Elena is going to die soon and So will Conrad because Adrian ain't playing about his made and her son.  I want Elena's death to be long and drawn out. Adrian, p!ease get Zaira fast!

Just read this and it's good so far. Is there more published on Lit?  

Interesting start so far.  I know you said that you need a beta and I hope that someone can help you soon.  Until then, I suggest you read read your chapters so you can catch the obvious stuff like mispelling of names and possessive nouns, etc.  Thanks for sharing.

Why do men think that crap is sexy?  Do not come at me and touch me without my expressed wishes.  Zaira trying to keep herself safe has just ran into the hands of the enemy and I hope Colin retains enough sense not to touch her himself.  How would he feel if it was his made in Hitzag hands? 

Good chapter.  Can't wait until they reunite.

Well our lil Zaira is becoming a very popular woman.  First Adrian, then Igor, Nelly may have had feelings for her but since she is his dead best friend's woman who knows now Colin is stiffing around and Duncan is being a douche bag along with Adrian's brother because he wants revenge for her locking his ass up.

Let's not forget about the ho of the clan Elena who needs her claws clipped.

I'm enjoying the story so far thank you for sharing.  I thought I had missed a chapter @ first because this one just came out of no where with Zaira taking Eli to a sleep over.  I hope he is okay but I have a sense that Zaira's instincts are on point and she did not feel any bad vibes from the kids parents that Eli'e house he's sleeping over.

Can't wait for more like the storyline want to see where you take it.

In the opening summary Zaira is referenced as Adrian's possession, which seems to objectify Zaira instead of give her the status that being his mate and other half deserves. I'm glad she's running from him...

Great chapter...would like to see Adrian and Zara interact again

I hope Elena gets what is cpming to her soon.  What a conniving witch.  Thanks

Wow, great start to the story.  My goodness she is a brave woman to try and take down Conrad knowing that she has a lot of obstacles in her way.  Thanks

Do you still need a beta? Do you mean a woman or man?? If so I would love to do it. Let me what you need :)

I can't believe the Mayor himself went off because she did a damn good at her job and took him down. Usually, they would be praising you for that. How interesting that he finds his mate in the one person that took his brother down. I wonder how Conrad is giong to feel about this. Dang, he killed someone becuase they couldn't find her. Wow. Does he find her? 

I love love love this story and have been waiting on its completion since Literotica (hint hint). Please continue to update as quickly as possible.