Reviews For Alpha
Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

Caleb and Ava-Rain are so adorable together.  I wonder what Kasey will say when Ava-Rain calls her?  Team Caleb!!!



Author's Response:

They are adorable, aren't they? Totally wish I had a Caleb to be adorable with! As for Kasey, I doubt Ava-Rain's in any rush to contact her & tell her everything that has happened because she knows Kasey would NOT be happy!

As always, thank you so much for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 08:16 pm

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

Is it wrong that I didn't want this chapter to end. I love Ava-rain's character, usually in the stories I read the girls are portrayed as soft, sensitive and submissive not saying that the is anything wrong with that I just like reading about a strong assertive girl once in a while. I'm on edge waiting for your next update lol keep it up girl.



Author's Response:

It's not wrong at all! I totally left you guys hanging by splitting this chapter in two, but it was super long & I didn't think readers wanted to read a chapter that was 10,000+ words, lol. So glad you're enjoying Ava-Rain's character. Even though this story's titled 'Alpha', it's about Ava-Rain's journey just as much as it's about Caleb's. As for my next update, I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, Zoleka! I truly appreciate your continued support for this story & it definitely motivates me to keep going! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 06:43 am

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

Girl, I would PAY to read this story.  You really should consider publishing it.



Author's Response:

OMG! That's extremely sweet of you to say, Jaye Sims! Haven't really thought about publishing, mainly because the idea terrifies me, lol.

I'm so honoured to have you as a reader, so, again, thank you so much for taking an interest in this story. It really, really, REALLY means a lot! :)

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 11:02 pm

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

Yes! Definitely liking this new version of Ava-Rain! No hysterics, but her reaction was measured, confident and reasonable.

Is it wrong that I really want them to tear up the sheets now...lol?!

Good stuff!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying it, flikchick!

As for them tearing up the sheets, LOL, they've only known each for, like, four days!! Hahaha, but I'm sure Caleb and his wolf would love nothing more, though.

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 09:35 pm

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

Team Caleb!!  Belive in Caleb Ava-Rain, what do you have to loser?



Author's Response:

Agreed!

Thanks for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 09:08 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Wow now that is a jacked up way to find out. I would have lost it! Now I get to learn more about Caleb and this pack of his. I'm excited!!!! Can't wait for this. I love their connection, it is soo powerful. I wonder why Rickon went to her like that. Was he about to attack her or something? Is he going to get in trouble for not listening. 

 

Update soon!!! 



Author's Response:

Caleb definitely did not want Ava-Rain to find out in that way, but she did. And now we'll FINALLY get to learn about Caleb, his pack & their werewolf history, which I'm super excited about! As for Rickon, we'll find out why he went after Ava-Rain in a couple of chapters. And you already know Caleb doesn't joke when it comes to Ava-Rain, so Rickon will definitely be reprimanded.

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing, KeiKei! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 01:51 am

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Declan😁 finally we are about to see some Ava-Rain Declan interaction I so exited. I keep imagining what I would do if I were Ava-rain and encountered to giant wolves that shook the earth when they moved. I would've probably ran for the hills screaming like a woman who escaped from a mental institution lol. Looking forward to your next update. 



Author's Response:

Don't you just love him? 'Cause I sure do. And, LOL, I would probably have the EXACT same reaction because I'm such a wuss!

As always, thank you for reading & for taking the time to review, Zoleka! Next update will, hopefully, be soon. :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 09:49 pm

Title: Cast

A little more ethnic diversity would be nice...



Author's Response:

Sorry you're not a fan of the cast, jahchannah, but this is EXACTLY how I envisioned these characters to look.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 06:29 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Declan Declan Declan. We all know Declan can take his brother and he was going to for Ava Rain. The beginning of their bond and they don't even know it yet. That woman is going to die alone and bitter and she will only have herself to blame and for the record I still hate her. But I promise that is the last time I will mention it. I am glad Ava Rain know who Caleb is and who she is as well.  It obvious who my favorite. Lol please update soon. Happy writing my friend



Author's Response:

LOL, our boy—or should I say YOUR boy—is back! Hope you enjoyed him, even if he was in wolf form. As for Gladys, that's okay, hate her all you want! I don't mind, lol. This chapter was definitely a 'game changer' for Ava-Rain & Caleb's 'relationship', but let's hope that it doesn't end up being a 'deal breaker', as well.

I will try & get the next chapter posted very soon. Thanks for reading & reviewing, and for just being super awesome, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! ;)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:23 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Great update



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it, jomoli!

Thank you so much for reading & for your review! It means a lot! :)

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 01:32 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

I just love these two together. They're just so cute. Gah and the title of this chaper gave me some serious Flyleaf feels. Now I need to listen to the song lol Amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

I love them, too! They're so cute, it's almost sickening, lol. And, OMG, don't you just love Flyleaf? Haven't listened to them much since Lacey left, but 'All Around Me' is, legit, one of my favourite songs ever!!

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, Valentine! :)

Reviewer: Valentine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:31 am

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

I'm liking this version of Ava-Rain. I like the more decisive, less fearful person here. I also like that she knows what Jennifer is all about. She's less naive all the way around.

Nice!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your feedback, flikchick! Ava-Rain's character definitely needed a little fine-tuning, so I'm glad you've noticed the little differences. Wait, what am I saying, you've ALWAYS noticed the little things, lol. It's one of the many reasons why I totally appreciated having you as a reader! ;)

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 01:45 am

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

:::swoon:::  That is all.



Author's Response:

LOL, glad you enjoyed it, Jaye Sims!

Thanks so, so much for reading & for your review! :)

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 11:42 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

This book is excellent!  It's so well written.  As a werewolf story I can't say that it's different but you are such a good writer which makes this book so good.  



Author's Response:

OMG, THANK YOU so much, jahchannah! As a writer who felt like she was failing & pulled down this story eight months ago as a result, you have no idea just how much that means to me. Wow. That just makes me even more determined not to let you down, lol.

Thank you for reading & for this lovely review! It makes me so happy to know that you're enjoying Alpha! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 10:55 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Caleb told Ava-Rain what and who he is, good. Love these two together! Keep it coming toots!! I give this update two thumbs up!



Author's Response:

I love them, too! 

Thanks for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter & I'll try to get the next one posted soon! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 10:18 pm

Title: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

Can't wait for the next chaper



Author's Response:

Hi, keikei2!! Thanks so much for taking the time to read Alpha for a second time! It meant a lot to me to have your support then & I'm EXTREMELY grateful to have it again!

Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 10:18 pm

Title: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

Oh my  holy cow I'm loving Caleb more and more I wish I could find myself a guy like him or Declan (did I spell that right to lazy to check) speaking of Declan I can't wait to read about His and Ava-rains friendship I really love that bond they share, again great chapter looking forward to the next one



Author's Response:

LOL! Trust me, I wish I had a Caleb or Declan, too!! Heck, I'll take the whole entire pack! ;)

I never, EVER expected that so many readers would fall in love with Declan's character when I first posted Alpha! I absolutely loved developing his & Ava-Rain's friendship because their bond is just so special & genuine, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

As always, thank you so much for taking the time to read & review, Zoleka! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 06:26 pm

Title: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

Oh my  holy cow I'm loving Caleb more and more I wish I could find myself a guy like him or Declan (did I spell that right to lazy to check) speaking of Declan I can't wait to read about His and Ava-rains friendship I really love that bond they share, again great chapter looking forward to the next one

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 06:18 pm

Title: Cast

Wow!  And thank YOU in return. :-)



Author's Response:

No thanks necessary! You truly are amazing & the Chamber's so lucky to have you. And. . .*lowers head in shame*. . .I promise to try & be a better reader & actually start reviewing your stories. I'm absolutely horrible when it comes to leaving reviews, but do know that I am thoroughly enjoying your works! :)

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 06:00 pm

Title: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

Chick flicks and ice cream huh. LOl. Hilarious. I like where this is going. I hope she doesn't get scared away when she learns about his world. Hell I want to know more. 



Author's Response:

Aren't 'chick flicks & ice-cream' just the best remedy for everything? Lol.

I'm so glad that Alpha is continuing to hold your interest, KeiKei, because I'm having so much fun writing it (again). Again, thanks so much for taking the time to read this story & for all of your awesome reviews! It means a lot! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 11:08 pm

Title: 4 (1) - 'Let the sky fall, when it crumbles. . .'

Her grandmother is a peice of shit. How can you treat your only grandchild like that. Over damn appearances? Because you didn't like her father. It isn't her fault. She didn't ask to be here. Her parents are dead, the least you could do is show some kind of love towards her. If you were going to treat her like that then you shouldn't have taken her in. Evil witch



Author's Response:

LOL, no love for Gladys from you either, huh? I don't blame you. She's pretty horrible & it totally sucks that she couldn't set aside her dislike towards Ava-Rain's father in order to love and accept her only grandchild. Evil witch, indeed, lol.

Thanks for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 10:44 pm

Title: 3 - 'I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones. . .'

Lol. Not I'm going to make sure that you're awake to enjoy it. LOl. I'm glad that he was there though. I don't blame her for freaking out. If I wake up in a man's bed with no idea how I got there, it is going to be a problem. I wonder what happens from here. 



Author's Response:

LOL, don't you just love Caleb? Totally agree! I probably would have freaked out a lot worse than Ava-Rain did!

So glad that you're still enjoying this story, KeiKei! Thanks for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 09:56 pm

Title: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

Second time around and I swear it's still as good, if not better than when I read this the first time!!

You're still awesome Twelve20One and you're still able to make me catch feelings for fictional characters :).



Author's Response:

I was so thankful to have your support the first time around & I can't even tell you how much it means to me to have it again. So, thank you times a gazillion for taking another chance with Alpha & I promise I'll try my hardest not to let you down! Lol, if I can make readers feel something with my stories & characters, that's the best payment and motivation I can ever ask for.

You're the awesome one, A_Girl_Called_T! Thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to review, And, again, THANK YOU for favouriting me as an authour! That meant more than you can imagine & I truly appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 07:56 pm

Title: 2 - 'Just close your eyes, the sun is going down. . .'

Is that Caleb?!! Oh gosh, is he going to claim her?? Why is her grandmother so damn mean. She didn't ask for this life I'm sure. How is she ungrateful? Because she wants her parents? Any child would. So what she doesn't want to go straight to college. Not everyone wants that and she should respect her for knowing that and not wasting time. She needs to get over herself and be a grandmother. I wonder why Caleb can't claim her? What war is he talking about? A war with humans? 



Author's Response:

Caleb seemed pretty determined to reject Ava-Rain as his mate, but that may end up being easier said than done. As for Gladys, she definitely has her issues &, unfortunately, those issues have prevented her from being the grandmother that Ava-Rain needed & deserved. The basic reasons as to why Caleb doesn't want to claim Ava-Rain (a lot of them tie into the 'threat of war' he's referring to) will be explained very soon, but there are also other reasons for his reluctance to accept her & they won't be revealed for a while.

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing, KeiKei! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 03:36 am

Title: 1 - 'I don't care, party anywhere, I'm broke, man, possibly beyond repair.'

I really like how this starts. I can't wait to see where this goes. 



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying it so far, KeiKei!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read & review! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:50 am



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