charlie's story. More please? !Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2015 02:09 pm
This story seems familiar? Keep going, I'd like to see where it goes.
It does? I just came up with recently after seeing a woman chat with a homeless Man. I thought how cute.. let me know if you know what the name of that story that seems familiar with mines. I don't want people thinking I ripped it off from another author.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2015 08:15 am