Title: Chapter 18

Shyla really anniys me at times actually she anniys me most of the time.  You were wrong fir not telling Matt about your visit with Mr. Braunstein and you put yourself in danger. You knew you were wrong because you never told Matt.  Can Ijust say that I loved Matt going off on the teacher and the prinhcpal.  That was awesome!!  You made my morning!



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Thanks for reading!  They're both growing in this process 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter 18

O M G! Those two... DEAD.



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Haha!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 15

Lol love this story

Reviewer: blackpanthershay Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 08:37 am

Title: Chapter 17

Finish.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 26 2015 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 17

They bicker like a married couple without the benefits. I think Shyla is attracted to Matt. I wonder why she didn't share her info about her visit to the jeweler after she found out he was killed?  Seems things are about to get turned up!  Update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2015 05:46 pm

Title: Chapter 17

 

 

       Hope to be getting an update sooner rather than later.... Happy Holiday..

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2015 04:00 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Can I just say how much I friggin love this story. It's so funny and I can't wait for the next chapters so hurry up! 

Reviewer: allimetayer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 17

This had me cackling. Matt is such a dope. Love it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 17

Matt Is acting like a big kid in the store. Matt made a rookie mistake leaving a toddler alone to their own devices, dumb rookie move. Girl... you brought back a flashback of when our triplets were three years old, what Izzy did to that room was hilarious ( I laughed so hard It had my stomach hurting for awhile), Matt being traumatized and shaking that shit was funny ( no pun intended ). What's Matt going to do buy new sheets everytime Izzy and Tristan have a accident ( he better stock up ) I did. I don't know why Lauren Is mad she broke up with him and cheated on him, she can kick rocks for all I care. Matt needs some parenting classes ( leaving a child alone in a big store like target) things happens Matt. They need to bone already, they know they want too. Thanks for the update and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 17

Shyla why are still treating Matt like a leper?  He is attracted to you and your are fighting your attraction to him.  Stop it please!! I can't stand Lauren, why did you have bring her back into the story?  Thank you for updating!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 17

I have a feeling Matt is going to get his pride trampled (and probably work my last nerve) with this need for Shyla to see him as a man and not a buddy, lol.

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 17

lol..great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2015 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 16

loving it! Can't wait for the update

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2015 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait for her to come home & Matt to bust her. She shouldn't never have kept him in the dark about the jewelry store to begin with. That wasn't fair.Matt needs to put his mother in her place she keeps stepping over board that's why his brother didn't make her guardian but him. She has some nerve talking about taking Shyla to court. Lovin this story. Update soon

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2015 09:37 pm

Title: Chapter 16

*gaaaaaaaaassssssph* I wanna know how he going to ask her or react to it...he want that bubbly he want that bubbbbbblyyyyy! Lol be you man be you 

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 16

Oh Matt, ya boys are about to get you in some trouble. And that damn muva of yours is definitely about to get you into a heap of trouble. You need to tell her to STAY. IN. HER. LANE.



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Ha! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2015 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 16

Is it wrong that I am looking forward to the confrontation between Shyla and Matt? He's going to be knocked for six by her reasons for meeting the jeweller... Have I mentioned that I love Shyla?!

 

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Not wrong at all 

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 16

OHHHHHH Lordt!!!! Matt's mom stirring up trouble! The phone convo he had with his boys made me almost die from laughter. I'm loving this change and I like how the danger is slowly leaking in for this couple. Great story telling! 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 16

Shyly is not getting married  and those children will not be raised by the darkside!! I still find Shyly annoying however!



Author's Response:

Ha! The dark side. 

 

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 16

First off don't hate on the "Princess and the frog" I love that movie. Second I don't think Shyla should get involved with the diamond situation because the same thing that happen to Ollie and Xam could happen to her, Matt and the kids. It's funny to see Matt's ego getting hurt, play that game Shyla and make him come crawling to you. I always say not everyone is going to like you and who cares as long as you are true to yourself no one else matters. Matt's mom is all in Shyla's kool-aid and she don't even know the flavor, this women needs to get a life. Thanks for the update it was worth the wait.



Author's Response:

I was waiting for controversy to brew over inflammatory comments about 'princess and the frog.' :)

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Happy Thanksgiving!!!  I can't wait for Matt to try that stuff on Shyla, lol. I think Shyla has already noticed Matt, but is fighting her attraction hard. More please.



Author's Response:

Happy thanksgiving! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 16

wow..they are all crazy nice..great update



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

 

 

UPDATES, UPDATES,  PLEASE!!!!

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Gosh, the end of this had me dying!!!! So funny! Let him go to the salon! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 15

No Shyla didn't breakout singing "Rainbow Connections" I love that song and so do my kids even though they are 16 now, everyone loves Kermit the frog. I'm glad Shyla was able to calm Matt down sometimes you need someone to talk to who is not judgemental or just being nosy but someone who really cares about your well- being. Girl my favorite break-up song was "Let's wait awhile" by Janet Jackson. When Shyla took Matt to the hair store that was hilarious!, no! not the Venus and Serena beads. I know Matt did not asked that lady was she getting a lace front wig, that was so funny to me. Shyla please don't take Matt to a black beauty shop asking black women those type of white people questions. I loved this chapter. Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

My break up song is 'Have you Ever' by Brandy. Gets me every time. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 05:06 pm



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