Reviews For Finding Ace
Title: Chapter 7

I have to remember this is an adventure. Alliances might be formed and broken and re-formed. So, yeah, I can see why Adam is still among the living. Sure, he can't be trusted now, but who knows. Plus, you best believe the rest of the crew don't trust him as far as they can throw his fine ass. He might become quite useful, if the others as as good as they seem to be.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Why would they trust Adam not to betray them? How are they going to prevent it,  babysit him 24/7? This aspect of the story makes absolutely no sense.  And Natia is supposed to be lusting after the guy that tried to kill her? Again after a betrayal of this magnitude they let Adam off this easy and expect him to simply comply with their wishes makes absolutely no sense to me. Hopefully in time, the method behind what I see as madness will become clear.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Adam has proven himself untrustworthy so he should be dead already.   Mika is psychotic and needs a kill shot to his brain.  Jail is too good for him.  Each chapter this story gets better and better.  Two thumbs up Is my rating!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 12:22 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Great update! Glad Adam didn't get the upper hand. Hope they are able to bring Mika down.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 6

I was hoping that she or at least Extra would kill Adam,  damn!  Mika is cray cray!!  Love how strong Nadia is, she lost her mother and wad taken from her father and she still triumphed. Yep, she's my shero! 



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 01:04 pm

Title: Chapter 5

SMH!! Can't believe Adam is a traitor! I hope she kicks his azz good!! The bugger!! Wonder if he betrayed their plan to Mika?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 5

My girl got moves.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 5

Adam must die!!!  Natia beat him like Ali beat Liston!   I am not surprised that Adam is an Benedict Arnold as there is no honor among criminals or theives!  I want Adam to die and Ezra to die but slowly. Drag that sugady out!  More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 4

That was awesom, will they get Mika and will Natia stop head butting Adam?  I hope no one is going to betray them or will they, please don't let be any of them but helping them take down Mika!!!!!

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Didn't see that coming. Natia is Ace!  I like that she's strong and tough.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! Natia is the sugady!  Adam has it bad but daddy Ezra ain't having it.  When she head butted Adam I was rolling.  Mila deserves to receive whatever they have planned. So want him to go to prison and get shanked! Awesome sauce!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 12:11 pm

Title: Chapter 4

loving this, hahaha! thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 10:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

That's what i'm talking about.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

 WOW, I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS HER. THAT'S ONE TOUGH CHICK. MAN I HOPE THEY FORM THEIR ON ALLIANCE, AND BRING DOWN MIKA.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Whoa, didn't expect that one! Good writing!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I knew there it!!  Damn Mike trained her well. What the he'll could she have been wearing that made them think that she was a man?  Extra found his baby girl!!!  Maybe  she can help them find Ace? Unless she killed Ace?  More please

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 11:20 am

Title: Chapter 3

dun dun dunn...!! great update  - thanks!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 2

good update - thank you!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2015 10:28 am

Title: Chapter 2

This is REALLY good.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I agree Alexis is shady.  So is Alexis an undercover agent? If so then she's my hero.   I really want Mika to go down in flames even though hehe's fine as hell.  No Nadia this chapter,  so I do hope that she is safe. Awesome sauce! !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 11:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am glad that Nadia got away, but where could she go and be safe? Does she know where her father is?  Mike is coo coo for Coco Puffs!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 02:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

yes! yes! yes!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 10:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading the next chapter! Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: Cyn Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 10:16 am



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